Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Shri ...Not fair yaar...Ur teasers are like ...Ur attracting a small kid with chocolate...
Mahek must b totally broken from inside at this time...But she is strong enough to face him...And punch him by ignoring him completely...

Update soon ...

Aww thts really sweet of u Sham... I ll update the next chapter probably tomorrow

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: shristi0706

Aww thts really sweet of u Sham... I ll update the next chapter probably tomorrow

Iam Eagerly waiting Shri...

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thabassum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Congratz on the image and hyperlink part shristi...

Congratz ur senior member too ..I just noticed it kno ...

Keep going on ,!!!

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-
Congratz on the image and hyperlink part shristi...
Congratz ur senior member too ..I just noticed it kno ...

Keep going on ,!!!

All thanks to u thabs for helping me out with the hyperlinks and the images...I had literally chewed ur brains for this😉😉😉...My Teacher

I hadn't noticed about me being a senior member yet...thank u so much!!!!

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thabassum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Kya ??? 😲...????

Even u dint notice tat ur senior member?!?!?! 😆>..

GIRL u wud not have any posting restrictions like 10 post a day ...

U can post kno dillkholkae ...with sum breaks ...warna u will get spamming notification !!!

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

shaurya you are so gonna get it

hope mehak teaches you a big lesson

please do continue

bye sumi

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

So I decided to start from the beginning again and reread, rather than pick up where I had left off...and am so glad I did. I don't think I would have had a full appreciation how good your story is coming together otherwise😊. I love the backdrop of Shaurya's revenge...am quite happy to read it as it only means his redemption/ realization of his love for her will be even more intense...which you perfectly captured in the start.

The actual revenge: perfectly penned Shristi...i could totally visualize Shaurya doing something like this...the snideness was great to read...but I adore he almost immediately goes to second guessing himself...can someone say regret😆.

Please update soon. I am so anxious to see how this plays out...oh and of course thanks for the PM

Kelly

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: crtkelly
So I decided to start from the beginning again and reread, rather than pick up where I had left off...and am so glad I did. I don't think I would have had a full appreciation how good your story is coming together otherwise😊. I love the backdrop of Shaurya's revenge...am quite happy to read it as it only means his redemption/ realization of his love for her will be even more intense...which you perfectly captured in the start.
The actual revenge: perfectly penned Shristi...i could totally visualize Shaurya doing something like this...the snideness was great to read...but I adore he almost immediately goes to second guessing himself...can someone say regret😆.

Please update soon. I am so anxious to see how this plays out...oh and of course thanks for the PM

Kelly

Kelly kelly...so happy to read ur comments!!! TBH, I want to see something like dis in the show...I may be wrong but I still feel Shaurie is acting and isnt in love with Mehak. But I m still happy with the show. I wish to see his regret and how he always thought wrong about her...want him to realise how he manipulated Mehak at every step of ISC to boost the TRPs of his show...

I hope i live up to ur expectations of writing a good story here...n I have PMed u too😳

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: shristi0706

All thanks to u thabs for helping me out with the hyperlinks and the images...I had literally chewed ur brains for this😉😉😉...My Teacher

I hadn't noticed about me being a senior member yet...thank u so much!!!!

Thabs now u have two brain eaters as ur students...😆

Convo Shri...

Edited by Shamrouz - 8 years ago