MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12) - Page 83

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Kelly, what happened to your weekend update?
Hope all is fine with you ?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SAHELIM

Great job Di..your FF is just amazing 👏

Rajiv has finally figured it out..but why is Shaurya planning to visit Florida ..😲
Eagerly waiting for the next ..


Hi Thanks for the comment, and for giving this story a read!

Shaurya is soon off on a quest to find his lady-love, which I'm sure will lead to all sorts on interesting thing. I hope you continue following and enjoying the story.

Kelly
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Faith28

Superb update...brilliantly narrated...👏 Im so glad rajiv is trying to connect the dots and not just jump to conclusions... Shauryas plight felt so real... Nehal and sonal..now thats sibling/friendship love👍🏼 Amricca here comes shaurya to manofy MS😛

Pls write soon.


Hi Faith...yes things are starting to come together, and soon it will be stateside for Shaurya Khanna.
I hope you enjoy the adventure that lies ahead for everyone,
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Vedika211

Kelly it was great to see progress on all fronts. Mehak is a bit better, Shaurya's press conference was wonderful and I'm so glad that Rajeev is thinking seriously about this.


The press conference showed Shaurya being active, not passively trying to figure things out as they unfold around him. If Uday had not shown Mehak that he knew that Mehak and MS were the same person, and that information came from Shaurya, she might have believed Shaurya about Eisha and everything else. But that was the clincher, and now she's going to question everything that has happened before - their dinner, the kiss and all their conversations.

I'm myself not sure if I want the "Mehak and MS are the same" thing disclosed before he gets to see her or after. Perhaps his very shock could convince her if nothing else.

As always, thanks for writing. And I know we've been giving you grief, so wanted to say that your writing is fantastic, I don't mind your twists and turns as much as those on the show, and you take as much time to write as you want. It should be as much fun for you as it is for us 😃


Thank you Vedika for your comment. Yes soon it's time to bring the story over to the US now, with a some interesting happenings of that side of the world. I hope you enjoy it.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Hi Kelly sorry for late reply

I read last 3 parts one go.
Because of Uday & Esha Shaurya's image spoiled in front of Mehek. Purposely they showed her there is something going between them. Poor Mehek couldn't see & flew away back to US. Mallika is a good friend so far pls he shouldn't come in between MehRya now. Shaurya is leaving for Florida it will be interesting to read how Shaurya would react when he come to know MS & Mehek both are same. Where he kissed her once & felt he is cheating his online buddy. His reaction would be worth watching.

Thanks for PM

Vinu


Hi Vinu, glad you caught up...3 chapters in one go😲 hopefully it wasn't too taxing LOL

I have definite plans for everyone who has been introduced in the story and I hope everyone likes my thought process.

Will om when the next update is ready to go.

kelly
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kelly are you going to update right now? Then I'll stick around otherwise I'll go 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Patsy-

Hey Kelly...read the last 3 chapters all in one go...they are simply awesome...⭐️

You are an amazing writer and have captivated all our hearts thru' your writing...🤗

I had thought that Shaurya was going to guess that Mehak was his MS in the previous Chapter itself but good that you have kept his mind really busy ...
I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter where Shaurya will meet MS in person and will get the shock of his life! I have just one ask - please do not let Shaurya misunderstand Mehak that she was playing with his emotions since she knew that KK was Shauyra right from the start...

I loved this line from KK - ...love...jaan...I have been absolutely truthful...❤️

Also, keep Malik as a good friend and not as a suitor for Mehak...bhaad mein jaaye Kanata chachi!

And lastly, hope Mehak give him a fair chance to explain everything rather than blame Shaurya for all their misunderstanding...

Looking forward to your next update!


Great that you have caught up Patsy, and more to the point enjoyed it.

Poor Shaurya has a lot occupying his mind, which as you noted has prevented him from connecting the dots.

Everyone has a role in this upcoming chapters as we soon move over to the US. Hopefully you will enjoy the trek I have decided to take😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliant piece of writing there Kelly!!! That press coference part was well written...This is how our Shaurya khanna would have handled the situation if he was in...perfect!! Calm n poised!!
Glad ur Rajeev isnt negative...I liked thta he has figured out the mystery here...
N Malik...i had commented in ur previous chapter that i just want him to be her friend n not the third wheel in the already complicated Mehrya love story...Please Kaanta chachi back off...no matchmaking here!!!

So Shuarya is flying to Florida!!Sounds interesting...i just want Mehak to give him a fair chance to explain his side of the story...no misunderstandings n accusations please!!!
U said thta u will update another prt this weekend...Not putting any pressure but please...
Thank you Shristi 😊😊

I adored Rajiv character and wished they had kept him around and positive. Alas that wasn't the case so I can assure you that in my musings he will always be the good friend/Bhai that SK needs in his life.

Florida, when we get there😉 is sure to be very interesting, but as I am a stickler ( or is it a slave) to details, we won't get there in the next chapter...but soon. I promise.
I really need to get my update schedule together, as I will be travelling soon, and probably in the mood to disconnect completely. Hopefully this will prompt be to get this story done with in the next four weeks or so.

Will PM when the next chapter is ready to go.




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Posted: 8 years ago

thanks😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Kelly... where are you??

Hope everything is fine😔


Present and accounted for Shamz...

Not everything going as it should but pressing on.


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