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ramas

@ramas

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Posted: 16 years ago

This post is mostly a collection of abhi simi's feelings and other character's as well

#1 Abhi to Simi

Tum Khwab ho ya parchaai ho

jane kis jahan se tum aayi ho

aur kya kya saath layi ho

tum jab jab saamne aati ho

mere hoshkosh udati ho

ankhose mujhe bulati ho

bolise mujhe satati ho

kyun baar baar rulati ho

tum khwab ho ya parchhai ho

jab mithi bani kaheti ho

mere dil ke taar chhed jati ho

jab ankhse ansoo bahati ho

mere dil ko tum rulati ho

jab pyar se tum muskati ho

mere hoshkosh udati ho

phir khwabo me tum aati ho

aur ankhse ozal ho jati ho

Tum khwab ho ya parchhai ho

Tumhe milne ko dil karta hai

tumhe chhune ko man tarsa hai

tumhe paaneki jid woh karta hai

tumhare aane ka intejar karta hai

phir khonese dil darta hai

aur baar baar ye kaheta hai

Tum khawab ho ya parchhai ho

I am starting a poem collection with my first poem regarding Abhi Simi. I wil be posting more as story progresses. You can also post your own creation here 😊

Edited by ramas - 15 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

😍 if only we could hear abhi uttering such romantic dialogues to simi.. i really hope they'll give us abhi-simi fanatics a solid scene between the two on monday!😃

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ramas

@ramas

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jigglypuff726
😍 if only we could hear abhi uttering such romantic dialogues to simi.. i really hope they'll give us abhi-simi fanatics a solid scene between the two on monday!😃

May be simi's beauty will make abhi poet or shayar . I am also looking forward to solid abhi simi love scene or any scene where simi forgets everything including her age. and portrays as lovesick girl.

Edited by ramas - 16 years ago

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Laila Banu

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Posted: 16 years ago

You're very talented. Good work.

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Shankar

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Posted: 16 years ago

I luv your poem di, you really are good. Waiting for more. :)

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Laila Banu

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ramas
May be simi's beauty will make abhi poet or shayar . I am also looking forward to solid abhi simi love scene or any scene where simi forgets everything inckuding her age. and portrays as lovesick girl.

DITTO.