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Cindy_Daisy

@Cindy_Daisy

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: sarroo
awesome update.. thanks for the pm.. waiting for the next update

Thank you Sarroo😛

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Nandu0123

@Nandu0123

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#232

Cindy hay kaya kiya tum na 😡

I don't know what should I ask or not so many questions in my mind now

Sk knows ms how and she is reason he leave the house 😕

What happened in their past and

who is shivin kuharana 😲 and why mehrya are anger with him

Ms want to take revenge why ??????????

The fight between sk and his friends wo sab drma tha 😲

Poor pioneers I feel pity for them 😆😆😆

Sk have cool family and why father and son have differences in their relationship

And boys vs girls 😉

And mehrya tashan

And nehal also is here 😃

Totally awesome update cindy

Well written 👏👏👏

Waiting for next one😉😛

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#233

Cyndy u have changed the plot that's what i was wondering what happened suddenly why Ranauk took Mehak's name.

So Shaurya was the boy Mehak was supposed to meet before she goes to US. She didn't meet him so Shaurya is hurt but has he seen her before confusing 😕

Dance face off was marvellous, they gave good tukkar to each other.
Shaurya hugged his father & they forgave each other. don't know what was the reason of the reason. 😕

Thank for PM Cyndy

Vinu

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

Coolbie

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#234

When is the next part coming😃

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#235

plot change karke poora raita pehla diya 😆
so confusing now Mehak & Shaurya know each other since 5 yrs. but why did they separate 😒
What Shaurya's brother & bhabhi said. why they were happy seeing MehRya together 😒

Who is this Shivin Khurana & Nehal also Khurana 😕
MehRya ke beech yeh kabab mein haddi hai kya 'Shivin' both Shaurya & Mehak were cursing this 'Shivin' ''I hate you''. after they saw photo in the mobile. 🤔

pls clear all the doubts of your readers soon 😆 otherwise we will come to our own conclusion 🤣

pls update next part soon, don't take month to update 🤣

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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Mishtilove

@Mishtilove

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#236

unres my comment on page 30.

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#237

kya characters hai la jawab hai 😉

now who would be playing Shivin post his photo also 😳

Thanks for PM

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snehatara

@snehatara

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#238

Big thanks for this bada waala update Cindy.⭐️👏🤗

Appreciate all the effort you have put in to write this chapter and

the time spent on doing your homework.👍🏼❤️

Suspense element creeps into the story and now you are unveiling the

fact that Shaurya and Mehek know each other since 5 years or may have

been acquainted with each other through their elders all those years ago.

But there is twist and both have had strained relationships with their near

and dear ones due to something that happened then. Shaurya blaming

his father and Mehek has turned unforgiving towards her own. The phone

call Manasavi did in the previous was to their mother probably who did not

respond to her and refused to give her the time and just put the phone down.

Was Mehek supposed to meet Shaurya but she refused to do so and moved

to USA, is that the reason behind all this sourness, did Shaurya fall for her

unknowingly or what ?😲🤔 Cindy, can u see how confused your readers

are right now. It's not just me.

And the biggest and the most important person in question whom both Mehek and

Shaurya hate so much Shivin Khurana !!!!! Who in the God's name is this fella ?

How is Nehal Khurana related to this mysterious person ? Shaurya seems to be

fond of this person and has a good rapport too.

Entire Lohri scene, songs selection, dancing sequences, the pairing, elders too

keen to give the younger ones company and competition and the rituals have

been penned down aesthetically.

What was told to Shaurya by his Bhaiyya and Bhabhi to make him aware of

Mehek's importance and why his friends did the OTT drama to change his

mood and make him realise some home truths also need to be brought into

limelight.

Waiting for the next part updation Cindi. Me and all other curious souls are

waiting for u to come up with next part.😳 Do update soon.⭐️

Thanks for the PM.🤗

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Cindy_Daisy

@Cindy_Daisy

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: Misthilove
Res...when is update coming???
unres..look di im so desperate for ur update that i res my comment before u updated😆
now coming to update it fullon dhamakedar update ,but left me with so much questions.who is shivin???thank u for this mahaupdate im eagerly waiting for the nxt update.update soon .lots of❤️and🤗for u.

Thank you Mishti ❤️

I know there are many questions but all of your questions and confusions will get clear with next update😛

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Cindy_Daisy

@Cindy_Daisy

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: Sanjh30
Maha update was maha long 😆 I enjoyed it though 😆
I'm really confused here,I thought Shaurya was meeting mahek for the first time par after reading this update I came to know they have known each other for the past five years.
What happened between them that they were separated? Were they lovers?
And who is this shivin? Kabab mein haddi? 😆
Update next part soon please
Overall,a good chapter 👏 Bahut mehnat lagi hogi na? Good job girl 👏
Keep writing and thanks for the pm ⭐️

Thank You Di ❤️

Yeah.. it took me around 3 days to pen down this part. I changed everything 3-4 times and in the end took the decision to change the plot a little. I always loved Thriller, suspense and mystery and it was a long time I didn't wrote anything so I changed the plot in the end😆😉

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