Tomorrow's Promise - A Mehrya FF Chapter 6 Page 45 updated 23/07 - Page 7

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

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<font size="4">Finally tibs mainey padh liya 😆</font>

<font size="4">Women you are just exceptional...</font>

<font size="4">The way u wrote , described shaurya as fire in mehaks life ...</font>

<font size="4">And mehak</font>

<font size="4">as rain in shauryas life ...after reading this OS ,I was like</font>

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<font size="4">How they both hold ther perspective memories for each other and how they we're actually they both were longing to want each other...</font>

<font size="4">Everything was very beautifully written...</font>

<font size="4">You deserve a</font>

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<font color="#333332" face="Open Sans, Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" size="4">This was a piece of art ,</font>

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<font color="#333332" face="Open Sans, Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" size="4">You are totally fabulous tibu⭐️</font>

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Thabs as usual your comments are worth waiting for ... thank you so much my friend..
Glad you could finally make the time 🤗

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87

Hi Thibs,

Sorry for commenting so late. Have become quite lazy in the recent times, and have been loafing around for some time.

The metaphorical comparison of MEhek with the rain was awesome. Shaurya is really a person scorched from his past experiences and needs to be healed, and MEhek's soothing presence seems to be doing just that.

"He had like a fool let her go, when she was his, asking like a madman for the equilibrium of dry heat. .He had again not fought hard enough when she walked out on him just when the moisture had started seeping in. He had made his way again in that coolness and had, horrified seen it almost being snatched away forever from him.
He had made a pact then, to barter anything, to have an exclusive right on that reservoir of love. Nothing less would be enough to quench his thirst ."

And that truly sums up the whole of it...⭐️👏

Hey Jhankaar .. no worries mate ..
Thank you for reading this ..
BTW are you on Holiday?

Originally posted by: chandrima02

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<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">Fire and Rain are complimentary. While Rain helps in creating new life, Fire has the power to destroy the same. Fire can protect, while Rain can submerge. Rainhas the power to control a raging Fire. If my memory has not totally greyed out, what I read is that the fiery earth got cooler due to incessant rain for ages.</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">Even though it might be self-destructive at the end, but seems that this insanely raging Fire will always be running towards the Rain unabashedly, without any inhibitions, in order to cool down. I can only pray that the Fire does not diminish to meet and mate with the Rain, even it is destruction only, in the process.</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">Again not a small one. But as it might be one of the last ones before I probably take a week's break, I couldn't help it.</font>

Chandrima absolutely and that is my point a fire that can burn it also
Protect and rain can be nurturing yet a destroyer
It is what trait of their that is brought forth

Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev

Wow very nice! Beautifully written once again 👏
Will you be continuing this? Please do so 😊
Thank you darl ⭐️

Hey thanks Saanjh ... honestly have not thought about it yet
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author's note
This was not supposed to be but happened as a result of a midnight tete-a-tete with a friend ...
Some relationships are stranger than fiction and the bonds stronger than what time or convention would expect ..
The thing with a triangle is it is difficult to pin point which one is the third angle ... who is in between whom...
The only thing different for this element is that it came on scene a little later ...does it make its claim less stronger ... Because it is the third element
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Part 3 - Wind
It danced trough the leaves ..happily prancing along . It liked being gentle the kind they called a breeze, that made flowers sway and lightly ruffle the long tresses of beautiful maidens .
It liked playing with the children running on the grass and carrying the perfume of the beloved to the heart that desired it .
It liked being gentle ,but it could pick speed to strip the trees of the yellowing leaves and carry the snowflakes across the mountain .
It liked being gentle , especially when smell of rain overpowered it..it liked to move slowly then, to create those little swirls of mist , that write their own story on the blank canvas of sky .
It liked the company of rain, it desired it to be only his , but would it be selfish enough ..yes once a while when drunk on its own need and its ability to do so ..it will whip a speed strong enough to carry the rain far far way ..to let it pour where it would ...coz it would in its arms hold that ability to let rain be the captive ...
It could when it needed to be turn itself in a hurricane and with rain as its companion ,wreak havoc should it desired to ...but the wind liked being gentle.
It would because it could, once it had reveled in its power over that surreal life giving force and then its gentleness would come back ...those besieged by the thirst would call it back, and it led rain gently where it was needed the most.
The fire below could burn all it wanted ..It liked playing with fire , when it roared and thrashed its limbs to catch the invisible wind .. ..it would whip the fire stronger ..the fire in its anger would burn even more, increasing its periphery of scorching and scalding and yet could not catch it ...
The angry puff of smoke that that the fire would throw ..the wind would discard them wide and sundry and then howl with laughter...
But then would come the rain ..the rain in all its gentlenss would start pouring containing the fire and the wind would calm too , the fire would reduce to embers glowing with a rage spent and waiting to be wanting to be extinguished ...
The rain will chide the wind and then start pouring ..harder ... for that was what the fire required.
The wind would smile indulgently -even though it liked being gentle...

A wonderful piece of work, yet again self-contained 👏. It's a reality that "fact is stranger than fiction", otherwise a few things can never be explained in mere worldly words.

Beauifully written Tibs...Loved it...So its the wind this time!!!

Very well written tibu...

Originally posted by: chandrima02

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">A wonderful piece of work, yet again self-contained 👏. It's a reality that "fact is stranger than fiction", otherwise a few things can never be explained in mere worldly words.</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">I am going to come back and update my take in some time.</font>

Jaldi aa

Originally posted by: shristi0706

Beauifully written Tibs...Loved it...So its the wind this time!!!

Hey Shristi ... thanks Hon
Glad you liked it