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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Harmankav

Great prologue...pl please please please please please please continue soon.. want to see whether they will be in same college or separate whether their path will collide or not

Oh your please level-infinity😆
Well after reading your pleases I will update soon . Thanks for dropping the comment harmankav😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: abn0709

Wow...another writer

Welcome dear..you broke your silence by amazing story...loved it dear.

Super excited...to read further.

With Love
Manasvi.


I am really glad that you loved this story . Thanks for dropping your comment Manasvi😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Haseena2020

Hey well to the forum I am Haseena. After reading this we want to know whats happening next.. Wats ur name dear?


Thanks for the welcome Haseena . People of the forum have welcomed me so heartily ,I am literally so glad being here. Btw my name is Deepti😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Thehiddenstar11


Thanks for the welcome Haseena . People of the forum have welcomed me so heartily ,I am literally so glad being here. Btw my name is Deepti 😊

Nice to know you Deepti... Yes everyone in the forum are very down to Earth and care for one another... we are like family here
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15
Thanks everyone for their appreciation and love .here is the first chapter 😊
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Chapter 1: The beginning
Finally today the entrance results have come and she hasn't cracked the examination but on the other hand shaurya cracked the examination with high percentile . Wow again the unexpected had happened . she had thought of getting into IIT and then they would be together but it didnt happen. Even their destiny wanted to separate them . After all they were no match for each other . No doubt she would get a reputed government college but she will miss him damn she cant actually live without him . Dropping is an option butshe dont want to waste the 1 year after all she has got 91% and that to with 98 in mathematics. Shaurya is important , very important but her career has their own priorities too.

6 months later

Its been 6 months she has been to the WIN college . One of the best government college in Delhi . Its been wonderful her sometimes she faced ragging but there were good times too . Afterwards she has impressed Zahira one of the senior from which mostly everyone are scarred of. But the drawback of this was every classmate if her was always scared to talk to her after all she was one of the bestie of Zahira Khan.

Its been sunday's morning and yes how could she forget that underprivileged gully of Delhi where children had a spark in their eyes but still landed education. It was always been Mahek's dream to teach those ubderpreviliged children but under her parents she was unable to do it. You can call it a communication gap or her scaredness to her father . Its not like her father didnt love her he loved her a lot and that was the problem . Sometimes this over doing of love makes the child weak and that was she very weak . She whole heartedly accepted that after all whats the problem in being weak until she had her lord with her . She would become courageous slowly but definitely and that was a promise to herself.

After reaching the anand basti (imaginary name) all the children started shouting "come out mahek di has come" and within minutes all the children of anand basti had comeout. How much they loved learning from her . Oh how much they loved learning from her the way she explained being very calm and listening to all their problems be it personal or a problem of any subject . They all loved her.

But today an amazing thing had happened while she was teaching it had been 7 and since it was the time of winters the area had become dark.someone she don't know from where shouted "hello ..koi hai" and that voice was so familiar yes it was of Shaurya . Finally after 6 months but what is he doing here she thought . Making an excuse to the children she moved to the source of that voice ."Shaurya" she called and moving more closer she was able to see his face oh how happy she was finally she saw him .FINALLY AFTER 6 LONG MONTHS.

His beard has grown now , wow he looks more handsome now wearing that tight T-shirt and tracks with a jacket in his one hand a bottle on the other. He has also made abs . How lean he used to be in school days but she had figure out then he used to go to gym . "Mahek.is that you?" he called out. Oh wow her name sounded so sweet from his mouth. "Y ...yes " she stammered .
"Oh thanks god I have found someone" and by saying that he hugged her. The world stopped for her .She can just feel him he was saying something but that didnt matter she was so lost . After few seconds he parted . "Sorry" he said. "No...no its okay shaurya " .How much she wanted to say you need to hug me for 1 hour atleast.

"How come you here?" She asked "Actually I lost my way , you see I am.not familiar of the streets here." he said with a disappointnent on his face " Btw Mahek I am very thirsty If you can..." Before he can complete she intrupted " oh I am sorry.. wait a minute shaurya ..mein abhi aayi" . Saying She ran to her children " So now the class is over children you all. can move to your house and we will meet next sunday bye everyone ." She then went to a shop nearby and brought a bottle of water ,and a cold drink and some eatables and moved to shaurya.

She can see a sense of relief in his Eyes .She literally took the water bottle and drank it like it was the last water bottle available on the planet. "Thankyou so much mahek.. I don't know what would Have I done if you were bot here" he said "trust me you would have find a way..after aldo one can doubt you shaurya" He smiled listening her " You believe me so much?" He asked "Nope. I believe in your capabilities" He smiled listening to her . They hadn't talk much but he dont know why he always ended up smiling talking to her may be because she was to sweet to make you smile .

"Well some energy bars?"she asked with two energy bars in her hand. "Why not" and then he grabbed one of them in her hand. "So congratulations for cracking the entrance exam of IIT" she said "Oh thanks ..but trust me today eating this bar makes me more happy than that day. " "ha ha" she laughed ."well what were you doing here?" He asked out of sheer curiosity "Actually every sundays morning I used to cone here to teach these underprivileged kids ..most of them are in 8th and 10th and re tenthies have their board this year." She said "Dont worry they would pass with flying colors after all they have a teacher like you" he said " I hope so " she said with a hope in her eyes.

""I think we need to move its being dark and my warden will grandparents if I reached after the inn time she is really a demon.huh"

"We would reach but just tell me the exit of this gully" . Mahek showed him the exit and he had his car parking bearby it . they both sat in other car and he dropped her safely to the hostel and finally she has got his number . Maybe now their lovestory will begin .May be some unexpected would happen.

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Sorry for the typos and as always your feedback are always welcomed😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
Thats good they meet up after 6 months and Mehak is in cloud 9 seeing him and Shaurya has chnaged to muscular man too. Eager to see how their relationship grows and things change...
thank you for the update dear have a great day ahead. have a great weekend too Deepti😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
Hi,I am Jacinta,welcome to the forum.hope you like it here 😊Please continue with the story.eager to next whats going to happen😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Hearty welcome to our forum family...Deepti...🤗🥳
Much happy to know that you have made an entry as a writer...👏
Loved the prologue..👏
Will be back after chapter1
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Great dear...so met after 6 months..may be now Iove blossom...I hope all will gowell...wa wa to read more...do me pm dear...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20
Thank you so much for the quick update deepti...
Its really a fresh story...loving it..
Very well written 👍🏼
Continue soon..
btw you can call me lima😊
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