Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5

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candy02

@candy02

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#831

@Shristi, my sincere apologies for being so late in commenting. I was hallucinating that I have already commented. Discovered the blunder only a couple of days back. I must admit the last chapter has been a super update. He is clueless about what is happening to him. Why he is so restless !!! Why Mahek's image is refusing to vacate his mind even for a nanosecond for days no end !!! Why he is so desperate to get a glimpse of the same face whom he used to despise so much !!! Why he is so desperate to talk to her at any cost !!! I am really expecting that the next chapter will be blasting with the Realization of Shaurya and a subsequent Confession only to be followed by a brutal Rejection. Am I expecting too much !!! But you have set my limits pretty high. Please update ASAP. I am literally waiting to pounce on it ...

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jhankarbeats87

@jhankarbeats87

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+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#832

@shri lappie mila? Kab milega update yaar? We'r waiting...😎

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#833

Originally posted by: chandrima02
@Shristi, my sincere apologies for being so late in commenting. I was hallucinating that I have already commented. Discovered the blunder only a couple of days back. I must admit the last chapter has been a super update. He is clueless about what is happening to him. Why he is so restless !!! Why Mahek's image is refusing to vacate his mind even for a nanosecond for days no end !!! Why he is so desperate to get a glimpse of the same face whom he used to despise so much !!! Why he is so desperate to talk to her at any cost !!! I am really expecting that the next chapter will be blasting with the Realization of Shaurya and a subsequent Confession only to be followed by a brutal Rejection. Am I expecting too much !!! But you have set my limits pretty high. Please update ASAP. I am literally waiting to pounce on it ...

Chandrima thank u so much dear n pls don't apologize... It's absolutely alright! I hope I live upto ur expectations... Well there are only few more chapters left for this story to end...

As for the update, unfortunately I don't have my laptop this week with me n I don't think I ll get it before 20th 😭😭

Let me tell u a secret - you r one of those readers whose comments I anticipate the most... Coz I love how u analyze every detail in a chapter. Believe me when I say I welcome criticism, I sincerely mean tht coz I would definitely love to improve as a writer. Thank u so much Chandrima.

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#834

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87
@shri lappie mila? Kab milega update yaar? We'r waiting...😎

No yaar I didn't get my lappy yet... I m waiting too😭😭

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

Coolbie

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#835

Originally posted by: shristi0706

No yaar I didn't get my lappy yet... I m waiting too😭😭

Kab tak aayga lappy😭

Yaar na update degi Hai ...na feedback deti Hai

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Kab tak aayga lappy😭
Yaar na update degi Hai ...na feedback deti Hai

Sham my bacchi... WHT to do yaar! Even I m getting so bored without my laptop.

N now tumhara hi update padhne jaa rahi hoon.. Had reserved it!!

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#837

Aww Shristi I think I am as gutted as you are over your laptop issues😭 Im so want another update.

Do you have the chapter in mind that you can send via multiple pm...i am more than willing to compile them and post on your behalf..yeah I'm that desperate.😊

Seriously though if there is any way at all I can help let me know.

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

Coolbie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#838

Originally posted by: crtkelly
Aww Shristi I think I am as gutted as you are over your laptop issues😭 Im so want another update.
Do you have the chapter in mind that you can send via multiple pm...i am more than willing to compile them and post on your behalf..yeah I'm that desperate.😊

Seriously though if there is any way at all I can help let me know.

Aww that's so sweet of you Kelly... instead of threatening her you are willing to help her out😛

But trust me it's more easy to write a Chapter on mobile... atleast iam doing that 😆

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

Coolbie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#839

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-
Ha ha ha ...😆

Yeh Mogamboo wali hansi thi Kya ??

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Shristi

@shristi0706

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#840

Originally posted by: crtkelly
Aww Shristi I think I am as gutted as you are over your laptop issues😭 Im so want another update.
Do you have the chapter in mind that you can send via multiple pm...i am more than willing to compile them and post on your behalf..yeah I'm that desperate.😊

Seriously though if there is any way at all I can help let me know.

Hey thts really sweet Kelly but I hv written only 1 page... There is still much re to write.. I m glad tht u are so desperate for the next chapter. It makes me feel so elated. Seriously can't thank u enough dear😳

I ll take Sham's advice n try writing it on my phone... Let's see how it works out