Tomorrow's Promise - A Mehrya FF Chapter 6 Page 45 updated 23/07 - Page 5

Heyy

Diii..👏👏👏

This is so impactful. Each line forces you to think anew about the nature of these two people and the relationship that they share. The fire and water analogies are perfect. and cannot wait to see what happens when fire and water come together.

Tibs... this was amazing. I love the way you have described their feelings.

Originally posted by: snehatara

@tibs you are a gifted writer and I mean it. ⭐️ 👏

Enjoyed the second part thoroughly. Happy writing.

Thanks for PM.😊

Stella (Vaishali !) your inference is outstanding. Great analysis. A big big 🤗.

Sneha, thank you dear 🤗

Originally posted by: dsr11

finally read it! i like that expression "reservoir of love"😳. felt good letting your words glide over me. great job, tibs!

Thanks Rekha

Originally posted by: -ParAnJas-

Heyy

Good piece of writing ...very deep indeed ..

mera brain to generally bhi itna deeply ni sochta ...

Emotions are superly expressed...

Keep writing ..

loved it

Thanks Jas... mera brain soch bhi leta hai to I get caught up more by illogical stuff to feed my Karelas

Wow Awesome update.
Beautifully written, loved it.

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

Diii..👏👏👏

First of all congratulations on being such a wonderful writer..

This piece of writing is generally covering up the lives of the persons named shaurya khanna and mehek sharma..the general statements that you have made abou the different sorrows that they have gone through...beautifully explicit writing..

The personifications you have used...the scorching heat affected earth in need of the thick peltering sheet of rain...

That was just apt..

A person deprived of love when understands his or her need of love..care..is when u can trully definw a person...and u have done that...a great job di!!!!!!! Loved it..

U just need to stretch ur arms to get what u need...its all there but u need to accept its presence...

U Have beautifully expressed what u needed to explain...

Thank you for such a gr8 work..

Thanks for the pm di...

And plzzz keep on writing..😊

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Thanks Appu dear for your kind words

wow! Tibs! Simply superb!

You've captured the characters in their elements and their relationship to elements so beautifully!

I'm gonna look at tonight's episode differently because of this.

Thank you for writing.