New Mehrya FF - TOGETHER - Chapter 47 posted - 07/04/2021 - Page 5

Originally posted by: monalidp

Next chapter posted :)

Heart felt apologies for delaying my fb. Though I bread the chapter back then, couldn't post my fb.

Absolutely loved the chapter.

I feel for Mehak and pity on her workaholic nature as well. She is trying to subdue a lot of physical and mental pressure. Hope she's be able to tackle them all.

Though SK was not in the picture. Wishing him to good luck.

Mr Bhatia's proposal did upset me as well. See your readers are pretending to be the central characters.😆😳

And last but not the least, Mr Veer is seriously poking his nose everywhere and anywhere possible. He could possibly become the next obstacle.

Can't wait to read the upcoming chapters.

Couldn't conclude just like that without mentioning your writing. Such a perfect and precise narrative. Kudos👏

Originally posted by: dwriter

Heart felt apologies for delaying my fb. Though I bread the chapter back then, couldn't post my fb.

Absolutely loved the chapter.

I feel for Mehak and pity on her workaholic nature as well. She is trying to subdue a lot of physical and mental pressure. Hope she's be able to tackle them all.

Though SK was not in the picture. Wishing him to good luck.

Mr Bhatia's proposal did upset me as well. See your readers are pretending to be the central characters.😆😳

And last but not the least, Mr Veer is seriously poking his nose everywhere and anywhere possible. He could possibly become the next obstacle.

Can't wait to read the upcoming chapters.

Couldn't conclude just like that without mentioning your writing. Such a perfect and precise narrative. Kudos👏

Hey thanks Shiny. Yes, I was waiting for your feedback, but knew you would come back sometime 😀

Readers wanting to be the central characters is a writer's dream. I guess I am lucky in the way that Mahek is having such an impact.

I'll be doing my weekly update today sometime. Will ping here again. :)

Ok...next chapter added on wattpad. Please do read, vote and comment 😊

Originally posted by: monalidp

Next chapter posted :)

No delays this time

Sitting on the edge of my seat after reading the spider's plan....😆oops... Shaurya's plan. Such a smart move. Love that😳

And I can't get tired praising your writing skills. I mean even a microscopic eye cannot find a loop hole. Such is the precision in your story line, connecting each and every dots effortlessly.👏

Coming to the first part of the update, yet again your to the point description of Mehek's turmoil took the trophy. And Veer....as expected...turned out be another venomous creature.

Your way of story telling is commendable.👍🏼⭐️ All speculations , assumptions just vanish into thin air. So I'm confused whether to smile thinking about Veer's plight or worry about SK's predator avatar.

So waiting patiently for the next .

Keep them coming.

Originally posted by: Anuteja10

very interesting coming upcoming chapters eagerly waiting for next monal 😊

Thanks Anu , Glad that you liked it. I usually update on weekends, will ping here when next one is ready 😊

Originally posted by: dwriter

No delays this time

Sitting on the edge of my seat after reading the spider's plan....😆oops... Shaurya's plan. Such a smart move. Love that😳

And I can't get tired praising your writing skills. I mean even a microscopic eye cannot find a loop hole. Such is the precision in your story line, connecting each and every dots effortlessly.👏

Coming to the first part of the update, yet again your to the point description of Mehek's turmoil took the trophy. And Veer....as expected...turned out be another venomous creature.

Your way of story telling is commendable.👍🏼⭐️ All speculations , assumptions just vanish into thin air. So I'm confused whether to smile thinking about Veer's plight or worry about SK's predator avatar.

So waiting patiently for the next .

Keep them coming.

Wow, thanks dear.😊

A feedback for your feedbacks (!) - They are very inspiring and motivating, precisely noticing the nuances of the story and writing. I, myself am usually rubbish at comments or feedbacks, I usually go tongue-tied, scrambling for right words

So love your fbs. Keep them coming.

Next chapter posted on Wattpad:) and there is a survey to fill as well.
Please do check and give your feedback!

Thank you 🙏 😊

Yet again apologies for my delayed fb.

Unable to peep here regularly since I'm travelling.

Absolutely loved the chapter👍🏼❤️

The love is for the writing. The turn of events have been equally depressing to me just like Mehak.

Rajeev...venom, can't say more about him.

Seriously wishing if there could be some way Shaurya be by her side. The girl is terribly caught in a web.

Sincerely hope for her Betterment.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

And about your survey...

What could I say more about your writing Skills, this beautiful story, and it's narrative.

Have absolutely loved this one . It's been such an amazing ride so far. Definitely sure that it would turn to be better in the upcoming chapters.

I have no suggestions as of now. Such an absolute pleasure to read it. You have successfully managed in garnering the complete attention of your readers. The visuals are right before my eyes, it's a voyage succumbing myriad of emotions. Feeling for every single word and the central characters.

Keep going.

Such an amazing and gifted writer you are.

Keep exploring and keep writing.⭐️

Straight from my heart.❤️

Originally posted by: dwriter

Yet again apologies for my delayed fb.

Unable to peep here regularly since I'm travelling.

Absolutely loved the chapter👍🏼❤️

The love is for the writing. The turn of events have been equally depressing to me just like Mehak.

Rajeev...venom, can't say more about him.

Seriously wishing if there could be some way Shaurya be by her side. The girl is terribly caught in a web.

Sincerely hope for her Betterment.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

And about your survey...

What could I say more about your writing Skills, this beautiful story, and it's narrative.

Have absolutely loved this one . It's been such an amazing ride so far. Definitely sure that it would turn to be better in the upcoming chapters.

I have no suggestions as of now. Such an absolute pleasure to read it. You have successfully managed in garnering the complete attention of your readers. The visuals are right before my eyes, it's a voyage succumbing myriad of emotions. Feeling for every single word and the central characters.

Keep going.

Such an amazing and gifted writer you are.

Keep exploring and keep writing.⭐️

Straight from my heart.❤️

Hey, thanks so much Shiny! I'm so flattered with that feedback, I'm on cloud nine🥰🥰🤗🤗

You like my writing, but I keep finding faults, especially in the structuring of the prose and POVs. I know I'm riding on Mehrya fandom, probably not many will read were it not a FF :))

And so I'll continue my quest to improve, hand on my heart !!😊😊

Maybe next time I'll come up with an independent story, that will be my real test.

With love