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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Guys Amreen has told me today thay she will come back here soon .she's just a little busy


Yeh ..Ammu s quite busy with her studies...she said that she'll update the last part soon... The part s already Ready.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Missing you ammu. Pls come back soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
NOTE

First of all I am very very very sorry for being absolutely gayab. Totally packed and hence am inactive everywhere other than Twitter.
Done with 12th results with 80. 6% marks and cracked medicine but for a dental college because of the NEET drama these ppl have created... so I am repeating for MBBS. So was truly jammed.

Anyways about the end of black end.. well its not the end.. not so soon!! 😛

So here I am with a teaser of the chapter 3 and yes this has been transformed to a SS as I have had ample requests of adding scenes and also i have myself added a few interesting sequences to this story. This one has turned out to be one of my favourite works of mine and I am loving it... 😳
So hope u all will welcome me back with open arms again and shower me with the same amount of love. 😊
And hope there is no issue by converting it into a SS!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
TEASER FOR CHAPTER 3 (A long one coz as compensation coz I was disappeared since long) 😉


Raghav took a seat on the adjacent couch and they all sat quiet basically behaving like strangers. They were one for a mission but they won't talk to each other muvh except about their plotting. It was the thumb rule and Raghav knew it. Establishing friendly connections in their world was a taboo. Raghav very much intentionally dropped the table weight off the table extracting their attention and mumbling a sorry he very slowly bent down to pick it. In the process he touched the back of his right palm on the back of the laptop placed on the table and kept his hand still to send the data signals to Swati who was downstairs, not far away. Very slowly picking and then keeping it back on the table Raghav smiled at Zunaid while his hand still in contact with the chassis.

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"Calm down sweetie... just relax.. see its about to come out..."


"Don't you dare ask me to calm down at this moment... its all because of you Raghav... itna dard sirf tumhari wajah se ho raha hai..." Trisha cried in a loud voice as Raghav tried to relax his heavily pregnant wife, who happened to be in labour past 29 hours. He looked at the doctor with an embarrassed face while she smiled and asked Trisha to push one last time. Trisha put all her life in that one push while her palm squeezed Raghav's palm so hard with her bails digging into his skin causing his knuckles to bleed a couple of drops. A blood curling scream left her mouth as the baby came out of her completely, telling everyone of its arrival by a loud wail.


So how was that... 😳
Full chapter coming tomorrow morning.. editing left!! This time pakka wala promise 🤣
Hope you guys liked it... comments please!! 😊
And yeah... lots of love ❤️
Amreen
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yippee my favorite writer amreen is back
Edited by Desaitara1234 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Will reply to all of you asap!!!!
Plz don't kill me!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

Yippee my favorite writer amreen is back



Hahaha ty hon ❤️
Comment edit kyu kiya 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Amreen...



Hahaha ty hon ❤️
Comment edit kyu kiya 😉

what happened did I do anything wrong 😭. Sorry if u felt bad
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

what happened did I do anything wrong 😭. Sorry if u felt bad



Are!! When did I say u did or said something wrong... chill yaar... I just asked coz u edited that "my ammu comment" to "favourite writer amreen" na.. nothing else!!
U liked the teaser and the story so far???
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Amreen...



Are!! When did I say u did or said something wrong... chill yaar... I just asked coz u edited that "my ammu comment" to "favourite writer amreen" na.. nothing else!!
U liked the teaser and the story so far???

I thought I am quite new here so u won't like calling u ammu so I edited but Is it ok if I call u ammu

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