MehRya SS: Forbidden - Ch5 Teaser pg 14 04/08

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dwriter

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Posted: 6 years ago

#21

Apologies for being late...
Congratulations for your new story dear...
Good to see you back in the world of writing..
Such an intriguing and interesting prologue it is...
Mehak's mother Meera was a devdasi..nd she wished a better future for her daughter..
I guess circumstances may turn her into a devdasi..
At present she's fighting for her life..
Many things to be unfold about her Present life nd relation with Shaurya...
Really excited to read further..
The plot is unique...
Plz do continue soon...

And yes I know I have many pending fbs in your other stories...

But still do send me a PM for this one too..

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Haseena2020
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Thank you for the beautiful beginning Kelly.
Yes have read about Devadasi.. I have seen in one of the olden days tamil movie... every ordinary people worships her but only the higher caste males wants for their personal pleasure etc. I am very much excited to see how the story unfolds.
Have a blessed day ahead and do continue soon
thank you so much dear

Although I was happy the emoticon, I am even happier that you commented Haseena😆.

I had written most of this introduction when I was watching the other show that was loosely based in the Devadasi system, but it wasn't until I re-read it a few days back did the story I have in mind formulate. I hope you enjoy the story.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#23

Kelly, this is totally a different angle of Mehrya, you indeed have touched a very sensitive topic

of Devadasi pratha and I do belong to the state which followed it can say that even though it was

practiced with lot of pious and devotion in the early days, took a very unpleasant/ugly turn later on

and young girls were victimised by the men who had their own vested interests. Now, it's all

behind us and this system has been abolished in the state.

Meera Sharma gave her life giving birth to the apple of her eye Mehek leaving the child under

the protection of her dad Susheel and he must have had a tough time bringing up his child borne

by a Devadasi. Shaurya is already in her life and seems to have been involved in some crisis

and Mehek is in the hospital fighting for her life. Interesting prologue Kelly and congratulations

on your new story.⭐️

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Hi Sneha, thank you so much for the read and comment😛. I agree that this is a particularly sensitive subject, which is why (especially as a foreigner) I have made the effort to read up the subject, before I attempt to translate my imaginings into a story. There is nothing worse imo than someone completely removed to debase another's culture through ignorance. That being said, I hope to present my idea as respectfully as I can, but do not hesitate to call me out if I go awry in the telling...

@bold: That being said, I was very much relieved to read that the practice has been abolished. Such victimization is completely unacceptable.

I do hoe you enjoy the story, and in particular what is revealed Mehek's upbringing, and yes her relationship with Shaurya. I will be sure to include you in my PMs

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: AD04

Yes kelly ...i definitely want PM... ..and i am. Eagerly waiting for your stories😉

Will definitely PM you whenever I have something ready to go😃

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Specygirl

You are an amazing writer and nobody can get bothered by the amazing stories you write. Count me in for the PM😳

Aww thanks so much for your kind words. I have added you to the my friends list, so you will definitely get the PMs😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: josejen

Go ahead Kelly. Yes do pm me.

Will do Jen😛

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Haseena2020

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Posted: 6 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Although I was happy the emoticon, I am even happier that you commented Haseena😆.

I had written most of this introduction when I was watching the other show that was loosely based in the Devadasi system, but it wasn't until I re-read it a few days back did the story I have in mind formulate. I hope you enjoy the story.

Count me in when you pm for the update Kelly. I am hungry for your update... missing your updates very much😳😳😳

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Thabassum19
Oh mine ...while reading ..I cud imagine all the stuff so clearly...
That's your speciality Kelly ...you are flawless...
Interesting concept to start with ...Mehak managed to escape her fate but her mother had to pay the price ...
Like her mother even she found her love ...but looks like her love story is also going to be complicated ...
Would definitely like to read more ...
Count me in...

You are way too kind with your words Thabs, but thank you all the same.😛

The story I have in mind, I think is a good one. I hope everyone enjoys it. Will PM you when I next update for sure😊