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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

This post is mostly a collection of abhi simi's feelings and other character's as well

#1 Abhi to Simi

Tum Khwab ho ya parchaai ho

jane kis jahan se tum aayi ho

aur kya kya saath layi ho

tum jab jab saamne aati ho

mere hoshkosh udati ho

ankhose mujhe bulati ho

bolise mujhe satati ho

kyun baar baar rulati ho

tum khwab ho ya parchhai ho

jab mithi bani kaheti ho

mere dil ke taar chhed jati ho

jab ankhse ansoo bahati ho

mere dil ko tum rulati ho

jab pyar se tum muskati ho

mere hoshkosh udati ho

phir khwabo me tum aati ho

aur ankhse ozal ho jati ho

Tum khwab ho ya parchhai ho

Tumhe milne ko dil karta hai

tumhe chhune ko man tarsa hai

tumhe paaneki jid woh karta hai

tumhare aane ka intejar karta hai

phir khonese dil darta hai

aur baar baar ye kaheta hai

Tum khawab ho ya parchhai ho

I am starting a poem collection with my first poem regarding Abhi Simi. I wil be posting more as story progresses. You can also post your own creation here 😊

Edited by ramas - 14 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

😍 if only we could hear abhi uttering such romantic dialogues to simi.. i really hope they'll give us abhi-simi fanatics a solid scene between the two on monday!😃

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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jigglypuff726
😍 if only we could hear abhi uttering such romantic dialogues to simi.. i really hope they'll give us abhi-simi fanatics a solid scene between the two on monday!😃

May be simi's beauty will make abhi poet or shayar . I am also looking forward to solid abhi simi love scene or any scene where simi forgets everything including her age. and portrays as lovesick girl.

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Laila Banu

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Posted: 15 years ago

You're very talented. Good work.

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Shankar

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Posted: 15 years ago

I luv your poem di, you really are good. Waiting for more. :)

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Laila Banu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ramas
May be simi's beauty will make abhi poet or shayar . I am also looking forward to solid abhi simi love scene or any scene where simi forgets everything inckuding her age. and portrays as lovesick girl.

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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#2 simi to Abhi

aye nanhese faishte

tu kis jahan se aya

mere apnone mujhe thukraya

tune mujh ko gale lagaya

ho tum bhale hi paraye

kyun lagte ho muje apne

mai ne sudhbudh hai bhulayi

huyi sang tere jab se dosti

tune khub hai dosti nibhayi

todi maut se meri sagayi

Rishta hai tumse do palka

kyon lagata hai janam jaanm ka

lagte bhale ho tum bachche

kaise kaam karte ho itne achche

Aisa jadoo kahanse paya

jisne kar diya muje apne aapse begana

kyon bana diya mujhe diwana

sab kuch lagta hai mujhe anjana

Tum kaun ho mere batlao

kaisa nata hai tumse samzao

khud se apni pahecahn karao

Mera hath tham kar le jao

mujhe apni duniya dikhlao

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ramas

@ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Binky
really nice

Thanks Binky 2nd one is posted.😊

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ramas

@ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#3 Ek khubsurat ehsaas

bahon me teri jo aayi dhdakane tham gayi

sansome teri samayi meri sanse ruk gayi

najaro se najare mili mai to sharm se mar gayi

viran meri zindgi thi tune hariyali bhar di

bhatak rahi thi sahera me mujhe manzil mil gayi

tune kya ye kar dala meri sudh budh kho gayi

mai to apne aap ko bhul ab teri ho gayi

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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#10

simi waiting in the park for abhi after they confess their love when the wind is blowing hard

#4 chunari sarak gayi

kaisi chali ye aaj hawa chunari sarak gayi

aane ki teri aahat suni sharam se mar gayi

payal bhi meri chhan se thirak thirak gayi

bindiya bhi mere mathe ki chamak chamak gayi

chudiyan bhi jaise halke se khanak khanak gayi

chupke se tune tham liya mai toh dar gayi

samake teri bahon mein mai toh nikhar gayi

gaalo pe mere sharm ki laali bikhar gayi

hotho se tere hoth mile mai toh bahek gayi

chhua jo tune aang mera mai toh mahek gayi

kaisi chali ye aaj hawa chunari sarak gayi

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