*MERE Humsafar*A mehrya story pt 10+epilogue on pg 22 01/7/18

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Anuteja10

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Posted: 7 years ago

#161

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Misti Kya surprise hi yaar

So fast updates😆

Wow finally abhi got what he deserves😛

Aww my hero had big slap from mehak bechara

She tells her feelings for him n he also confess

By the end both are in one soul heart n body

Well written misti👏

Loved it 😛

Thanks for the pm dear

Pls update another one pls mere liye ho sake tho 😆

Edited by Chandana2010 - 7 years ago

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Mishtilove

@Mishtilove

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Posted: 7 years ago

#162

Thanku for all the love my dear readers...i truly appreciate it.🤗

Final part and an epilogue too...mein apne readers ko kabhi mana nhi krti😆aapki baat sarakhon par.

For the final time read it and leave me a lovely comment thankyou.😃

Part 10

Bright sun rays make mehak flutter her eyes slowly,it was a new day,new beginning.

Her gaze shift downwards,she was still caged in strong holds of her man to never let her go.she move her head backward to have a look but before that she was starled when shaurya came over her and start nuzzling her neck.

you wake?

i haven't an ounch of sleep last night,my sleeping beauty.he bend down to peck her exposed shoulder blade lightly.mehak stirr under his touches.

someone was complaining i'm not romantic and passionate,so i'm working on proving u wrong,u made me wait for 6 months mehak,you have to bear the consequences now.

seeing the silence,shaurya become anxious.Mehak,do you ...regret it?

Mehak's eyes widened,she bluntly replied;-of course...seeing the hurt she said of course not,i love it,u idiot.

so,do u mind?shaurya said before he takes her lips and kiss her fervently.

shauryaa...before she can retort he take her lips,make her his again... what is rightfully belong to him.

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Mehak with a very serious expressions try to work on something shaurya can figure it out as he enter the house,his gaze shifting towards kitchen he intently watch her seeing her attention on something else other than him.he want her undivided attention right at the moment.

he sneeked into the kitchen and encircled his arms tightly around her bare waist.

hello baby,you came early-mehak questioned him without turning,she know this similar cologne.

hmm...but you seems busy,not fare...he give her a sad expression.

kya bana rhi ho...(what are you making)

your favourite...Butter chicken.Mamma told me the reciepe last time we visit

her.so,im trying this and want to surprise you.

yes,im surely surprised biwi but this is not my favourite dish anymore,u know...i love to this one more...mehak makkan masala,my own dish. he gently bite her on her nape.

Ahh!you beast,leave me and let me focus.

ohk,chalo chicken taste krte hai,he held the spoon in her hand and taste it,

Yumm...delicious...sach bolon mamma se bhi acha hai,ab khush.(better than mamma's, now happy).no shaurya,mamma dish will always be the best.im more than

glad if it is somewhere near that delicious taste.

mehak,its delicious...believe me jaan.mom was right one day you will be a great chef.mehak hugged him saying thanku.

Mehak now,let me have my share on this one,he said pointing towards her.

You are insatitable shaurya.

for you,my love.she blushed and he laughed.

😳 check epilogue 😳

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Mishtilove

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Posted: 7 years ago

#163

Epilogue

*After 2 years*

MEHAK ENJOYS THE SERENE BEAUTY OF FULL MOON NIGHT.\

shaurya came and held her firmly from behind,his arms securely held her in his embrace.he inhales her smell,and genly kiss her in nape of her neck,mehak shivers under his touch,shaurya always have that effect on her even after 2 years of marriage,it makes mehak blush and shaurya proud.he gently aside her long tresses on left side and start nibbling her ears lightly,he lightly kiss that area n followed the path to her cheeks,neck line,shoulder,then he strongly held her palms in his n kiss each of the finger.His ministrations slowly erupting the desire in her.

shauryaaa...she chided him away,shaurya behave!its been two years,next week we gonna celebrate our second aniversery and here you are still behaving like a newlywed.

jaan...what do i do if you look so beautiful, i can't hold myself for so long plus you are wearing this favourite dress of mine,you make me insatitable for your love.continuing his unfinished job,he start kissing her on her other cheek ever so gently.he hands caresses her curves.

Mehak blush profusely but managed to utter,shaurya..we...sho...uldn't,she hesitate a little.

i know jaan...don't worry i'll never hurt you or the baby.he assured her.

Baby??she asked shocked.you knew about baby?

shaurya gave her an embarased smile.actually i saw the reports yesterday by mistake...sorry

what??how could you shaurya?you spoil my surprise anniversary gift for next week,she told him annoyed and a little sad.

sorry jaan,but i love you.

i hate you.

but i love u too.

i hate you too.

but i love u more,i love u like u love ur chocolate cake,i love u like u love me...more than yourself,more than your life...i love you more every single day,every single hour,every single minute,every second...i love u to the moon and back...i love you till eternity ...i love u like nobody does...i love u ..i love to the infinity.the filmy confession make her smile and mehak turns slowly and hugged him.

kahan se copy ki hai yeh lines(where did you copy these lines).

arrey original hai.

shut up.and mehak smile cutely that make shaurya smile too and ...

He bend down and plant a kiss over her belly saying,papa love you the most baby.

excuse me-mehak exclaimed faking an anger.

he stand up and say but mamma will be the my first love always before he soundly kiss her lips to seal the promise.

*-* THE END *-*

Until next time,hum hai rahi pyaar ke phir milenge chalte chalte.

Miss u all🤗

Love and hugs,

Mishti.❤️

Edited by Mishtilove - 7 years ago

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AD04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#164

Res😛

Unres😛

Thanks Mishti for updating one chapter and a epilogue on your readers demand ... You are really a sweetheart ...will miss you and your stories 😛

Mehrya finally together leading happily married life and mehek become a good cook too finally 😉

After 2 years of their marriage they still feel.like just married . And soon mehrya is becoming parents too .and they will be good in playing parents too ..😉

Thanks for this beautiful story and Beautiful epilogue 😛

Thanks for the PM😊

Will miss you ...do come soon finishing your work 😛

Edited by AD04 - 7 years ago

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Anuteja10

@Anuteja10

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Posted: 7 years ago

#165

Misti itni updates kibarsath Kar rahi ho 😆

Muaaah

Thank you baby

Love you alot 🤗

Beautiful romantic update Misti loved it

She learns dishes from his mom

N wants to feed him he really enjoyed it

After two years finally she gave him good news wow

Lovely update Misti

Pls come here whenever you get time 😛

Edited by Chandana2010 - 7 years ago

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Lima

@friendlyghost08

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Posted: 7 years ago

#166

🤗thank you for this romantic update and epilogue

This is awsome...you wrote the romance part very beautifully...😳

So this love birds are soon going to be parents...the ending is really cute..loved it

Keep writing dear and thnx for the pm❤️

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Lima

@friendlyghost08

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#167

Sorry to bother you bt i just noticed ur pm... u wrote "meri jane ki khushi me ek aur update" 😲... where are you going dear...plzz come back soon ...

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Harmankav

@Harmankav

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Posted: 7 years ago

#168

Thanks dear for pm... Oh my my they both are enjoying their lives like newly weds.. n very soon going to be parents.. n thanks for back to back updates I think all writers should take motivation from you.. pls do write more... Pls come with a new story soon

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Aashna...

@Aashna...

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Posted: 7 years ago

#169

Res.. .. Just wait for another half an hour..😳

Chapter 1:Congo Shongo on you new story di🥳...saare updates ko maine poori tarah follow kiya...par reply hi na de paayi...sorry

Mujhe toh aapke poore description se Mehrya ki pehli waali shaadi feeling aa gayi😳...

Arranged marriage...interesting..😉

toh Mehak is a very strong girl...but whaaat... here Mehak became shaurya khanna...she gave divorce papers🥺..this is such a damn astonishing twist(cvs waali dialogue) di😆

par jab aap writer ho...toh mujhe fikar nahi...aap happy ending hi degi..😳

Chapter 2:Arrey ye Shaurya khanna toh bahut chweet nikla😳...I loved the way how he cross questioned her by saying what will u do if I dont give you divorce...😆

bechari tumhare saath hi rahti...par Mehak ko Shaurya Khanna ko dekhkar hi apna decision change karna chahiye tha..I am disappointed

Toh ye log Mumbai nikal gaye...ab toh ve akele enjoy kar sakte hai...haina mishi di???..😳

Mehak yahaan par pehli baar SK sweet nikla...par ye uski dil thod rahi hai

Fikar mat karna bhai...

Mehak toh meri hi tarah khaane ko priority deti hai...🤣

SK loves the improvement in her waiting for him...GR8888..aila di inhe jaldi se ek karva do...☺️

Chapter 3:Ye ladki toh poori tarah divorce par lagi hui hai...jab ye shaurya ke hurt feelings ko samjhegi..tabhi unki relationship main koi improvement aayegi

I loved the way she called himShaurya JI...that was sweet to hear

arrey yahaan par mehak ko khaana banana nahi aata hai..aur shaurya ko shakkar aur namak main difference nahi patah hai🤣

Arey wah...Mishi di ne bana di pakkiwaali jodi...

6 months main toh kuch bhi ho sakta hai...Dekhte hai ki shaurya Mehak ko apna bana paat hai ki nahi

Chapter 4:Arey ye toh north pole south pole ki tarah hai..

I hate this abhi so much😡

Mehak that was such a bad way of treating Shaurya...atlest she should have respected his concern

usne khaana nahi kaaya

Hope that he doesn't start hating her...

Chapter 5:Arrey humare sweet shaury ko khadoos waali avataar achi nahi lagti...

toh is chapter main humaara sweet wala shaurya ko aana hi pada

Aap ne is chapter main romance scene daala☺️mujhe bahut acha laga...

Ouch mera bhai is hurt with her rude behaviour...😭

acha hua ki in donon ko akal aayi aur ye FRIENDS toh ban gaye..😳

Chapter 6:Agar yeh mehak boxer hoti na toh Tina ki puncture kar deti...😆

Ye donon ek saath couple ki tarah jaate vakt kitna sweet lagte hai😳

Mehak jealous ban gayi...only if Shaurya would have understood it...it would have been more fun..😳

Ye log ab kyon bhaag rahe hain party se??😕

Chapter 7:Mera bhai ka such a bad past...I felt so bad when he broke down before her..and the reason for him leaving Mehak made me feel so bad😭😭😭

par ye Shaurya se ye ladki pyaar karti thi ya sirf girlfriend hai??

(my confusion got cleared)😳

Chapter 8:Ye Sk kyon apne seedhe raah ko khud barbaadkar deta hai...

jab ladki ne apni poorane waale fake pyaar ko reject kar diya...ye kyon mahaan ban raha hai..iski toh humare SK 1.0 se training lena padega..😆

6 months passed away...aur ye log abhi tak apne feelings ko samjhe nahi...inse kuch nahi ho sakta

Mehak planned a surprise for Shaurya nad this abhi ..what the hell is he doing there?😡Agar main kar sakti toh main use do mukke dekar aati...

Chapter 9:is abhi ki toh main...agar tum ladki se pyaar karte toh sachhi se nibhana chahiye tha...par ab jab reserved ho gayi hai...disturb kyon karte hai ye log...😡

Mera bechaara Sk ...kitna pyaar karta hai apne biwi se...😕

mehak ne shaurya ko idiot bola...Pehli baar usne universal truth ko bola

Ye Shaurya inta tubelight kyon hai😆

Haaaye...that perfect ending...mishi di aap ne rock kar diya☺️

Chapter 10: This is what I was waiting for...Mehak and Shaurya became Mehrya completely...the way she sweetly teases him...man ...this is so GAWrgeous!!!...☺️

Mehak started her cooking business again...did Shaurya lie again or did she genuinely cook well?😆

Mehak makhan masala...yeh Shaurya toh kabhi nahi sudharnewaala...😳

The last line added more to the cuteness of the update😳

Epilogue : Ohhh...mehrya ka bacche honewaala hai...I just remembered that season one's last week waala scene...Mehak surprise dena chahthi thi...par humaare shaurya ne use

surprise de diya...😳

That I hate you...I love you waala scene bahut chweetwaala tha☺️..Shaurya ne apne love ko icecream ke saath compare kiya😆

The way Shaurya said Arrey original hai yaar...haai woh kitna cute lag raha tha mere imagination main...😳

LOVED IT COMPLETELY❤️

THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY !!!🤗

Edited by Aashna... - 7 years ago