Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5 - Page 90

Nice update dear, very well written..Felt like watching ZKM with different story

Originally posted by: shristi0706

Thanks alot Simmi (did I get it right????)

I too wanted to see his anguish n hurt of losing Mehak...the only scene which could do justice to his turmoil was when he threatens Kaanta chachi of burning the entire parathewali galli if she doesn't tell him about Mehak's whereabouts.. KV had nailed the scene with perfection 😉

You have written this in an hour? Are you serious?
It takes me one week or even more than that to complete one whole chapter 😆
You are genius girl! 👏
Lovely update and very well written with no typing mistakes ⭐️
Looking forward to MehRya scenes in next chapter
Thank you darl 😊
Love n hugs,
Saanj 😎

Read all the parts in one go.. Just loved it.. Eagerly waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Apne hi muh miya mitoohtu ??

Since tune like dediya meta res pec...main apna res edit nahi karungi...

So no cumnts from me for this update 😡😆

Originally posted by: tibs09

I am sure this Aashima will create even more complications Shrishti even if Mehak and Shaurya try to resolve their differences..
Please update very soon .. now that we know a Mehrya scene is coming up ... intezaar nahi Hota

Originally posted by: chandrima02

@Shristi, mera dil toot gaya 😭!! I have imagined that this chapter would be of Realisation then Confession followed by a brutal Rejection. But I got only Realization 😒!! Anyways, at least kuchh toh milaa. I have waited so eagerly for an update for almost a month. Super update indeed, even though no MehRya together. But I know that the fruit of patience is always sweet 😃. So I am waiting. Shaurya has realised, but you have not pinpointed the exact moment. May I request you to write that in detail, may be when he confesses or may be later on when they have a heart to heart. Yes, I do demand a heart to heart!!! His inner turmoils have come out very clearly. His demons force him to imagine that he is not worthy of enjoying the finer happinesses of mortal life. Hope he changes his outlook very soon. Eagerly waiting for your next...

Originally posted by: Smiley327

Nice update dear, very well written..Felt like watching ZKM with different story

Originally posted by: TheLifeDiaries

Yeah Di. You got the name right 😳. Yes Karan was damn good in that scene and I guess that scene was really helpful to me in imagining this chapter of yours. Thanks again and I'll be waiting for the next update. Hopefully I'll get the PM bout update really soon. 😉😛