Tomorrow's Promise - A Mehrya FF Chapter 6 Page 45 updated 23/07 - Page 18

Originally posted by: Vedika211

Hi Tibs. Sorry I could not respond yesterday - the weekend just got away from me.

I strongly believe that the fiction you like says a lot about you. From Harry Potter to Faiz Ahmed Faiz, its not just the range but the quality of your references shows me where you get the sensitivity you bring to the story. I think your Mehak and Shaurya are really true to the initial characterisations of the show, but they are also developing and finding resources within themselves to learn how to be together and learn how to be there for each other. I like that it did not take 20 chapters for Mehak to think about things from Shaurya's point of view. After your very powerful first chapter, I thought she was going to hold on to the intensity of her feelings for a long time, simply because otherwise she would not have been able to hate him for long. But Mehak is not that sort of a person, and even in her moment of utmost turmoil she is able to listen to someone else and think about something from someone else's point of view.

So we'll go to the police station tomorrow with them, and lets see what the future brings for these two.

As always, thanks for writing😊

Originally posted by: shristi0706

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This SK is so true to his character as depicted in the show...I agree he wasn't at fault...an unfortunate incident that happened unintentionally but i cannot deny Mehak's pain..They were her parents--she was orphaned at the tender age of 8 or 9. Had not been for the love n care of her uncles n aunties, she wouldn't been this chirpy n positive...

As for Shaurya, i will not lie if i say that i feel sad for him..in the show too...As Kaanta chachi had once said - he ll only bring bad luck for anyone who he is associated with.

Tibs, but what i like about ur story is that u have used their online chats as a means to clear their misunderstandings. If they talk to each other as strangers , thts when they ll b able to understand each other's POV.

Lastly, apologies for commenting so late...Hope u r having a great time attending the conference..Conferences r so much fun😈( i get bored at times)

Originally posted by: DiyaKash

As always, both a thought provoking and an enjoyable read!

Tibs, Why the title 'Dust storm'? I read your line about
Karuna walking away 'unburdened' and that got me thinking how the storm chipped
away everything she held close and tight. And all these particles that came
undone in this storm have reached far and wide and hasn't left anyone
untouched. It has created a haze so strong, that one is bound to lose sight of
oneself and become adrift. To come unscathed from this is impossible. You can only emerge anew - and it takes
another storm within as strong as this, to settle the dust, to clear the
muddle, to wash away the blackness of the soot...

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Her settling into the car in the end and how you describe
the storm raging outside also stood out to me. How unnatural the rigid
stillness in the car is, as compared to the storm raging outside? It is
not the silence that we have in the car, it is the stillness... where at some
subconscious level, you are acutely aware of all the emotions emanating from
you and the other - the desolation, the hurt, the guilt, the disappointment. If
you strip away the facade of numbness, the layers of complexity we humans add
and let loose the raw emotions within, the stillness would be replaced by
something as ferocious as the clash of rain and wind outside!

<p>How profound is it about truth being a shapeshifter! Fact is
that Showrya as a child killed her parents. And there are many truths to that fact
- it was an accident, he was just a child, the man that child grew up to is a
force to reckon with, the choice a mother made saved that child, the blow that
he is now dealt with might shrink him to nothing, her parents death remains
unavenged and needs the justice it deserves. And in spite of all these truths,
the biggest one of it all is that she is irrevocably in love with him! And it
isn't one truth she will have to reconcile with, it is each one of these
contradictory truths that she will have to come to terms with. What an uphill
battle that alone is!

Keep the chapters coming Tibs, I don't think we will settle just for another few!😊

Originally posted by: tibs09

Hi Shristi it is a mother of all conflicts... ain't it ... I would not be going there had ST not forced our hand
BTW me In tere shehar mein for the conference

Originally posted by: tibs09

Diya Truth is what Is being disseminated by Nani ... did it shift its shape coming from her
In addition to what you speak about , there are many ways it shifted
The dust storm is blinding .The thunderstorm where wind plays a part to carry the rain will ultimately bring the clarity
The rain pours once it decides to quench the fire ( a little bit of anomaly but this rain will never want to extinguish the fire )
The earth need to unburden coz only then with the wind it creates the thunder storm
To bring the rain .

Originally posted by: shristi0706

Whta r u saying!! Seriously...Hope u r having a good time here. How long is ur stay in my beautiful sheher??

Originally posted by: tibs09

Shri I am here till Wednesday

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

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<font size="4">Read the update ...</font>

<font size="4">You really are full of talents tibs...</font>

<font size="4">Mehrya</font>

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<font size="4">convo was heart warming...</font>

<font size="4">The thunderstorm was perfect</font>

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<font size="4">The way kk was trying to explain things from shauryas POV was touching...</font>

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<font size="4">So it's an love - hate story of mehrya from now on...</font>

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<font size="4">So now mehak decided to go with shaurya , afraid what her family wud be thinking</font>

<font size="4">And big question..how will she live with him ?</font>

<font size="4">Great job with update</font>

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<font size="4">Plz continue ji...</font>

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