New OS : Dhoop Ke Makaan Sa... updated on page 5! - Page 5

Originally posted by: indu6789

Loved it..well done.the way u hv connected it with the Gary case..

I loved the flight ..how Trisha sleeps on Raghav's shoulder..n the way he pushes her hair!!

Gr8 feel..keep writing..

Thank u indu aunty... really I wanted that they show me scene of them going to Goa or at least in the hotel... But they didn't so I did... 😊
Thanks a lot for ur sweet words... will surely keep writing on these two... can't resist... 😉 😳

Originally posted by: radianteyes.

I really liked how u incorporated I mean added the whole scene into the very case and getting in touch with the previous cases too
As said I love your writing style , but sometimes u see I cannot get out of trisha's strong character and so its like I feel she should be a little different .
Beautiful story keep going
And eagerly waiting for the next fiction

Hey dear... what's ur name yaar... and thanks a lot for ur warm words... I really wanted to extend that scene... so u wrote this... Thank u for loving my writing style...
Yeah... I know Trisha is a strong and independent character but Pyaar yo achhe achho ko deewana bana deta hai... toh Trisha ji kya cheez hai...
And secondly as my previous OS showed her like a girl in love... here it was a strong character on her work with her colleague and thoda bohot hasi Mazak, flirting and blush you sab karte hai... but thanks again for appreciations
loves
Amreen

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Best part about this OS: even while writing romance, the basic background (of being professional CBI officers) is not being diluted anywhere.

Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks a lot Sagi... this is a one part story dear... 😊

Originally posted by: -Amri-

Awesome, loved it Amreen!

Thank you Amri...

Originally posted by: babita..

Lovely banner Amreen👏👏

Thanks di... my first banner ever... only for RaTri... A

Originally posted by: babita..

Very nice and lovely OS Amreen, loved it dearie👏👏

Krikk rejected !!! This said all for Trisha and she started find out the real Raghv from the start ! Loved this scene that lead to many unfolded expression later !

What she is trying to find out makes her blush and telling him that she will from the next time let her mom ask you about the alliance. I loved this frankness and friendship, becos with this scene they moved on in a beautiful feeling that they have never felt before. Awesome !! I wish the " ek aur option " would have come into being and we could witness it😳😉Tell me na Amreen, it was him. It was him na😳

I loved this line ::<font color="#cc33cc">Anticipating his answer her heart skipped many beats and Raghav passed on an intense look to her that lasted only for a second</font>

Superbly fabulous !😊

The hungry tummies scene is very cute and full of observations. Where Raghav observed Trisha getting more frank, Trisha noticed him eating like a kid. The more they are talking and not talking, the more they are spreading their own feelings to each other !

Hugging Neha, and making Trisha not only jealous, but also to think of what their relation stands for. An arm brushing her shoulder makes Raghav a bit sensitive to it and he changed the seat with her. The protection and belonging has stated taking a place in their lives.

Trisha, landing on his shoulder to sleep, and Raghav removing her hair from her face -- The first touch ever, the first feeling ever, the first sweetness has embraced them, with a life ahead to solve many a cases, and telling the world that someone special is found by both of them !

Amreen, thanks a tonne dearie for this sweet and a cute story. Though it's only one part, i loved it as an initial stage of RaTri and their coming closer to each other. Loves❤️

As u have asked, me 22 of age, and I love to see U applying " Loves❤️" like me, that gives a lovely feeling, thanx dearie🤗Will wait for more stories from U.

Thanks a million di... Obviously it was him... 😉 😳
No doubt... 😳
Will come back soon with a detailed reply... thanks for the lovely review...

P.S. : And yeah... I actually love the way u put "loves ❤️ " at the end of each of ur reply... looks sweet... so even I started that... 😃

So Ciao
Loves ❤️
Amreen 😉

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Thank you so much manaal... have u started to watch Agent Raghav now...

to be honest no🤪 coz i don't have that channel on my tv😆😆
& actually i love reading ur stories😳 they R much better than any ongoing story or track😊
just love ur writing..

Hi ammu
thanks a lot for this wonderful os really liked it a lot .The ladka dikhane wala scene where raghav said rejected and Trisha said ok fine that scene was sooo awesome. It really felt trisha Was really waiting for raghav to reject that guy .thanks for continuing form that scene. Really would have loved to see that in the serial too.so raghav kept waiting for trisha on the airport and when trisha came late tried to compare her with other girls that scene was Awesome ammu.
Trishas dialogue" what do you think raghav main ladki nahi ho kya that was sooo awesome. and then raghav saying he thought she was not Like other girls soo cute that was .The restaurant scene where trisha compared raghav with a child was soo nice and the tha face pochne wala scene was sooo...I was like really imagining that .Liked Trishas jealously when she saw raghav with neha...and neha thought that trisha is raghav girl friend ...Liked how raghav saved trisha immediately . The flight was sooo cute Trisha sleeping on Raghavs shoulder sooo romantic .really liked to so see both of them jealous.i have also madly fallen for RaTri. thanks a lot for the new os