*MERE Humsafar*A mehrya story pt 10+epilogue on pg 22 01/7/18 - Page 19

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Another beautiful chapter Mish... 👏
Mehek is excited to join him for his college reunion..
She declares herself as his friend..before his college buddies
Loved her growing possessiveness towards Shaurya...and she claims her right on her husband infront of Tina..
Oh god...can imagine Shaurya's as well as Tina's shocked expressions 😆
Thanks for the update as well as PM..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh god...yaar Mishu..this was too emotional 😭
In love with this Shaurya...
He is a good son, son in law, husband and friend... 👏
He even ate that spicy biriyani to make her happy..
His love is selfless...
Oh god...can't see him heartbroken 😭

Thanks for the update as well as PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Well...everything in the beginning sounded great.. 😊
But..why the hell..this stupid Abhi is back to their life 😡
Loved their budding relationship..
Her bonding and love for her in-laws... 😳
Her affection and attraction towards him... 😳
Awww...that bye bye kiss 😳
Her detachment towards Abhi nd divorce... Loved everything except for Abhi's entry Mish 😆
Thanks for the update as well as PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it...loved it...just loved it Mishu.. 😳
Thanks for this great chapter...🤗...me too loves happy ending 😉
Loved the way she replied to that moron... 👏
Oh... Mehak slapped him getting fed up of his Mahanta...
Her statements were on point...
And then comes their much awaited confession...aah lovely 😳
And they finally united as love birds...


Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks a lot Mishu for this super duper chapter as well as epilogue...🤗
Loved it... 😳
Naughty Shaurya craves for mehak makhan masala...his very own yummy dish 😆
And their lovey dovey moments continues.. 😳
After two years of marriage they still feel like newlyweds 😳
Awww...she's expecting nd was waiting to surprise him on their anniversary 😳
He promises to love her more than anything in the world...lovely 😳
And they are waiting for their chotu member... 😳
Happy ending...I like it.. 😳
Kudos to your writing dear... 👏 ..just love this story
Plz do write more

Waiting impatiently for your comeback sweetheart... 😊
All the best for your exams as well as future endeavours... ⭐️ 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AD04

Res😛

Unres😛
Thanks Mishti for updating one chapter and a epilogue on your readers demand ... You are really a sweetheart ...will miss you and your stories 😛
Mehrya finally together leading happily married life and mehek become a good cook too finally 😉
After 2 years of their marriage they still feel.like just married . And soon mehrya is becoming parents too .and they will be good in playing parents too ..😉
Thanks for this beautiful story and Beautiful epilogue 😛
Thanks for the PM😊
Will miss you ...do come soon finishing your work 😛

Thank you for reading Aarti⭐️
haha...thankyou😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandana2010

Misti itni updates kibarsath Kar rahi ho 😆

Muaaah
Thank you baby
Love you alot 🤗
Beautiful romantic update Misti loved it
She learns dishes from his mom
N wants to feed him he really enjoyed it
After two years finally she gave him good news wow
Lovely update Misti
Pls come here whenever you get time 😛

so,you have not complaints😆
thankyu for reading😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: friendlyghost08

🤗thank you for this romantic update and epilogue

This is awsome...you wrote the romance part very beautifully...😳
So this love birds are soon going to be parents...the ending is really cute..loved it
Keep writing dear and thnx for the pm❤️

☺️mujhe toh sharam hi aa gyi😆
thanku for reading😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Harmankav

Thanks dear for pm... Oh my my they both are enjoying their lives like newly weds.. n very soon going to be parents.. n thanks for back to back updates I think all writers should take motivation from you.. pls do write more... Pls come with a new story soon

thankyou for reading manvi😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aashna...

Res.. .. Just wait for another half an hour.. 😳

Chapter 1:Congo Shongo on you new story di🥳...saare updates ko maine poori tarah follow kiya...par reply hi na de paayi...sorry
Mujhe toh aapke poore description se Mehrya ki pehli waali shaadi feeling aa gayi😳...
Arranged marriage...interesting..😉
toh Mehak is a very strong girl...but whaaat... here Mehak became shaurya khanna...she gave divorce papers🥺..this is such a damn astonishing twist(cvs waali dialogue) di😆
par jab aap writer ho...toh mujhe fikar nahi...aap happy ending hi degi..😳

Chapter 2:Arrey ye Shaurya khanna toh bahut chweet nikla😳...I loved the way how he cross questioned her by saying what will u do if I dont give you divorce...😆
bechari tumhare saath hi rahti...par Mehak ko Shaurya Khanna ko dekhkar hi apna decision change karna chahiye tha..I am disappointed
Toh ye log Mumbai nikal gaye...ab toh ve akele enjoy kar sakte hai...haina mishi di???..😳
Mehak yahaan par pehli baar SK sweet nikla...par ye uski dil thod rahi hai
Fikar mat karna bhai...
Mehak toh meri hi tarah khaane ko priority deti hai...🤣
SK loves the improvement in her waiting for him...GR8888..aila di inhe jaldi se ek karva do...☺️

Chapter 3:Ye ladki toh poori tarah divorce par lagi hui hai...jab ye shaurya ke hurt feelings ko samjhegi..tabhi unki relationship main koi improvement aayegi
I loved the way she called himShaurya JI...that was sweet to hear
arrey yahaan par mehak ko khaana banana nahi aata hai..aur shaurya ko shakkar aur namak main difference nahi patah hai🤣
Arey wah...Mishi di ne bana di pakkiwaali jodi...
6 months main toh kuch bhi ho sakta hai...Dekhte hai ki shaurya Mehak ko apna bana paat hai ki nahi

Chapter 4:Arey ye toh north pole south pole ki tarah hai..
I hate this abhi so much😡
Mehak that was such a bad way of treating Shaurya...atlest she should have respected his concern
usne khaana nahi kaaya
Hope that he doesn't start hating her...

Chapter 5:Arrey humare sweet shaury ko khadoos waali avataar achi nahi lagti...
toh is chapter main humaara sweet wala shaurya ko aana hi pada
Aap ne is chapter main romance scene daala☺️mujhe bahut acha laga...
Ouch mera bhai is hurt with her rude behaviour...😭
acha hua ki in donon ko akal aayi aur ye FRIENDS toh ban gaye..😳

Chapter 6:Agar yeh mehak boxer hoti na toh Tina ki puncture kar deti...😆
Ye donon ek saath couple ki tarah jaate vakt kitna sweet lagte hai😳
Mehak jealous ban gayi...only if Shaurya would have understood it...it would have been more fun..😳
Ye log ab kyon bhaag rahe hain party se??😕

Chapter 7:Mera bhai ka such a bad past...I felt so bad when he broke down before her..and the reason for him leaving Mehak made me feel so bad😭😭😭
par ye Shaurya se ye ladki pyaar karti thi ya sirf girlfriend hai??
(my confusion got cleared)😳

Chapter 8:Ye Sk kyon apne seedhe raah ko khud barbaadkar deta hai...
jab ladki ne apni poorane waale fake pyaar ko reject kar diya...ye kyon mahaan ban raha hai..iski toh humare SK 1.0 se training lena padega..😆
6 months passed away...aur ye log abhi tak apne feelings ko samjhe nahi...inse kuch nahi ho sakta
Mehak planned a surprise for Shaurya nad this abhi ..what the hell is he doing there?😡Agar main kar sakti toh main use do mukke dekar aati...

Chapter 9:is abhi ki toh main...agar tum ladki se pyaar karte toh sachhi se nibhana chahiye tha...par ab jab reserved ho gayi hai...disturb kyon karte hai ye log...😡
Mera bechaara Sk ...kitna pyaar karta hai apne biwi se...😕
mehak ne shaurya ko idiot bola...Pehli baar usne universal truth ko bola
Ye Shaurya inta tubelight kyon hai😆
Haaaye...that perfect ending...mishi di aap ne rock kar diya☺️

Chapter 10: This is what I was waiting for...Mehak and Shaurya became Mehrya completely...the way she sweetly teases him...man ...this is so GAWrgeous!!!...☺️
Mehak started her cooking business again...did Shaurya lie again or did she genuinely cook well?😆
Mehak makhan masala...yeh Shaurya toh kabhi nahi sudharnewaala...😳
The last line added more to the cuteness of the update😳

Epilogue : Ohhh...mehrya ka bacche honewaala hai...I just remembered that season one's last week waala scene...Mehak surprise dena chahthi thi...par humaare shaurya ne use
surprise de diya...😳
That I hate you...I love you waala scene bahut chweetwaala tha☺️..Shaurya ne apne love ko icecream ke saath compare kiya😆
The way Shaurya said Arrey original hai yaar...haai woh kitna cute lag raha tha mere imagination main...😳
LOVED IT COMPLETELY❤️
THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY !!!🤗

Aashu itna pyaara fb🤗
Thank you so much baby...
I'm missing you so much baby...plz came back soon❤️

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