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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for ur new story
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Mannata Ve Mannata.. <3 (Part 2)


After taking next flight to Punjab, Pioneers reached Punjab and waited for car from Shaurya's home but what they saw left everyone shocked, especially Shaurya, he was shocked and more than that he was embarrassed.

"Shaurya? Are we gonna travel in this??" Everyone asks him, looking at tractors.

"You should have told us Shaurya that your family is going through tough times. We should have booked the cab then! Poor you!!" Khishtij sighed. Shaurya looked at him in anger and then at tractor drivers, who were looking at him with knowing smile. They all at once stopped smiling and goes away.

"Biji!!" Shaurya took her name frustrated and then looks at his friends who were staring the tractors without blinking their eyes.

"Charan Singh!!" Shaurya took one of the driver name loudly, gaining attention from all people.

"Chote Babu!!" Charan Singh came running to his side.

"Biji ko bolo jaakar ki Shaurya wapas Mumbai jaa raha hai!!" He spoke angrily.

"Kaun wapas jaa raha hai??" They all heard female voice from behind. Shaurya saw his Mom and goes to her. He touches her foot and hugged her tightly.

"I missed you Mom!!" Shaurya said.

"Missed you more Puttar Ji!!!" His Mom said "But why are you going back??" His Mom asked, she looks at tractors and then at Charan Singh.

"Charan Singh, ye sab kya hai?? Abhi tak yeh tractors yaha kyu hai. Jao inhe wapas farmhouse pe le jao!! Jaoo!!" She instructed Charan Singh, he obliged and went away with all tractors. All looked at her shocked, Shaurya stood there dumbfounded.

(Tractors were their to take agricultural goods which Khanna's had imported for their farmhouse and Biji asked all the drivers to take them in front of Shaurya to tease him :P)

"What?? Don't you know who must have done it??" His Mom asked him.

"Mom!! Biji kab sudhregi??" He asked her frustrated.

"Jab aap shaadi ke liye Haan keh dege tab Puttar ji!!" His Mom replied, pulling his cheeks.

"Ahhh.. Mom leave my cheeks. It hurts!!" Shaurya whined.

"Tussi menu apne dosto nahi milaoge??" She asked seeing his friends looking at them with adorable faces. Shaurya looks at them and sighs.

"Oh yeah.. Guys meet her. She is my Mom, my world, my first love." He introduced her to his friends, hugging her from back "And Mom.. they are my friends." He said.

Everyone smiles at her and did Namaste to her. She politely returns the favour.

"Aunty.. Bura na maane aap to ek baat puchu??" Raunak asks her, little hesitant.

"Ji puchiye na Puttar Ji!" She said.

"Hum ghar kis mein jayege?? Mujhe bohot zoro ki bhook lagi hai. Aapka beta hum logo ko bina breakfast karaye yaha ghaseet ke le aaya!!" He said, grinning widely.

"Huh?" His Mom replied, all shocked. Everyone too looked at him in disbelief.

"Shut Up Raunak!! Aunty don't mind him. He is little crazy.. hehehe" Sakshi spoke, covering up for her idiot hubby. She hit him from elbow on stomach. His Mom giggles and spoke "It's okay Bacha Ji. Raunak beta hum sab car mein ghar jayege. Car bahar hai. Aaiye!!"

(Actually Car were parks at parking lot and they were standing on wrong exit door of the airport. Guys, I don't travel that much so I don't know anything about Airport system.)

Everyone smiles and follows her taking their bags, they loads their bags in car trunk and starts to leave from airport but what they saw after going outside was enough for his Mom to go in shock. Thousands of fans and media was there to take just one glimpse of their favorite band members, who arrived in their city for the first time. It was becoming difficult for the security to handle them. His Mom looked at her son with proud in her eyes and then at crowd.

"Bloody Hell! Who told them about our arrival??" Khishtij asked frustrated.

"I didn't knew itne saare log aa jayege!!" Megha admitted, looking down. Everyone sighed and began to think how to escape from this situation. They were thinking when Shaurya Mom received one phone call.

~Phone Conversation~

Shaurya Mom - "Hello?"

Manasavi - "Hello Mom. It's me!"

Shaurya Mom - "Haan Beta Ji bolo??"

Manasavi - "Shaurya aur unke friends aa gaye??"

Shaurya Mom - "Haan. Aa gaye. Aap kaha hai?"

Manasavi - "Aap kaha hai Mom?? Dikh nahi rahe hai??"

Shaurya Mom - "Hum exit pe hai. Yaha pe bohot log hai to bahar nikal nahi paa rahe hai. Hazaaro fans aur media ne jagah ko rok raka hai! We are stuck!"

Manasavi - "What? Aap exit pe kya kar rahe ho?? Maine kaha tha na jaise hi wo log aa jaye aap unn sab ko lekar second exit pe aa jana. Ab aap kya karegi? Even I can't come there or else aur zyada log aa jayege!!" (worriedly)

Shaurya Mom - "Nahi aap mat aaiye Beta ji. Main kuch sochti hu. Abhi aap kaha hai??"

Manasavi - "Main to second exit pe hu ab waha se nikal rahi hu. Main na aisa karti hu Dad ko call kar deti hu wo Vicky ko call karke waha se mess clear karwa degi. Theek hai??"

Shaurya Mom - "Nahi. Vicky ko rehne do. He must be busy. (Shaurya overhears) Do one thing, call Mehul (Shaurya's elder brother) and ask him to send his best guards to take us out from here."

Manasavi - "Okay Mom. Main Mehul ko call kar deti hu. Bye. Take care."

Shaurya Mom - "Bye. Take care."

~Call ends~

(Actually Manasavi came there beforehand when she saw Megha's post on her Instagram, she quickly rushed to Airport informing Biji and her sister at home about their arrivals. Biji told her to inform Shaurya's Mom about the situation on her way to Airport. She did inform her Mom but she forgot the details and now they got stuck. Manasavi can't come in front of Media as she is pregnant and Khanna's are quiet famous in Amritsar and from the time they got to know that Khanna's elder Daughter-in-law is pregnant, they don't leave any chance to capture her one glance. This is the reason she didn't came in front. Though she is just 3 months pregnant but still she loves her privacy and avoids media as much as she can.)

Shaurya Mom's instructs driver to stop the car at the spot and to wait for guards to come. She makes few calls and within minutes airport authorities came there and rescued them and took them back inside the airport. After all Khanna's are no joke. They literally owns half of Amritsar, they were very powerful and off course Pioneers are not so easy people. They are singing sensation of India, they have their own standards.

"Bhai tu kaun hai?" Khishtij asks Shaurya, after seeing his family's power. He literally asked out of blue, after seeing that his Mom just one call Airport authorities came running.

"I'm second heir of Khanna Group of Companies. I'm second grandson of Lt. Virendra Khanna and Sarita Khanna. I'm second son of famous business tycoon Mr Devendra Khanna and Mrs Krishna Khanna." He smirks, leaving his friends in shock.

"Wha-What?? Khanna Group of Companies?? Dude.. You are Prince Shaurya!!" Megha spoke, eyes widened.

"I'm not any Prince yaar. I'm just son of another famous businessman of India. That's it. Chill guys!!" He said.

"No dude.. you aren't getting it. You are Prince. A real Prince." Sakshi said.

(In other words, he is a Prince in the world of Business.)

"You Mom is not a simple person. She is a celebrity in herself. She is not any random person. She is a famous fashion designer of India and Europe." Megha said.

Shaurya sighs and looks at other side, cursing himself for revealing his true identity to his friends, which he hid perfectly from past 5 years.

(He hid his identity because he wanted to achieve something by himself without using his family name. This is the reason he hid his identity from his friends too.)

"Shaurya, Come here for a minute." His mom called for him. He goes to her, leaving his shocked friends behind.

"Guys! Pinch me." Raunak spoke. Khishtij pinches him hard.

"Owww.. it's not a dream. It's not a dream. Rabba!!" He said. Everyone looks at him.

"What happened Raunak??" Sakshi asks him, all concerned.

"Maine uski Mom ke saamne kya kuch nahi bol dia? Ab kya hoga?" He said. Everyone looks at him in disbelief. Khishtij hits hir arm and shouts on him for scaring them.

"Shut up you idiot. Keep quiet and let see what happens next!" He said.

On the other side, Krishna informs Shaurya to leave the place from second exit and she will handle the situation in front. Shaurya obeys her and leaves from second exit, along with his friends.

Here Krishna clear out the mess and joins them on their way to Khanna Mansion.

They all reached the Mansion in 2 hours as the media didn't left their way and in the end Pioneer's gave them what they wanted, a small interview and few photos.

After reaching home, first thing what Shaurya did is he silently zoomed out from his car along with his guitar and stood at some place from where no one can see him. After that he signaled his Mom and his friends to go in with their luggage, leaving his luggage behind in the car. His Mom rolled her eyes and went inside without saying anything, knowing very well what her son is up to. His friends too followed her in confusion.

They entered into Mansion but her Mom stopped them at main gate of the Mansion, his friends left awestruck seeing the inner beauty of the mansion from outside. They were literally gawking at single thing, feeling lucky to have friend like Shaurya in their lives.

After few minutes, they saw his Mom coming out with one big thaal in her hands, along with her a girl in her late 20's is following her from behind (Manasavi), she is holding an old lady hand, who is holding a big stick to support her fragile figure (Biji). They reached the door, Manasavi and Biji's face fell down when they didn't saw Shaurya there.

"Krishna, wo nalayak kaha hai? Aur baaki ke saare kaamchor log kaha hai iss ghar ke?" Biji said. Manasavi and Krishna chuckled. Even Pioneers smiled seeing how cool Biji is.

"Bebe, Shaurya to wapas chala gaya, Tussi jo kaarnaama airport pr kiaa si usse wo gussa hoke wapas chala gaya." Krishna replied, winking at his friends. His friends grinned widely because now they understood why Shaurya didn't joined them. Manasavi saw this and through her eyes asks Krishna "What is happening?" Krishna just winked at her, like she was assuring her to "Just wait and watch." They shared a mischievous smile.

"Kya? Wo nalayak phir bhaag gaya. Manu.. abhi call mila uss khote nu aur mere nalayak bete nu, jisne usse janam dia. Aaj dono ki khair nahi. Phone mila na, ja!!" Biji said, all frustrated. Manasavi looked at Krishna and she blinked her eyes. Manasavi left to make fake call and here Shaurya was all ready to execute his plan.

"Krishna, apne nalayak puttar ne bol de wapas aa jaye warna usne apni Biji ka gussa-" Biji stopped at once, when she heard a voice. She grinned widely and looked at Krishna with anger. Krishna gave her naughty smile and said "Main ki karti? aapka pota hai hi aisa!!" His friends enjoyed their bond.

Everyone followed the voice, Manasavi too joined them. Even remaining Khanna members too came by then.

(A/n :Plug in your earphones and hear the song while reading the update.)

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3wGPjDTqJxI[/YOUTUBE]

Pioneer other members too joined Shaurya by quickly taking out their instruments from the covers. They settled themselves at shed under the tree.

Shaurya - Aye dil laaya hai bahaar apnon ka pyar kya kehna (starts singing)

Manasavi - Milein hum chhalak utha khushi ka khumaar kya kehna (She joins him and hugs him tightly)

Krishna - Khile khile chehron se aaj ghar hai mera gule gulzaar kya kehna
Khile khile chehron se aaj ghar hai mera gule gulzaar kya kehna (Krishna came to them and caress his son's face. Then Manasavi and Krishna both sings together taking Shaurya towards Biji.)

(Shaurya kneels down in front of Biji and touches her feet for blessings. Biji blesses him and caresses his face but then pinch his ears. Everyone laughs, Shaurya hugs her tightly.)

Biji - Aye dil laaya hai bahaar apnon ka pyar kya kehna (Biji sings breaking the hug)

Shaurya - Milein hum chhalak utha khushi ka khumaar kya kehna (He sings while cupping Biji's face smilingly)

(After that Shaurya goes to his Dad and touches his feet and hugs him. Like this he went to others and meet them. First he goes to Mehul, where Manasavi joins them and they tell him about Manasavi's pregnancy. He gets very happy and congratulates them by hugging them and then went to Vicky, he punches him on his stomach and hugs him. They share few family moments.)

Krishna - Hum tum yoon hi milte rahein mehfil yoon hi sajti rahe (She sings hugging Biji from behind)

Devendra - Bas pyaar ki yehi ek dhun har subah shaam bajti rahe (He sings adoring his family from far, blessing them)

Manasavi - Gale mein mehekte rahein pyaar bhari baahon ke haar kya kehna (She sings bringing Devendra in front and hugging him, just like daughter hugs her father. Everyone adores their father-daughter bond.)

Everyone, including Pioneers together - Khile khile chehron se aaj ghar hai mera gule gulzaar kya kehna (They all sing together)

(Everyone's attention got diverted by some girls voice which came from other side of the shed. Manasavi smiles and looks at Shaurya from behind. She then looks at Biji who was sitting their with big smile on her face. Every other Khanna member smiles knowing who she is. Pioneers stood there in confusion and Shaurya, well, he was looking at the direction without blinking his eyes. As if, if he removes his eyes from there, he might lose something precious. Everyone waited for that girl to come out but she didn't came, everyone can just see her reflection behind the clothes hanged up there. Shaurya gets restless and in the end sings going towards the direction, thinking to get a glimpse of that girl, as he got mesmerized by her voice at once. He didn't even notice that all his family members and friends are in shock.)

Shaurya - Aye dil laaya hai bahaar apnon ka pyar kya kehna (He sings while moving)

Girl behind curtains - Milein hum chhalak utha khushi ka khumaar kya kehna (She sings standing up from her place, looking at Shaurya's side and smiles behind the curtains.)

Manasavi - Khile khile chehron se aaj ghar hai mera gule gulzaar kya kehna (She comes in between and blocks Shaurya's way. Till then that girl starts to leave from there and Manasavi signals Biji to join her. Shaurya tries to go but Biji stops him and sings twirling with him, holding his hands.)

Biji - Khile khile chehron se aaj ghar hai mera gule gulzaar kya kehna. (She sings while playing with Shaurya. Everyone joins them and Shaurya too at once forgets about the girl and enjoys with his family, but he gets that girl glimpse from behind when she was leaving from there. He thought who can she be but later than ignores when Manasavi again blocks his way.)

~Song ends~



To be continued.. :P

Next Shaurya and his friends grah pravesh *rofling* and Shaurya meet with the girl *wink wink*

Do tell how was it?

See ya! :D



PS - Sanjh Di.. Mannata means wishes😊 I have taken the title from Sonu Nigam song Mannata Ve Mannata as I liked the song very much 😛😛



Shrishti.. Yes! I'm big fan of Korean series, especially of Lee Min Ho and Jung II Woo😉☺️



Thank you everyone for your support. Keep suporting and loving me like this. Thank you very much😃

Edited by CinderellaGirl - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: shristi0706

Tht was really good!!! R u a fan of Korean dramas? U certainly are a fan of Lee min ho... I can see tht from ur siggie...

Nice story... Reminds me of a Taiwanese drama Fabulous body which centered around a music band...
Looking forward to reading the next chapter...


Thank you😛

Next chapter updated. Check!!😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: TheLifeDiaries

Di...this crazily insane. I loved it. I'm damn curious now. Shaurya is the band singer...you know how much I like musical stories...thank you for bringing this story. I'm already in love. And BTW I'm not sure that girl is Mahek or not. I'll be waiting eagerly for you to update this and the other story of yours. Thank you again. 😃



Thank you baby😛


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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: thilss


Keep writing monkey. Promising n refreshing 🥳


Teddy😉


This story is just like me😆 "Promising and refreshing"😉😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thabassum..

Res res res sing sing sing sing 😈 🤣



When it will get UNRES??🤔
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehatara

Res.

I'll come back tomorrow Cindy.😃



Tomorrow is Today😉😆

Unres it soon😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Res
UNres ...

Wowww loved the speed of this chapter...hope you Continue to give us Updates with the same speed😉

So their family is a big shot in Punjab...
It would have been good if you have used zkm characters nam so that we can relate and imagine the characters while reading😛

Biji is such cool character and iam Loving the Punjabi tadka you are adding😆

Abhi ladki ko kab Tak pardy mein rakhna Hai 🤣

Waiting for the next chapter😳😳
Thank you for the PM 😛
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#49

Originally posted by: Shamrouz


Okk iam gonna believe you and if possible give us quick updates ...so that we don't forget the last chapters 😆😆


Lo de dia next chapter within 24 hours😉😆
Writing this story is fun for me😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandu0123

Congrats for ur new story

Inserting plot and nice update😃
Continue asap 😉😆



Thank you😛


Updated next part.. Check!!😉

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