A new Pinky! - OS - Realisation...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Friends,
I have decided to finally write a OS on Pinky...

Hope you all enjoy it...

Here I go...It is my first attempt so I need all the encouragement to come up with more scenes on all other characters😊


Babloo has been wondering about his own behaviour of late as he is sitting on his writing table. He thinks, "Pinky is a new bride and has just entered our home. I think I need to give her not just the support but also some more time of mine. After all she has sacrificed her life for my Sonu and agreed to marry me."

Pinky enters right then and is fuming as she just got to know that Krishna may be giving her IAS without the knowledge of the people at home. She turns around to see Bablooji who also turns around at the same time. He looks at her but this time he sees in her a beautiful girl. A young girl who has a dream of being a great wife and mother. A young lady who wants to handle office and home to perfection. A young bride who probably is looking for that affection which only he could give her. He smiles at her which instantly brings a sweet smile on her face too. Babloo gets up from his seat and comes towards Pinky. This somewhat surprises Pinky. She smiles looking at Babloo for a second and then turning her gaze towards the other side avoiding him. Babloo starts the talk. He says, "Pinky, I think I have been unfair to you. I should not have behaved the way I did on the first day of our wedding. Please forgive me." Pinky is shocked. This time she can actually see that Babloo means what he says. Pinky says, "Bablooji'..". He stops her from uttering anything further by placing his palm over her lips. "Shshsh'I think we need to spend some time together and I have decided to take leave from my Shiksha Niketan. Now that Krishna is here and at home, Sonu will be taken care of. Maa is also here to help her out. Will you be okay for a short outing with me for a few days?" Pinky cannot believe that it was indeed Bablooji saying all this. She says, " Yes''.." She is unable to say much and starts thinking on how foolish she had been in wasting her time on cornering Krishna and trying to get her into trouble instead of reading her husband and his mind. She feels blessed that she accepted to marry Babloo as he was so understanding. She walks away slowly out of the room only to turn back and smile at Babloo who watches her with a smile.

She goes straight to Krishna and stops at her room. She knocks and Pintu comes to the door. He is shocked to see Pinky bhabhi there with her eyes looking down. He wonders what she has planned this time. She says, "Devarji, Is Krishna free right now? I wanted to talk to her." Pintu senses something different from normal and says, "Yes'you can go in." Krishna sees Pinky and gets up from her bed. Pinky has tears in her eyes. Krishna can't bear it anymore. She asks her, "What happened, Pinky?" Pinky just hugs Krishna and says, "I am sorry Krishna. I have been mean and rude to you. I am feeling bad about it and thought I should apologise." Pintu was listening to this conversation from outside. He goes to meet Babloo and tells him of what he saw in his room. Babloo tells Pintu, "Pintu, I am going for a short break with your bhabhi. We need to spend some time by ourselves. Will you take care of''." Pintu immediately says, "Of course bhaiyya,...Don't worry about Sonu. Do you want to me to help you plan your holiday?" Pintu has a naughty look as Babloo smiles at Pintu. They both share a warm hug.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pinky's scene posted...
It would be great to see something like this...something positive...😊
Hope you all enjoy reading it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Shanti it is indeed beautiful scene just loved it hope it happens😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prishna_DBPS

Wow Shanti it is indeed beautiful scene just loved it hope it happens😳


Thanks Rachna...

We have to give ideas to the creatives now...and also make ourselves happy with such stuff!

and I loved your FF Chapter One too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice your a great writer do write on Prishna :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: RagvirFan123

Nice your a great writer do write on Prishna :D


Thanks - I thought so many write on them...

but yes soon you will see one on Pintuji for sure...😛
I have already got a wonderful idea...which will take all of you by surprise!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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An Amazing OS the concept is different and its refreshing to read on the other characters , I hope cvs stalk your OS maybe then they can get some ideas
Its really awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

An Amazing OS the concept is different and its refreshing to read on the other characters , I hope cvs stalk your OS maybe then they can get some ideas

Its really awesome


Oh really...I got a bit nervous...but the surprise bit awaits you all...maybe in a couple of days...on Pintuji!

And yes - thanks!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you...😃

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