MehRya SS: His Last Valentine...Epilogue page 35 04/03/18..... - Page 29

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Zkm_Aly

Very cute ending dear.
The story was lovely. Thanks for writing such a beautiful story. Keep writing more if them.
The epilogue was lovely and romantic. After all they get to be each other's valentine. ❤️. The contract was very cute depicting His ownership on her.
"He leaned in for a kiss... and a happy ending.
Thanks for the pm.



You are more than welcome. As to other writing, do check out my index if you have the opportunity already. I will be heading back to the stories I put on hiatus for the Valentine's Day tale, and hope to see you there as well.

Will PM with whichever story gets updated first. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Did you forget me Mishti😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
So excited to see that this story has hit 10K views...it was such a fun one to write...thx to the silent readers out there😛
Kelly
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Posted: 7 years ago
Woow...that was really romantic and dramatic at the same time 😆 just to re kindle the love between mehak and shaurya this whole robbery and the restaurant white chilled was taken over by the goons...when I first read shaurya is on way to propose a lady ..I thought it wud be mehak...but mehak was his chef ..for whom he had a hatred...and wen I read he was about to propose shruti...I was glad that robbers broke in 😳 and held them hostages ...glad he don't end up proposing shruti ...that vicious women who betrayed her own cousin at her hard times...
But mehak who was pure soul ...who deliberately gave herself in for the sake of her pregnant friend...
Totally loves Vicky's bonding with mehak...how he kept muttering her Bhabhi ...and wished to have her as Bhabhi for real ignoring his arrogant brother...who was concerned for mehak but don't show it up...so shaurya was actually miffed up with mehak thinking she betrayed him with her best friends boyfriend ...trey ?
Instead of coming to conclusion... Or talking about it to shruti...he shud have confronted mehak then and there ...
But he chose to suffer a heart break ...and left mehak to suffer ..along...
That robber jaison...he seemed nice 😆 he was lenient over mehak ...and gave her little freedom to at least aid the one in need...u know wen I read the part where shaurya was totally intoxicated and ended up with shruti in a room...I felt like banging his head on to sumthing 😆 but thanks to u Kelly ...you brought his mother at the important time to stop him from doing sumthing wrong...so another reason for his hatred towards mehak was he had to leave his home and mother and go away ?

But glad at the end how shaurya got to know the truth from shrurti's own friend..Tanya ...and he confronted shruti ...
So mehak managed to save Sara first and rest everyone from criminals...and got hurt...trey and mehak's friendship was great to read ...and how maturely shaurya handled the press and media was good...it was fun to read Sara's silly antics wen she was beside mehak in hospital...
But finally all the misunderstandings cleared between...MehRya..
And they were together...the final twist was the whole set up of robbery was planed by karuna kya ? ...totally wicked 😆
And in the end how shaurya wanted her to sign the contract 🤣 to be his valentine forever...was smart move indeed by khanna...they were together finally...as each other Valentine's...it was such a beautiful feeling to read this story
You are awsum 👏⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Thabassum..

Woow...that was really romantic and dramatic at the same time 😆 just to re kindle the love between mehak and shaurya this whole robbery and the restaurant white chilled was taken over by the goons...when I first read shaurya is on way to propose a lady ..I thought it wud be mehak...but mehak was his chef ..for whom he had a hatred...and wen I read he was about to propose shruti...I was glad that robbers broke in 😳 and held them hostages ...glad he don't end up proposing shruti ...that vicious women who betrayed her own cousin at her hard times...

But mehak who was pure soul ...who deliberately gave herself in for the sake of her pregnant friend...
Totally loves Vicky's bonding with mehak...how he kept muttering her Bhabhi ...and wished to have her as Bhabhi for real ignoring his arrogant brother...who was concerned for mehak but don't show it up...so shaurya was actually miffed up with mehak thinking she betrayed him with her best friends boyfriend ...trey ?
Instead of coming to conclusion... Or talking about it to shruti...he shud have confronted mehak then and there ...
But he chose to suffer a heart break ...and left mehak to suffer ..along...
That robber jaison...he seemed nice 😆 he was lenient over mehak ...and gave her little freedom to at least aid the one in need...u know wen I read the part where shaurya was totally intoxicated and ended up with shruti in a room...I felt like banging his head on to sumthing 😆 but thanks to u Kelly ...you brought his mother at the important time to stop him from doing sumthing wrong...so another reason for his hatred towards mehak was he had to leave his home and mother and go away ?

But glad at the end how shaurya got to know the truth from shrurti's own friend..Tanya ...and he confronted shruti ...
So mehak managed to save Sara first and rest everyone from criminals...and got hurt...trey and mehak's friendship was great to read ...and how maturely shaurya handled the press and media was good...it was fun to read Sara's silly antics wen she was beside mehak in hospital...
But finally all the misunderstandings cleared between...MehRya..
And they were together...the final twist was the whole set up of robbery was planed by karuna kya ? ...totally wicked 😆
And in the end how shaurya wanted her to sign the contract 🤣 to be his valentine forever...was smart move indeed by khanna...they were together finally...as each other Valentine's...it was such a beautiful feeling to read this story
You are awsum 👏⭐️

I have to confess, Thabs that this was a really fun ss for me to pen, a lot more action packed than my usual stuff, which was exciting in itself😆. I got totally taken by my undercover goon gang especially Jaison who was quite the character, and I had remember that reuniting our star crossed lovers under such trying circumstances was the point of the story and not my criminal gang. I am glad you enjoyed all the twists and turn that culminated in the HEA ending that mehrya deserved.

Thx for such a wonderful comment on has become one of my personal favorites😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
kelly epilogue part two aane wala hi kya😛
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandana2010

kelly epilogue part two aane wala hi kya 😛

Bumping belatedly for Valentines...with a possibility of part two of the epilogue...what do you think?
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Posted: 6 years ago
Have read this one when I was a silent reader...😃
Would definitely love to read a part 2 of Epilogue...⭐️😳
Please do continue dear .
And also waiting impatiently for the update of Forbidden..😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
This is not complete but I am on my cell and I really do not want to lose it. Will be back to finish it ASAP

Epilogue...part 2

If someone had told him that valentines day two years later would bring about his greatest wish he would have never believed them. But there they were: he clad in his tuxedo and she, the woman who he had never forgotten, resplendent in her red dress together again...

Unfortunately, any thought, any sliver of chance that there could have been more to the two of them if they were ever to meet again, evaporated in that moment when her stumble had her reaching for the closest person to prevent her fall, and she ended up willingly in his arms. She breathed heavily, and for a split second Jaison's breath caught as he contemplated what this could mean. But the universe quickly gave him the message he was meant to receive tonight when Mehek placed one hand low on her abdomen and closed her eyes in unmitigated relief. In an instant he understood everything: the secret hidden by her trim frame as well as the fact she would always belong to Shaurya Khanna, who was making a beeline for his wife from across the room.
"Thank you Sir, you have..."
"Are you okay Mehek," Jaison asked gently.
Looking up at her unwitting rescuer for the first time, Mehek's expression took on one of confusion as she attempted to recall the man who was a stranger and yet was not.
"You look beautiful as ever tonight Mehek, but all things considered, perhaps a lower heel will be just the thing for the duration of your pregnancy. I may not be around the next time to prevent another mishap."
Mehek's mouth fell ajar, but whatever she intended to say was lost when her husband reached, his face a mixture of concern and something more formidable at seeing his wife in another man's arms. "Jaan, is everything okay?"
Even without the warning crackling over his earpiece, he was working after all, Jaison knew he had to make his exit from the situation. He no reason to doubt that Shaurya Khanna's memory would fail him, and the attention that could bring would not bode well for his current assignment.
"I was just advising your wife that regardless how delectable the shoe, that in her condition, common sense should prevail at all times." Taking the second glass of champagne, the one that the clueless husband had clearly procured for his wife, from Shaurya's hand, Jaison clinked it against the remaining one and cheekily offered his congratulations to the stunned father to be. It was more than enough of a distraction to allow his escape as the couple were now totally focused on each other.

"Mehek..."
Her cheeks flushed, Mehek stared at her husband with bright eyes. "I guess you can say my gift to you this year is a little different, Shaury. You won't actually get to see it for some months yet." When her poleaxed spouse said nothing she continued. "This isn't exactly how I wanted to tell you the news..."
"That second glass of champagne was for you, Mehek."
Not quite sure if that was an accusation or not Mehek smiled at the befuddled man beside her. "Well considering where we are I cannot blame you for thinking that would have been my choice, but I would have declined it, if you had but asked what I would have preferred."
Her sentence broke through her husband's stupor and she watched amused as he hailed the closest waiter. His own glass, barely touched, went onto the empty tray in a determination to support his beloved. "No alcohol," he announced as if he was home or at the very least at their restaurant. "She will have...milk...yes that's it."
"Ahem, she will juice," Mehek insisted, "apple if you have it, and please bring my husband a soft drink," she added sending the server off with a smile. "I will not be at my first ever film opening drinking a glass of milk," she teased.

Edited by crtkelly - 6 years ago

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