New Mehrya FF - TOGETHER - Chapter 47 posted - 07/04/2021 - Page 4

Originally posted by: dwriter

Chapter 41

Finished reading it.

As always an amazing chapter. Absolutely love the way you craft the twists and suspense.👏

And what is so peculiar about this story is that, the male protagonist is just a normal person. Unlike what we usually see in daily soaps. SK is just as any normal individual out there. He doesn't have any power to completely eradicated problems out of his life. He had to face them. And neither life nor business is a cake walk for him.👍🏼

I sincerely hope Rajeev will be behind the bars soon. Veer malhotra is quite intriguing character, I don't think he will leave that soon.

Mehak is such an inspiration. Loved the way you have moulded her character.

No points for guessing...but it is evident Rajeev had booked the venue for SK and Shruti.

Yet another nail biting confrontation..in the making.

Do continue soon.

For sure, it will be worth the wait.

You did an amazing job so far. Kudos👍🏼

👏⭐️

Thank you Shiny dear...You are certainly noticing the finer points in the story. I am so happy to see some detailed feedback, which is so vital for an amateur writer.

Glad you like the story so far. I hope I am able to live up to the expectations😊

More chapters added on wattpad. Enjoy 😊

Just back here after reading the last two chapters back to back.

Oh my what a splendid narration..kudos to you.

And please don't address you as an amateur writer...trust me you aren't.

What great vocabulary and what a smooth blend and execution of twists.

Loved both the chapters.

But the last one was just out of the world...I sincere wish to see them in person.

But... picture abhi bhi baaki hai.

MehRya confrontation.. absolutely clueless about their conversation.

Take a bow...I mean it is not easy to bring your readers on the edges of their seats in every chapter.👏

Will be waiting anxiously for the next

Much love❤️

Originally posted by: dwriter

Just back here after reading the last two chapters back to back.

Oh my what a splendid narration..kudos to you.

And please don't address you as an amateur writer...trust me you aren't.

What great vocabulary and what a smooth blend and execution of twists.

Loved both the chapters.

But the last one was just out of the world...I sincere wish to see them in person.

But... picture abhi bhi baaki hai.

MehRya confrontation.. absolutely clueless about their conversation.

Take a bow...I mean it is not easy to bring your readers on the edges of their seats in every chapter.👏

Will be waiting anxiously for the next

Much love❤️

Thanks Shiny...glad you liked it. Trust me...its not hard to give my imagination a free rein in Mehrya world. Anything can happen if you make it happen😉😉😄😄

I'll ping you here again when I upload the next one👍🙏🙏

Chapter 43 added to wattpad. Hope you enjoy and please vote and comment😊

After a hectic few weeks I got back on the forum and happened on to your story. Had to sign up for wattpad just to see how it would go after such a promising start. Managed to binge through ch 31 before stopping to start my day. While it has been hard to reconcile Rajeev as such a villain, but that is a personal issue after the way he is in my writing, It is incredibly good tale and I am enjoying it so much. I look forward to catching up the remaining chapters🙂

Hey Kelly, thank you so much, it's so heartening to read this, I have binge read all your stories and others on this forum, and that's where I have got my inspiration from 😊So thank you so much and look forward to your comments. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: monalidp

Chapter 43 added to wattpad. Hope you enjoy and please vote and comment😊

You can very well guess..I'm back just minutes after reading the astonishing chapter😎❤️

Aah..the confrontation..you literally erased all the presumed notions of your readers..Kudos👍🏼⭐️

The precision in storyline and beautiful blend of brilliant vocabulary is worthy of appreciation. Every single word just effortlessly portray the character's feelings and emotions.❤️

Your Mehak and Shaurya is really Hatke....so I wasn't shocked by the turn of events. Undoubtedly I was surprised tho

Well this could be one lone story in which we find SK more innocent and helpless.

Mehak's cold behaviour towards SK might pave road for Veer's intentions (if any).

Need to wait for the revelations of her inner thoughts as well.

Loving the way you have weaved this story so far.

And as I say always, It isn't easy to keep surprising your readers every time.👏

Will be waiting for the next update

Thanks dear...glad you like it so much. Yes, my Mahek and Shaurya are a bit different, but I do hope they keep the essence of the originals.

I didn't start the story with with this plotline in mind, it has just taken this turn and I now have given free rein to my characters. So lets see where they takes us 😆

Next chapter posted :)