~FATAL ATTRACTION~ SS On MehRya , Chap 10 part B on PG-140 28/01/18

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richa

@richasharma0991

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Posted: 7 years ago

#131

Wao my hero is a criminal . Well He will be handsome and power-packed one.

Mehek has saved shaurya plus life without knowing it . Chilly spray so useful 😃

No now as all his enemies r dead he is free and can't get sleep . So got to know about goden latte 👍🏼

I so happy that u used this onlune chatting . I loved this part of show which they have totally forgot.

So now one night without ms is difficult Awww .tell him MS about ur area he will take the fuse of the person incharge for it🤣

What he is doing in PWG. Gonna break some shops 😆

Awesome first chap . Update soon. Thanks for update.

Give me some of ur power of updating soon. 😆

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Diva200

@Diva200

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Posted: 7 years ago

#132

Great update

So Sk is a don who has not much life

he communicates with Ms and chatting to her has become his lifeline.

She saved him from being killed by being handy with pepper spray.

So when will he find out about her whereabouts? Maybe when she tells him she is engaged ? pls update soon

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: richasharma0991
Wao my hero is a criminal . Well He will be handsome and power-packed one.
Mehek has saved shaurya plus life without knowing it . Chilly spray so useful 😃
No now as all his enemies r dead he is free and can't get sleep . So got to know about goden latte 👍🏼
I so happy that u used this onlune chatting . I loved this part of show which they have totally forgot.
So now one night without ms is difficult Awww .tell him MS about ur area he will take the fuse of the person incharge for it🤣
What he is doing in PWG. Gonna break some shops 😆
Awesome first chap . Update soon. Thanks for update.
Give me some of ur power of updating soon. 😆

Lol see I was telling everyone that iinspired by kidnapping track...I just used that scene for prologue.. mainly I was inspired by their chats 😆

What is he doing PWG ...that's a good question...he should be aware of his sasural right😆😆

WELCOME Richu😳

Lol I'm not giving any fast updates dear 😆

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Diva200
Great update
So Sk is a don who has not much life
he communicates with Ms and chatting to her has become his lifeline.
She saved him from being killed by being handy with pepper spray.
So when will he find out about her whereabouts? Maybe when she tells him she is engaged ? pls update soon

Thank you Diva😛 ...lol nahi she doesn't tell him about her engagement...he gets restless when she stops chatting with him 😆😆

Hahhaha yes he has a criminal background attached to him now

Shaurya may fall for her more when he will find out that she is the same girl who saved his life😳

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cindy

@cvdmerwe40

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#135

GREAT FIRST CHAPTER DI😛

i love it so far😛

Mehak safe sk life 😛 i would love mehak to turn dark in this story😆

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOON😆

Edited by cvdmerwe40 - 7 years ago

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 7 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

He had seen her but didn't heard her name😆
He knows sonal's name😛
He would never try to reach her until their chats continues but he doesn't know what will he do if she disappears😳
Thank you Vinu🤗

I know baby it's ''hear'' her name 😡 but kya hai na i m too lazy to write hear again. I thought u would understand what i wanted to say. 😆 🤣

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Sangana

@Sangana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#137

Sham 👏👏👏 i loved your 1st chapter, one different story, waiting for the next chapter

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

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Posted: 7 years ago

#138

The first chapter was bingo buddy..I mean you have put up so much ...on it just like show ...the story intro was full on in 4G speed 😛

Shaurya's part of story was sad that how a normal dream guy chose to become sumthing else becoz of his parents sudden demise ...and not even cared abt his health ...?

Meets a girl online who helped him in a simple way to get sum good sleep ...who happens to save his life once in real ?

Guess his loneliness made him fall for the one who was a concerned friend ...

But with all this bad deeds he did ...will he able to redeem himself for her love or he will become devil and let her be his angle ?

Great start ...great part...

My love 😳 conti soon...

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paru

@enthusiastic

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Posted: 7 years ago

#139

Whole chapter was beautifully

Love shourya and mahek chats

Waiting for next update...

Update soon...

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: cvdmerwe40
GREAT FIRST CHAPTER DI😛
i love it so far😛

Mehak safe sk life 😛 i would love mehak to turn dark in this story😆

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOON😆

Thank you Cindy...I wanted to write today but iam dead tired

Need a fresh mind to write the next chapter😆