Mehrya FF: Her Undercover Lover -Chapter 10 page42 08/15

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: Haseena2020
Happy Independence Day Kelly
Thank you for the pm and this beautiful update.
Shaurya is a such caring hubby and doting dad. His conversation with karuna maa about their home coming and the way he handles Meera is so beautiful , you actually bring the scene infront of my eyes and I could see how SK holds the fragile baby in his arm resting on his shoulder. later their conversation about small ceremony from their outfits to the arrangements are beautiful he wants all according to Mehak's wish.
And now the chudail Archie I am not having good vibe here she is upto something right, I hope she dont do anything to Mehrya or baby Meera. please do continue soon thank you so much dear

Strong men and their babies are my weakness, so I am thrilled you love SK interactions with his infant daughter. And you are right in thinking that he wants this small ceremony to be the dream wedding for his beloved Mehek as well, but with the remergence of Archie will he be able to is the question?

Took one night off and will start with my next round of updates...Im thinking DI will be next😊. Will pm you asap.

Thx for the fb 😛

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Another awesome update Kelly⭐️
That creature Archie is back not getting good vibes here Kelly 😆

Thx Sharl...and you are right, when has good ever followed this witch😉. Her arrival is never a good thing.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: bworm
Nice update.
All set to get married and Archie is set too to wrench the plans.

Looking forward to next update...Greedy that way

Thanks for the pm

Thrilled that you are enjoying this one too bworm, am aiming to increase the frequency of my updates so hopefully you will not have long to wait.

Thx for the fb😊

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Maya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#334

Woohoo so excited to see this update ! Awesome chapters !
Absolutely love the wedding preparations and seeing Mehek open up and taking charge of things herself while caring for her little one and trying hard to support her husband. Such a cute tiny family
Could totally understand Meheks anxiety about meeting her family again and love how Shaurya is so considerate . Using baby meera as a shield was brilliant he managed to get everyone off his back buy more time and divert everyone's attention to the little angel.
Most of all love how he unintentionally blew off Archie hung up on her as soon as he caught sight of two ladies them and only them are his top priority everything else faded away when he took the reigns and walked out for the day because his love and little one wanted to go for a walk while the wicked witch burns in envy 😆 😆 .
Really love this story ! Can't wait to see what happens next please update soon 😛

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Tanzia Scott

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Posted: 6 years ago

#335

you write some of the best story, please update soon

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: Houstonmom
Woohoo so excited to see this update ! Awesome chapters !
Absolutely love the wedding preparations and seeing Mehek open up and taking charge of things herself while caring for her little one and trying hard to support her husband. Such a cute tiny family
Could totally understand Meheks anxiety about meeting her family again and love how Shaurya is so considerate . Using baby meera as a shield was brilliant he managed to get everyone off his back buy more time and divert everyone's attention to the little angel.
Most of all love how he unintentionally blew off Archie hung up on her as soon as he caught sight of two ladies them and only them are his top priority everything else faded away when he took the reigns and walked out for the day because his love and little one wanted to go for a walk while the wicked witch burns in envy 😆 😆 .
Really love this story ! Can't wait to see what happens next please update soon 😛

Maya so nice to have fb from you😛. I thought it time that Mehek becomes an active participant in her own life again even though things are not back to normal. The wedding was the perfect opportunity and this must have been so encouraging to Shaurya. As to him, the man if not loving life for sure. Although a bit overprotective of them, he loves his two ladies to the max, no one comes before them as he aptly displayed when he disconnected that call, much to that womans dismay😆

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: latanzia
you write some of the best story, please update soon

Thanks so much...after a long hiatus I am aiming to push through these stories with greater frequency. I hope you enjoy them alli😊

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Anuteja10

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Posted: 6 years ago

#338

I unres on 42 page

Sorry for late reply😃

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thabassum

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Posted: 6 years ago

#339

I read all 9 chapters long back...I'm wondering how come I dint give my feedback back then 😕 ...

Sorry Kells about that ...

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thabassum

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Posted: 6 years ago

#340

My feedback since chapter four ...

So Shaurya was handling Mehak very carefully ...who lost her memory in the rafting incident ...and now is pregnant with his child ...loved how comforting Shaurya's concern and care towards her whenever she gets sad and confused ...but eventually he let her know that she is his wife ...and some what even she understood her love and bond she shares with him ..

Dr.sareena did her best and gave a perfect advice to the parent to be couple which they followed till mehek's delivery ...

And then comes the good news , Mehak delivered a baby girl ..

Making shaurya the happiest man / father ...it was really lovely the way he asked her to marry him again and be a part of his life ..she had to agree under his warmth .

And the baby met her rest of the family through video chat ..where all family members wanted to meet her but Shaurya ordered them that he wud bring his wife and daughter back to them soon..

Mehak's hesitation abt the marriage being simple is understandable becoz she dint even remember her name after loosing her memory ...and loved the way Shaurya broke it to her , her real identity ...in all this period Hina was a great assistant and good friend but I don't understand the nature of Archie here ...is she good or bad ...one side she helps Mehak with her sessions to bring her memory back and the other she is trying to get update about mehak's whereabouts and her behaviour seems to be odd...is she evil ?

Well guess have to wait and watch ...

Beautiful chapters Kelly...you are doing great ⭐️..