MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic #2: Chapter #45 Teaser pg62 11/29 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Loved this romantic update😳

This chapter will be my favorite after their first date chapter⭐️

Even though SK was angry he is still trying his best to make things work for them and they are ready to work out in their relationship...On the other hand looks like we are gonna discover a new love story of Mel and Malik ...MS must be looking gorgeous in that outfit and iam Waiting for his reaction when he will see her in the dress which he had gifted her 😳

Update the next chapter soon..

Thank you for the PM Kelly..

Originally posted by: austen_TanHa

Absolutely beautiful👏

You are a very gifted writer. I love the pace of this story, it's smooth and slow without dragging. Reading it is like drinking vintage scotch, you have to wait and savor each sip, feel it sliding down your throat before reaching for the glass again.

I thought the online friendship was a goldmine that the CVs were too stupid to truly explore, so I'm glad to see that became the foundation of MehRya's relationship and your story. I was delighted to read their relationship's gradual transformation from hatred to grudging respect to care and ultimately love. Even when Shaurya didn't know that Mehek was his MS, he felt drawn to her. He recognized her on some instinctual level that allowed him to accept her as MS pretty easily once he discovered the truth. The title of this story is perfect. It is magic but not the ephemeral, struck-by-lightning-as-soon-as-they-saw-each-other kind. It is the kind of magic that one has to invest time and energy in discovering because once you find it, it stays.

I would also like to commend you for pulling off the role reversal between the two with so much panache. Your Shaurya is calm and steady while Mehek is impulsive and headstrong which is quite opposite to their onscreen personas yet you've kept their core values intact making it easy to recognize the pair from TV in your story. I really like Malik here. I know he was the third wheel for a while but i liked him even then. He's a thorough gentleman and the kind of man I was hoping the CVs would be mature enough to show opposite Mehek post leap.

Kudos to you for dealing with the antagonists brilliantly. They came, they created the misunderstanding, then they left. The story remained about the protagonists and how they deal with the fallout of the villains' actions👏

Mehek and Shaurya are two adults here in an adult relationship and you prove that a story doesn't need constant meaningless drama to be entertaining.

This is a story I will be reading over and over again many times⭐️

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Romantic update Kelly

Those earrings must be so Beautiful and he have thought alot before picking it for mahek ...😳

And she allowed him to make her wear...the couple isn't bothered about how many eyes are watching them 😆

They are so into themselves

The USP of this story is their chats no matter how short they are they bring back Smile on faces...

Mel is such a caring friend and she is trying to put some brains in Malik head as well ...all they want to see is mahek happiness and her happiness is SK himself...

Will they really part ways ??

Looking forward for the next chapter..

Thank you for PM Kelly⭐️

Originally posted by: bworm

Diwali update.

My the glacier. .malik is melting.

Kk and MS chatting again. What is mehek planning? New memories.

Will we get to see a wedding without drama and misunderstandings.

Thank you for the beautiful uodate, so e hotel reading it. Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Thanks Kelly for the beautiful update ⭐️

Loved the Mehrya moments and Malik is still not realizing Mel's growing affection for him

Originally posted by: Diva200

Great Diwali update

So Ms gets diamond earrings from Sk and they flirt while he puts them on her which was probably noticed by Maliks mum and she gives him a light warning.

Sk makes it up with Malik and appreciates him looking after MS during the misunderstanding. So Mel is promised a dance with Malik for the gala..Sk msgs MS for a dance and she agrees..

Very well written, thank you for the pm pls update soon