MehRya OS : ONE STEP AHEAD. (PIC story)

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fym23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

I haven't seen yesterday 's episode but I enjoyed your OS , thank you for pm. Keep writing...

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Wow what an amazing OS yaar... U just nailed it... 👏

Shaurya oh dear I really pity for him... Chaal ulta pad gaya... I couldn't believe that Mehek did this she just killed it... OMG I can imagine Shaurya's face when he came to know that Mehek is not unconscious... She just turned his plan on him... 🤣

A huge of round applause 👏 for Mehek I hope same thing we get to see in the show... But after watching yesterday's episode we can expect something different but I dont know who will suffer more... 😲

Keep writing with your wonderful concept... 🤗

Thank you for PM dear😉

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Arhazy Najaan

@ArjunfanNAJAAN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: lucky_princess
*unres*
Wow!!👏.
Oh how much i loved this!!
What a khidki-thod jawaab diya hai Mehek ne...hats off girl for ur bravery...👏
Shaurya gone in mute mode as he saw Mehek in a Avtar that he could have never imagined😲...bechara bande ka hosh undgaya...aur aane ki naam hi nahi le raha tha...😆
Usko ek energy bite ki zaroorat hai...taaki agli baar ek full proof plan bana le...aur agli baar bhi uska plan chop hojaaye..😆.
Brilliant Najaan👍🏼...i didnt expect such a twist...Mehek ready to take everything on herself for her family's sake..
Nd Shaurya as usual "What the bloody hell??!!" mode mein chala gaya.
Soch bhi nahi saktha tha ki Mehek aise vaar karegi...i just loved this bindass Mehek.
Rajiv also disgusted by Shaurya.. nd he was bombarded with media's questions..
A befitting reply...nd most importantly i want her always to be one step ahead of Shaurya Khanna.

Nd ur most welcome dear...ur writings r worth appreciative...👏
Do continue this fabulous job of urs..

Love Sharmi❤️

Thanks.. i can guess from the length of the comment exactly "how much you loved it" 😉😆

Haan he is in ''Bloody how''mode.. kuch pata hi chal raha kaise uske awesome plan ki bend baja di Mehek ne.🤣

Yup energy bite. 🤣🤣

Thanks yaar.😳

Haan Akhir Mehek also has Brains😉.🤣

Yeah she should not be shown as overly dramatic and stupid but strong and kick ass.😲.. like Shaurie.😈

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Arhazy Najaan

@ArjunfanNAJAAN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: nicky13
Brilliant... Bang on my dear ... Shaurya Khanna ki hawa nikal Di Mehak ne ... Hmm you wrote it nicely and explain it excellently... Really want something like this in serial too ... Thanks for this long story... Please keep writing more ... I would love to read... Stay blessed 😊

Thanks dear.😃

Haan puri ki puri hawa nikaal di.🤣

Thanks for the encouragement yaar.😳

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Arhazy Najaan

@ArjunfanNAJAAN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Tere_Sang_Yaara
This os 😲
Excellent
I mean totally unexpected twist 👏
Superb yaa😳
Please keep them coming more 👏😳

Thanks yaar.😳

i know right... matlab Mehek aur palat ke waar.😲😆

okay. thanks dear.😊

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Arhazy Najaan

@ArjunfanNAJAAN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: shubha123
👏👏 awesome 👏😳

i think ZKM guys shld take u for the writing ..i seriously mean this 👏

loved it 😳 superb ya ... i repeat again i could just visualize these scenes 😉😳

now ye dil maange more n more ... v waiting 🤗

Thanks dear. 😳

kya yaar me and ZKM writer naa 😲... abhi toh mein bacchi hoon😒🤣

Glad ke you could visualize it.😃

Hope to not keep ya waiting for long.😊

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Arhazy Najaan

@ArjunfanNAJAAN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Auditi
Darinda kahin ka... 🤣
Maaza agaya yaar... 🤗

lol i wonder where that "Darinda" word came from as i cant imagine him so handsome and yet a you-know-what right?😉.😆🤣

thanks.😳

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Arhazy Najaan

@ArjunfanNAJAAN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Nandhu123
Super
unexpected twist
brave mahek
over ahead she handed him to media😆😆

itna unexpected tha kya yaar.😆

thanks dear.😳

yup uski topi media ke sar. 🤣

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Arhazy Najaan

@ArjunfanNAJAAN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
superb update
loved it
awesome

Thanks dear.😃

glad ke you loved it.😳

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Arhazy Najaan

@ArjunfanNAJAAN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Polo_s
Amazing. ...first time I saw dat a female lead did something like this. ...she didn't scared n rona dhona...in fact make him troubled...it was good n justified. ..shaurya trapped in his own Web. lol

Thanks yaar.😃

oh haan i have also hardly have seen cases like this... but We women should not be understimated naa yaar.😊 i mean akhir Physically weak hona aur Mentally weak hone mein difference hota hai na yaar.😉😆

Thanks for appreciating dear.

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