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Posted: 9 years ago
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Since I didn't see an actual review thread, I posted one. 😉


Positives:
  1. Raghav deducing how Vishal got kidnapped. That was well-done, but I can't believe that Trisha or Gauri didn't think of at least some of the things.
  2. The live feed. I must hand it to this kidnapper. He's smart.
  3. The way Raghav talked to Vishal's father was praiseworthy. He was respectful, but also let him know that he wasn't one to make things sound good if they weren't.
  4. Rajbir dealing with Rawat. Oh man I loved it! For the first time Rajbir had a character and a role!
  5. Gauri at her tech best. She did a great job in that. Especially the way she explained to Raghav what was happening.
  6. The car chase! Yes! Good going Rajbir and Bikram and thank you CVs.
  7. The grey-shaded characters. I loved how they represented the various characters from Vishal to Rawat to the CM to that inspector.
  8. Woah! Vishal was a killer? Dang that was totally unexpected.

Negatives:

  1. The beginning was reminiscent of several CID episodes. Not to mention a CP episode and another episode in another Indian crime show (I can't remember which one). The body getting stuck easily in a net.
  2. BTW they don't really pay much attention to forensics do they? Even if a body is underwater for just a few hours there is evidence of bloating, decomposition, and much more. Yet here the body was absolutely pristine.
  3. The guy's phone lands on the asphalt and there is no sound of glass breaking?!! What type of phone is this? My friend dropped her phone like that once and the glass shattered and her phone was gone. Some realism please CVs.
  4. Spending so much time on the intro? Really?!! Please pick up the pace!
  5. Again Mumbai?!! Are you freaking kidding? Can't you just make these guys Mumbai CBI? Or you could have easily made it some Home Minister from Delhi.
  6. Burying someone alive has gotten old so now we're going to drown people alive. By the way this style has been used in CSI, CID, Shapath, and PI (in that order in the shows I've watched). Oh and of course there has to be a video footage to show the entire proceedings to make the people on the other end realize how helpless they are.
  7. Why was Raghav the one to meet the CM? I thought Trisha headed the team.
  8. The shirt at Nitin's house. Okay so before opening the curtain there is no wind and then when they open the curtain there's wind. Don't mind huh, but I notice little basics especially when they don't know how to show Trisha holding a gun and clearing the room. That looked so novice for someone whose supposed to be the boss. Aahana looked so uncomfortable holding the gun.
  9. An obvious culprit. I kind of suspected Saxena, but not for the reason that was revealed. That was a surprise.
  10. Church bells. Really? It took them until 6 to hear the bells? If I'm not mistaken church bells ring every hour. So why wait until 6 PM?
  11. The time lapse. In the beginning the kidnapper said that Vishal would drown in 9 hours. Raghav said Vishal was put in the glass box at about 12:30. Which means technically the water would reach Vishal's face at 9:30 drowning him. Yet at 6 PM the water is at Vishal's face and we're having a last minute rescue. Say what?!!
  12. The agents aren't wet? When they took Vishal out they should have been wet at least in the legs. The water would have come rushing out and even when they took Vishal out they would have been slightly wet as well from the arms and torso. But there was not an inch of water on them. Say what again?!!
  13. Vishal didn't know that a phone could be traced? I'm sorry but given the spate of crime shows anyone who watches a crime show knows this. It's a basic thing that even the stupidest of criminals would know.
  14. That victory walk! Dammit to hell! CVs get rid of it. Ban it. Lock it in a can, throw the key away, throw the can down a well, and fill the well up. Please!!!

Overall I'm not impressed. I truly expected better from a Saturday episode. Now let's see what Sunday holds.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice analysis shreya
agreed with you not an impressive episode...It's remind me Arjun's episode where chief got kidnapped and his life is depend on you tube views...

same writer hone ka nuksan hai syad... apne likhe huye episode ko modified kr kr ke raghav me dikha rhe hai... but modified krne k chakker me bahut se loop holes chod rhe hai...

here is my review on episode
spending so much time on intro...again mumbai case 😲 arre team ko mumbai hi shift kr do iss se to...sab kuch raghav ne hi kia trisha aur gauri ko bhi thode dialogue milne chahiye the...I mean kam se kam trisha ko bhi...agar wo boss hoke in choti choti baaton k liye raghav k batane ka wait karegi to wo boss kaise ban gyi

and really wo scene bada ajeeb tha k raghav akele hi minister se milne gya... I mean trisha boss hai...aur case bhi sensitive...aur upper se order bhi hai...trisha ka wahaan naa hona banta tha...

Rajbir ka scene rawat k sath 😆😆😆 Pehli baar rajbir se koi kaam proper karwaya hai...aur rajbir ne mast acting ki scene me...😆😆😆

Mujhe ek cheez ajib lgi episode me CBI team me kisi k bhi chehre pr tension nhi dikhi agar vishal mar gya to???? sab aram se apna kam kr rhe the...

and jab trisha aur raghav nitin k ghar gye I mean raghav ko amarta ka vardan mila hai kya trisha k hath me gun aur raghav khali hath wow... wo to ye soch kr gye the naa k nitin ne hi kia hoga...to usne apna back up plan bhi taiyar kia ho skta hai...

and Nitin ka aur culprit ka(forget his name jisne vishal ko kidnap kia tha) relationship writing pad se guess kia wow...raghav to antaryami hai...jab nitin scene me aaya team ko tabhi nitin k bare me pta karte dikhana chahiye tha

full episode was copied from arjun usme bhi beta apne baap ki maut ka badla lene k liye karta hai...aur yahaan bhi...yahan bas end me thode se changes krke vishal ko nitin ka khuni dikha dia hai...

very very much disappointed...Mujhe lga tha anshul aur deb likh rhe hai to achcha likhenge but wo log arjun k episodes hi modified kr kr ke raghav me dal rhe hai

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Didn't see the episode. Sister's birthday party...lagta hain I didn't miss much!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You said it all, Shreya!

Kudos on an awesome review.

Some of the glitches I immediately gleaned were- how the body wasn't bloated in spite of the person drowning, Raghav taking over the leadership, the way none of the agents appeared wet after rescuing the boy...etc,.

What irked me in particular was that Raghav does the mental acuity thing already, and on top of it he does the chase too? Okay, he is a qualified agent who can do that, but what about Trisha then? Even Gauri had a substantial role to play in yesterday's proceedings, but not Trisha. Glad to see they're developing Gauri and Rajbeer, but they really need to make up their minds about Trisha and her role in the team. At least make her do the leadership stuff right!


IMO even Bikram gets to exhibit his prowess in some episodes, but I can't think of an instance where Trisha has done anything substantial. This is very disappointing, considering that the character has potential, and Aahana is doing a good job portraying the character. This, to me, stands as one of the biggest blunders of the show and needs to be corrected ASAP.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Overall a 4 or 5 out of 10?

That's my rating. Some parts were very good, but the negatives overshadowed the positives. I was irked in particular by the fact that Trisha is increasingly looking like a flowerpot and is not made to guess even the tiniest of things. Not to mention, how Raghav usurped the leadership role as well!

I like the guy, he's awesome, but seriously, do you have to show that at the cost of Trisha looking inane? For eg, Mentalist's Lisbon was a firecracker, who knew to be both diplomatic and assertive, and she had a cool way of tackling suspects, like the one in the second episode of season 1.

I expected better of a Sat episode. Today's has all the potential to be a horrendous one. I hate it when they mix up the genres- mystery and the macabre.

The writer for Sunday seems to have a penchant for this- like the Hound of Baskervilles remake, and the dhongi baba and the jail wala epi...thumbs down for Sunday episodes!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Even I was shocked that there were such a silly bloopers.. One was church bell and second was when they broke that glass tub n they didn't get wet... N so many more.
And CBI don't have any proper forensic team like Special Squad(on star one). I don't know if I m missing sumthing it is just my third episode of AR.. Make me correct if they have.

Only SK is the savior of the y'day's episode otherwise it was repeated one.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chulbuli_Annu

Nice analysis shreya

agreed with you not an impressive episode...It's remind me Arjun's episode where chief got kidnapped and his life is depend on you tube views... It keeps making me just want to go back and watch Arjun so I can see what other episodes they do that too. 😆

same writer hone ka nuksan hai syad... apne likhe huye episode ko modified kr kr ke raghav me dikha rhe hai... but modified krne k chakker me bahut se loop holes chod rhe hai...


and really wo scene bada ajeeb tha k raghav akele hi minister se milne gya... I mean trisha boss hai...aur case bhi sensitive...aur upper se order bhi hai...trisha ka wahaan naa hona banta tha... Absolutely! What the heck man she's the boss!

Rajbir ka scene rawat k sath 😆😆😆 Pehli baar rajbir se koi kaam proper karwaya hai...aur rajbir ne mast acting ki scene me...😆😆😆 I loved it! Ab agar Bikram bhi involve hota toh aur bhi mast hota. 😆

Mujhe ek cheez ajib lgi episode me CBI team me kisi k bhi chehre pr tension nhi dikhi agar vishal mar gya to???? sab aram se apna kam kr rhe the...Haan yeh bhi hai. Yeh toh maine note hi nahi kiya.

and jab trisha aur raghav nitin k ghar gye I mean raghav ko amarta ka vardan mila hai kya trisha k hath me gun aur raghav khali hath wow... wo to ye soch kr gye the naa k nitin ne hi kia hoga...to usne apna back up plan bhi taiyar kia ho skta hai...Actually I think that's because Raghav ek psychiatrist hai. Woh actual agent nahi hai. Toh rules ke hisaab se usse gun nahi de sakte hain.

and Nitin ka aur culprit ka(forget his name jisne vishal ko kidnap kia tha) relationship writing pad se guess kia wow...raghav to antaryami hai...jab nitin scene me aaya team ko tabhi nitin k bare me pta karte dikhana chahiye tha I know right? It took a writing pad to get the relationships set out! One simple look at a birth certificate would have done that as well.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amruta Trisha is so much more laidback and not there than Lisbon. Lisbon had a character sketch of her own. She had her own screen presence. Even if the writers didn't give it to her, she was there. Trisha is just not there. There are scenes where Trisha may be standing back (like in the climax) and I'll forget she's there. In the Mentalist, Lisbon was there even if she was just smiling at the squirming culprit. In CID forum we have a term for a couple of people who pretty much stand in the background: lampposts. Trisha is exactly that. A lamppost.

Oh right I forgot the rating. 😆 Honestly I think this episode deserves nothing more than a 1.5 out of 5 or if I'm feeling particularly nice a 2 out of 5.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aalina.

Even I was shocked that there were such a silly bloopers.. One was church bell and second was when they broke that glass tub n they didn't get wet... N so many more.

And CBI don't have any proper forensic team like Special Squad(on star one). I don't know if I m missing sumthing it is just my third episode of AR.. Make me correct if they have.

Only SK is the savior of the y'day's episode otherwise it was repeated one.



Nope they don't have a forensics team. Or at least they haven't shown one. The only person they show is Dr. Aarti, the forensics doctor, who has a knack of appearing before the team even if they supposedly left at the same time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CT_Shreya

Amruta Trisha is so much more laidback and not there than Lisbon. Lisbon had a character sketch of her own. She had her own screen presence. Even if the writers didn't give it to her, she was there. Trisha is just not there. There are scenes where Trisha may be standing back (like in the climax) and I'll forget she's there. In the Mentalist, Lisbon was there even if she was just smiling at the squirming culprit. In CID forum we have a term for a couple of people who pretty much stand in the background: lampposts. Trisha is exactly that. A lamppost.

Oh right I forgot the rating. 😆 Honestly I think this episode deserves nothing more than a 1.5 out of 5 or if I'm feeling particularly nice a 2 out of 5.


Yes, the characterization is completely non-existent. You need to flesh out the characters more- the idiosyncrasies, their weaknesses, their talents, their distinguishing traits- like for instance, Lisbon had a proper back story, an alcoholic dad and an abusive childhood.

They need to make Trisha a strong character, at least show her clashing with Raghav over rules. Right now she is resembling a lamppost, as you said. Very sad. I guess our guys cannot write a female character properly at all.

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