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ramas

@ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Abhi to Simi

#5 meri jaan mere pass hai

Yeh kaisi khushbu bikhri hai

patto ki sarsarhat se

ek baar mei phir se chonka hun

ye rohsni kahan se phaili hai

aur kiski ankhe hasti hai

koi aur hai ya meri jaan hai

mera dil hai meri dhakdan hai

mere rom rom me basti hai

haan haan yehi to mera pyar hai

jab woh mujhe bulati hai

meri dhadkan thamsi jati hai

uski ankhe jab jab behati hai

jaise sau sau bjaili mujh pe girti hai

aur jab woh muskurati hai

har kali phool ban hati hai

chand sitaro mei roshni phail jati hai

mere saamne ab woh aayi hai

mere dil me laher chhu jati hai

woh bahon me samati hai

mera rom rom nach uththa hai

mera dibar mere pass hai

kisko batoun kisko kahun

kaise manaoun ye khushi

kab mai poun use akela

mera ang chune ko bekaraar hai

mere hothpe ajab si pyas hai

meri bahen jaise khali hai

dil chahta hai sara jahan so jaye

sirf mai aur meri simi ko chod

aur ye sama tab tham jaye

meri simi mere pass hai

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Bun Maska

@bunmaska

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

you are so creative Raksha......all those poems are simply romantic....

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ramas

@ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Manju as a mom sitting in her bed thinking what did she do wrong to loose a son who she puts her life into to raise him and always did injustice to her daughters to give anuj everything and yet in the split second he lett her despite her clinging to his feet.

#6 A mother's pain

Baithe hai aaj takiye me mooh chupaye huye

shikwa kare to kis se kare

kulhadi jab pairo pe mar di

pakde hai pair uske aaj

jisko pairo me hona tha

kismat bhi dekho kaise kaise din dikhati hai

bete ne chhina sab kuch aaj

jispe umar bhar ke sahare ki aas bandhi thi

betiyaan ban ke rahi hai

sahara jiski umeed na kabhi thi

luta hai aaj chaman ko

bagbaan ne jisko rakhwala samja tha

socha tha banke bete ki ma raj karungi

bana diya hai jisne ye abhsihap umar ka

shikwa kare toh kisse kare

jab paio pe kulhadi maar di

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ramas

@ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

thanks friedns I will bring more shortly.

Edited by ramas - 15 years ago

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ramas

@ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

#7 ruthe piya manou kaise

kaise ruthe ho natkhat lal

janti hun khata ho gayi hai mujh se hazar

aur tumhe khafa hone ka hai adhikar

par mujhse mat chhino mera pyar

tumhari radha roye bar bar

aur minnate tumse kare hazar

chaho to paav pakde tumhare is bar

chahe jo saja do tumhara hai adhikar

par milne aa jao jab baje char

karegi radha tumhara intejar

varna pyar ki hogi haar

chahe to de do jitni maar

uff na karenge hum is bar

yun na satao mere yaar

mar rahe hai aiase hum dildar

sun lo binti eik baar

tumhari radha rani kare pukar

abhi tum sirf mere ho mere yaar

dekh lo tukde kar ke hazar

uff na karenge sarkar

bas aa jao mere yaar

ye ankhe tadap rahi hai karne ko tera deedar

to milte hai jab baje char

meri uraj suno mere sarkar

aab aa bhi jao mere pyar

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ramas

@ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

# 8 Kahena chahe kaise kahe unse dil ki baat

Dekha jo tumhe maine mere pyar

huyi ankhe meri sharmasar

kitna sataya tumhe maine mere yaar

phir bhi tumne itna chaha dildar

kyun na huye mujhse rushwar

mai hun tumhari khatawar

dedo saja muje ek bar

magar aise mooh no phero mere yaar

mera jeena ho jayega duswar

aake mil lo mere yaar

aur karlo phir se ekraar

tumne mujhe maaf kiya mere yaar

tab ayega mere dil ko bhi karar

satoungi kabhi na karti hun ikraar

karti hun mai tumse sirf pyar pyar pyar

Khush kismat hun mai jise mila hai tumsa yaar

aur khuda se minnante karungi char

tumhe khushiya de woh haazar

aur sada amar rahe hamara pyar

Edited by ramas - 15 years ago

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ramas

@ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

#9 Ek pyara sa bandar

Ek pyara sa Bandar

gusa hai Meri almari ke andar

idhar udhar ghumta hai jaise ho oondar

chipkane lagta hai woh jaise ho goondar😆😆

aur satata hai mujhe jaise koi chhachhundar😆

phir bhi lagta hai mujhe woh bahut sundar❤️

dil hai iska jaise ho samundar

jeetna janta hai jaise ho sikandar

aisa hai mera pyara sa Bandar

jo gus ke baitha hai meri almari ke andar

abhi replies

ha hun mai tumhara pyara sa bandar

aisa na ho kahin ho jaye bawandar

kahin uda na le koi mujhe kar ke chhumantar

aur pahuchade mujhe kahin jalandar

aake chhupalo mujhko tumhari bahon ke andar

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ssree

@ssree

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Hi Raksha,

all u r poems are so nice. keep it up👏

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Shankar

@-Shankar-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Wow di, collection 9 already. Wah!!! I have only one complaint. Why don't you make more??!!! 😆

I loved this line -

phir bhi lagta hai mujhe woh bahut sundar

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ramas

@ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: -Shankar-
Wow di, collection 9 already. Wah!!! I have only one complaint. Why don't you make more??!!! 😆

I loved this line -

phir bhi lagta hai mujhe woh bahut sundar

I will post them lot as situation arise I have lost few here and there tha tare posted in the forum i will find and post it.