Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5 - Page 77

Originally posted by: Mehryalove

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Yayyy mujhe update mil Gaya

Thanq Shri di 😳 padhne ki baadh comment karoongi😃

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Bhai ego ko chod apni mann ki baath bolo ladki se

Mehak ki shaadi 😲 abb kya hoga 😕

Yeh ashima character bahut funny hai 😆

acha hai atleast meri bhai ko abb toh meri bhai ki feelings bahar aa raha hai dheere dheere 😉

Shri di aap ithna jaldhi shaadi ki track kyun laayi 😕 matlab aap yeh ff ko jaldhi end karna chahthi hai kya 😲

shri di awesome update 👏 Very well written 👍🏼

Thanks for lenthy update 😳

i am waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

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Finally you got time to update 😆😆

Itna fast forward kion bhaaga rahi hai bay FF ko

Thamba Re Thamba 😆

It looks like soon we will be coming out of dream...hum dream mein hi hai na abhi tak ??🤣

Shaurya missing mahek when he is away ...bhai samny thi jab kya kar raha tha 😲😲

Chal achaa hai...ab hopefully teri aaqal theekany aajaye aur thoda bhaav khana kaam kardy

Very well written shri ...Rajeev is still alive in your story 😆😆

Waiting for the next ...do update soon

PS : Update long thi

coz of CAPS 🤣

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Thanks for the update Shristi, going to review, but have to know:

Did Shaurya hang up his mobile before he threw it or was Mehek privy to his meltdown and convo with his Mom😲? Nope, he hanged up before Mehak could say or listen anything

It was be amazing if she did hear!

An awesome update ( and a perfect length😆) These fifteen days have done wonders for SK it seems(Absence made the heart grow fonder😉), he is more accepting it appears of Mehek's influence over him. His seeking her out and dash downstairs on finally catching sight of her, was so sweet.

So has Mehek left the job now? Tht will be known in the next update

So many questions running around in my mind. Only another update will satisfy me.😆😆

It would be great to have Mehek's POV of the last two weeks: it would be cool to know how she had coped with his absence.

Thanks as usual for the PM. Looking forward to the next update.

Originally posted by: TheLifeDiaries

Shrishti Di...you know how much I love this story...I really follow this story and I love how you write everything. It's just so beautiful. Shaurya, Mahek every thing is so perfect with good amount of romance and emotion. I so wanted to comment on it but I couldn't. Finally, today I couldn't resist. I loved all the chapters and waiting to read further. Hopefully you'll update soon and please pm me if possible.

Your sincere reader,

Simi 😳

Originally posted by: richasharma0991

beautiful and touching yaar. Emotions that we don't wanna understand are difficult to tackle.

Beautifully written.

Update the next soon