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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Hi Amreen, dear sweetie 🤗

Fine update with very intelligent moves. 👏 The flashback was much needed to know Raghav's dedication but the outcome is so harsh that his own kids and 13 more places are in danger.

Watching the kids with your pen made my eyes wet as well as red. I'm so angry with the cruel ppl who have no hearts to mankind and maintains the heart for religion.

Loved to see Raghav preparing paneer tikka, yummy wala 😛 Though i love bharta, but PT is all the above in the delicacies 😉

Lovely remembering of the good days, but gloom is bounced back and tears are unstoppable. The decoding is interesting and very cautious. Liked to see the parents keeping their cool amidst the tension and gloom.

The couple helping and understanding each other is so obvious in this need of the hour. Loved to watch it from the hubby's and wife's heart!!!❤️

Alipur can be the clue to their destination. And this is what i've grab from the last lines. Khabri indeed will help them out and Swati's new hint has boost Raghav fully. BTw, i loved them both winking at each other at the times of tears and tensions. The chemistry between the two has emerged out so beautifully. ⭐️

Will wait for Trisha's dangerous guise and Raghav in disguise. 😳

Luv ya Amreen, ❤️🤗 next time pls do send the link individually.

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Checked!!
Thanks for the solution!! 😊

You are most welcome... but have you applied the solution... ??/ 😳

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Nice chapter Amreen.. ⭐️👏

Came to know the hijack that was averted by Raghav.. n the result is his own kids are kidnapped... ! Merciless ppl... 😡

Nice description of a hubby takiing care of his wife... n relieving himself of the dna test getting failed.. ! Feeding a wife is a treat but to a crying wife... its like crying in heart n feeding.. !

Loved the past days of Raghav's family... n Trisha as usual in a bossy way but tamed by Raghav once again ... as usual... 😉

Danger to hai... But when Raghav is there no danger or so can be a tension in any ways .. ! The code is full of clues n i can see the Black as the end of the search.. ! Wud like the decoding of BLACK in the next... !

Nice to see you researching the Delhi n its outskirts... ! You have worked upon it.. good.. !👏👏

Now as they have reached the Alipur n the new path is so clear to them... i so wish the poor n cute n innocent kids are found safely ... !

Rishabh the big bro looked so mature wiping n relieving Reha... Cute n very sensitive... !

Trisha kya.. any mother will become dangerous for the ppl behind her kids' distress... ! Wud love to watch it ... ! Interestingly Raghav will have to disguise himself n reach the culprits as one of them... or is it like... Releasing the culprits n then stalking them in disguise.. ??/ 😳

Waiting eagerly for the dhishoom dhishoom n the happy family together again... !

God bless you for this fab update... ! Hey dear... you can write the scripts ... try them... SK retweets you... you can give him your stories... i am sure he wont be left unimpressed... 😳

⭐️👏

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Ani09

@Ani09

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Amreen,

Dear we are eagerly waiting for last part and you are taking test of our patience. please amreen post the last part. 😳

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

NOTE :

I am extremely sorry people.. I wasn't active here since long... actually I wasn't very active on Internet since a fortnight or so...
As a few people here know that my grandma passed away on the night of 21st...
She had a heart attack n we took her to the hospital... she was extremely serious n was admitted... she got a lot of weight loss n weakness, nausea, slowly she stopped talking, eating n then went into coma... she was conscious again on 20th March n talked a bit n smiled n blessed us... n then passed away the next day...
Was very disturbed so kept away from everything...
Feeling a lil better...
But still need time to update this... or anything else... my coachings have started so am a lil busy there too...
Hope u all understand n support me...
Loves
Amreen

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Saw U much active at EDKV forum, in the recent days too.

Feeling sorry for U

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: babita..
Saw U much active at EDKV forum, in the recent days too.
Feeling sorry for U

Yeah... was coming sometimes to congrats them on the regular new ATs... they were all PMing me to come and talk to them... so did sometimes... So as not to hurt them... not much...!!