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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

#10

Sun mere yaar

natkhatt lal

kare radha tera injejar

aa jana jab ghadi me baje char

varna maar maar maar

next simi adds

kab aaoge mere yaar

chhed diye hai tumne dhadkan ke taar

aa jao bas is baar

ab ho nahi raha intejar

jiya ho raha hai bekraar

karne chaah raha hai ikraar

karti hun mai tumse pyar

abhi replies

jeena tumhare bina hua duswar

abhi aa rahun hun mere yaar

kar lo mujhpe aitbaar

mai tumhara hun dildar

karta hun tumse mai bhi pyar

tum ho meri sarkar

when they meet abhi

mai aa gaya meri sarkar

karta hun mai ikraar

ho gaya hai mujhe tumse pyar

kya kaheti ho dildar

simi

haan karti hun tumse mai bhi pyar

ab jab ankhe huyi hai char

ho gayi mai to sharmsar

tham lo mujhe mere dildar

chhupalo bahon me mere yaar

karlo pyar ki baate do char

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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

#11 Dars diwani Radha Rani

kal thi jo ek premdiwani

bani aaj hai darshdiwani

bhar ke ankho me pani

na kar tu mujh se beimani

kab aaoge natkhat lal

kar na poun ab aur intejar

karni hai baate prem ki do char

sun ne hai lamhe tumse hazar

ab na karungi shikwe bar bar

samajh payi hu ab mai tera pyar

ab chahe chhodna pade ghar baar

kadam picche na hatenge ek bar

tum base ho dil jigar me mere yaar

chaho to tukde kar ke dekh lo hazar

bas aa jao mere yaar

ab sukh rahe hai mere pran

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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

#12 sun o meri premdiwani

ab pass aaja meri premdiwani

ban jaa ab toh tu sayani

na ab tu la ankonke me pani he begs

ab mushkura de meri Radharani

kya kar sakta hun kabhii tujhse beimani

tu mera dil jigar mere jani

mujhe khush khabari hai tujhe sunani

kar ke aa raha hun kam jordar

thodi der bas kar intejar

aayegi khush kahabri mere yaar

aab pass to aja dildar

tujhe chhune ko dil hai bekraar

ab ho na raha mujh se bhi intejaar

tere papaji se jakar karna hai muje ikraar

aapki beti ka hath dedo muje ek baar

vaade nibhounga mai sau sau bar

khushiyna dunga sari jiski woh hai haqdar

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Shankar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Great collections fi. really enjoyed them.

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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

I wrote this one over 3 years ago. But recently in KB episode when abhi mentioned similar tilte chhilke ki kahani simi ki jubani which is similar to my this poem posted here on IF in another section. I decided to post it here since it relates to simi's life .

Poem #13

Tinke ki Kahani Tinke ki Jubani

Main Hoon chhota sa ek tinka (grass clipping)

Jameen pe mujhe giraya hai

Hawaone mujhe udaya hai

kisiki ankho ne mujhe samaya hai

Inhi ankho ko maine rulaya hai

Phunk phunk ke mujhe nikala hai

Main hoon chhota sa ek tinka

Jameen pe mujhe phir giraya hai

Pairo ne mujhe kuchala hai

Pani ne mujhe phir ugaya hai

Mali (gardner) ne mujhe phir kata hai

Main hoon chhota sa ek tinka

Hawaone phir mujhe udaya hai

It is pretty much relate to any woman. It relates lot more to Simi. in KB. Like the way simi was treated in her house with the line pairo ne mujhe kuchla hai.

Mali ne mujhe phir se kata hai manju cuts her relationship with simi and asks her not to return to KB. manju here a is mali .

Hawa one phir mujhe udaya hai she was again forced out of Tarnejas. So here simi is a tinka

Kisiki ankhone mujhe samaya hai.

Inhi ankho ko maine rulaya hai.

this will apply to Simi and RS. RS loving simi so much and simi not listening to him and ready to marry Nakul making him cry.. it also applies to abhi and simi. as abhi loved her so much and she makes him cry again and again.

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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Poem #14

Simi ki Prem Kahani

Ek pal thi aisi ayi
Jab unse hatheli milayi ( in the temple first time)

mai unke pichhe bhagi

par kuchh bhi samaj na payi

phir baar baar unse takrayi

phir bhi pahechan na payi

Phir niyati ne madad karayi
Usne meri jaan bachayi

apne hi ghar mai mulaqat karvayi

mai phir se aaj hun chonki

phir isne meri shaadi tudvayi ( Simi's marriage with RB)

pata bhi na chala kab mai ho gayi unki

Mai to ho gayi khud se begani

Yeh soch ke mai sharmai
Phir raat ko neend na ayi

kyon dil mera jor se dhadka
Kyon hota hai ek dard sa
Kyon chain gaya mere manka
Kyon ankhose sawan barsa
Kyon dil ka chaman yun maheka

Koi neend meri lautado
Koi chain mera ab lado
Koi dard se yeh chhudwado
Koi iski dava karvado
Kya pyar yeh hai samaja do

Ankhe unke daras ko tarse (The day they confessed their love)
Dil baar bar yun chahe
Hum aapke paas aa jaye
Ab sharm hume hai roke
Kaash aap hi aa jaye

Phir ghadi ye aisi ayi (when abhi comes to her house after confession)
Phir aapne aankh milayi
Phir aapne neend churayi
Phir aapne chain churaya
Jab aapne pyar jataya

Hume apni dulhan banaya
Jab aapne ghunghat uthaya
Phir Dil joro se dhadka
Jab aappne bahonme samaya
Jab aapne hothose lagaya

Tab sharm hume hai ayi
Tab Dil ka chaman hai maheka
Tab chain hume hai aya
Tab neend hume hai ayi
Ek raat hai aisi ayi

Enjoy this safar of simbhi from the day they t met to their milan ki raat.😊 i hope at least they show them kissing.properly.

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RoyalT

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Bravo Ramas. Keep up the good work. 😃😃

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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

#15 simi meri jaan mera jahan

simi tu meri jaan hai

tu mera jahan hai

tu meri manzil hai

tu meri sakhi hai

tune kaise maan liya

tera pati is raat me tujhe akela chhod jayega

mai humsafar hun tumhara

tera sath hamesh nibhaonga

chahe sahera ho ya registan

chahe khushi ho ya gham

tera piccha kabhi na chhoduga

chahe maut bhi saanme aa jaye

mai use bhi rok lunga

kyun ki meri simi udas hai

aur use meri jaroorat hai

bhale tune mera haath chhod diya

mai apan pati dharm kabhi na bhununga

tu apni har takleef me tere pyar ko

tere pati ko tere hamdam ko

hamesha apne saath apne pass payegi

mai tera saya hun aur tu mera

ek din tere dil me mai ya jajba

jaroor jagounga tab tak

mai kbhi chain se nahi baithunga

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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

#16 Dilbar bhi tum mehboob bhi tum

Abhi to simi

Dost bhi tum humdum bhi tum

Mehboob bhi tum jane bahar bhi tum

Dhadkan bhi tum jeene ki vajah bhi tum

Pyas bhi tum madira bhi tum

Dard bhi tum dawa bhi tum

Manzil bhi tum humsafar bhi tum

Manzhi bhi tum kinara bhi tum

Aa jao meri bahome

Bahut ho gaya hai ab intejaar

Aao aake kar le ek duje se pyar

Aur karle ankhe char

mai hun tumhara tum meri diladar

phir hume hai kis baat ka intejar

aao aake jod le dhadkao se dhadakano ke taar

man se to ek ho hi chuke hai

Kyun na jod le badan se badan ke bhi taar

banale haseen aaj ki sham

manale aaj Milan ki woh paheli raat 😊

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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Where is the light?

All KBains want romance

but where is romance

Is it hidden in the KB barsati

or is it behind Nitu's sarcastic arrows

Or is it hidden in Abhi's bedroom in T mansion

What has happened to our favorite couple

One of them has never changed

Thinking she is still the ideal daughter

The one who has to take all the insults

Forgetting she is in process getting

Her beloved insulted again and again

The one who has only given her love

The very unconditional love

That is only seen in the books

While he is remembering every momment

That she is his wife and his duty

To love her and hold her in sickness and health

To wipe her tears when she is crying

To support her when she is falling

To raise her when she has fallen

And will Do anything to make her happy

But does she care to remember all that

She still calls him a child

A very child who has left his home

All his money and powers

All his dignity and self respect

Living as a ghar jamai

To take care of his wife

And a promise to be with her

In any condition be that may

Bring probabely his on death

But does she care

To even thank him once

Or show her appreciation

Where is the old abhi?

And when will we meet new simi as his wife?

And most of all when will we see

Them as real couple in all sense

Be the one that only cares

About each other and be totally in love

Forgetting rest of the world

Surely looking forward to that day

And dreaming about it in the hope

That day comes soon

And that simi calling abhi her man

Who can make most decisions

In their lives and she abides by them

And not call him a child who has

To obey her and follow her holding her pallu

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