Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5 - Page 79

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shristi0706


I know the flashback has been running for quite a long time😆 Wht to do? When I start writing the chapters, ideas kept on popping and I thought of including them as well in the story jiski wajah aaj yeh flashback itna lamba khich gaya...

1 se 104 tak ka safar...phew


I can understand That.. ideas keep coming...toh koi baat nahi tu Continue Kar FB ko 204 pages tak ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice one Shristi
After he was away from her for 15 days he started to feel her imp in his life. He was missing her badly utthe baithe wohi nazara a raha thi bechare ko.😆 as soon as he stepped in he got Shock of his life Mehek's wedding 😭 toh rona toh ayega na 😉 how Shaurya would take this news, how he will get back her trust for him & her love for him. Yeh dekhna hai

Thanks for PM dear

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shristi di..
This update had the perfect length...

Those magical fifteen days!!!! It seems that those fifteen days have worked out to do wonders..and it would just take him to realize that he loves her...
But he really needs to be quick!!!!
But that sudden call...if mehek has heard the mother son conversation it would surely move her...
But shaurya has a lot to repair and very less time to do it...
Plzzz di...make him realise as soon as possible..and i want this god damn marriage of mehek amd ajay to end...

Shaurya and mehek's relo can take time...but the quick repairs are the first priorities...

Plzzz do update soon...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Shri! What an update 🤗 an emotional confused Handsome 😳 I have one question...did Mahek heard all of that? He threw his phone with frustration but did he end the call? 🤔

The desperate aunties and the question Did she throw herself at you too? I love those parts!

Thanks Shri...I really like this update. Handsome battling his thoughts and what's in his heart. OH I forgot to mention the pics...I really love them 😳
Edited by melissaR - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Nice one Shristi

After he was away from her for 15 days he started to feel her imp in his life. He was missing her badly utthe baithe wohi nazara a raha thi bechare ko.😆 as soon as he stepped in he got Shock of his life Mehek's wedding 😭 toh rona toh ayega na 😉 how Shaurya would take this news, how he will get back her trust for him & her love for him. Yeh dekhna hai

Thanks for PM dear

Vinu


Thanks Vinu.. Shaadi toh hona hi hai.. If he doesn't act fast, he ll lose her forever
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

Shristi di..

This update had the perfect length...

Those magical fifteen days!!!! It seems that those fifteen days have worked out to do wonders..and it would just take him to realize that he loves her...
But he really needs to be quick!!!!
But that sudden call...if mehek has heard the mother son conversation it would surely move her...
But shaurya has a lot to repair and very less time to do it...
Plzzz di...make him realise as soon as possible..and i want this god damn marriage of mehek amd ajay to end...

Shaurya and mehek's relo can take time...but the quick repairs are the first priorities...

Plzzz do update soon...

.

Appreciate ur comments dear... Absolutely those 15 days were magical for him coz he understood the importance of Mehak in his life. I m glad tht u r happy with the length... Ll try to give another lengthy update.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: melissaR

Shri! What an update 🤗 an emotional confused Handsome 😳 I have one question...did Mahek heard all of that? He threw his phone with frustration but did he end the call? 🤔

The desperate aunties and the question Did she throw herself at you too? I love those parts!

Thanks Shri...I really like this update. Handsome battling his thoughts and what's in his heart. OH I forgot to mention the pics...I really love them 😳


Hey Mel thanks alot dear... Nope, Mehak didn't hear the mother son convo...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Main agayi...waise app kahan ho ajj kal shrishti ji??
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Main agayi...waise app kahan ho ajj kal shrishti ji??

Aap toh aa gayi but where r ur comments??? 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hola shri ...finally Maine pad liye ..
First time mujey ithna der laga ...🤔 thumara update padne ke liye..kya karoun pretty much occupied ...but thanks you understood babez ...😳

Cuming to update ...thank god ...finally shaurya realized that his heart and his mind is not in his control...😆

Yaar shri one thing I love very much about this Story is MehRya's elevator encounter 😳


They look totally adorable ..wen they converse ...

Rajeev and shaurya's talk about ashima was very funny ...😆

Mehaks thought abt shauryas behaviour regarding women ..and SK getting used to mehaks action..and the forgiveness part we're totally ...


So mehak is getting married ..and SK is shocked..
Poor guy ...i feel sad for him ..
I can understand his fear of losing the loved once

And this time the update was of perfect t length


Keep up the 😉



Buddy...⭐️



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