MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: fizzyfairy
Apologies l haven't thanked you for the last few fabulous updates. Have been loving the way your story is panning out. Said it before you are a awesome writer. 👏👏🤗

No apologies necessary, that you are enjoying the story is enough for me. Thank you so much for the compliment.

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Heli84

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Posted: 8 years ago

#812

Great job Di..your FF is just amazing 👏

Rajiv has finally figured it out..but why is Shaurya planning to visit Florida ..😲

Eagerly waiting for the next ..

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22
kelly di..
it can be termed as the progression chapter in all.. i mean on the literal progression..😊
it was so satisfying to see that rajiv's sorted out a lot..did he understand that , that ms is mehek??

but yeah florida seems to be the pressing matter now.. so up for their eventual meet..loved the hopeful shaurya
*FINGERS CROSSED*

THANKS FOR THE UPDATE AND PM DI😊

Things are slowly falling into place now, some interesting happenings to come...

Thanks for the comment!

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Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#814

Superb update...brilliantly narrated...👏 Im so glad rajiv is trying to connect the dots and not just jump to conclusions... Shauryas plight felt so real... Nehal and sonal..now thats sibling/friendship love👍🏼 Amricca here comes shaurya to manofy MS😛

Pls write soon.

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Vedika211

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Posted: 8 years ago

#815

Kelly it was great to see progress on all fronts. Mehak is a bit better, Shaurya's press conference was wonderful and I'm so glad that Rajeev is thinking seriously about this.

The press conference showed Shaurya being active, not passively trying to figure things out as they unfold around him. If Uday had not shown Mehak that he knew that Mehak and MS were the same person, and that information came from Shaurya, she might have believed Shaurya about Eisha and everything else. But that was the clincher, and now she's going to question everything that has happened before - their dinner, the kiss and all their conversations.

I'm myself not sure if I want the "Mehak and MS are the same" thing disclosed before he gets to see her or after. Perhaps his very shock could convince her if nothing else.

As always, thanks for writing. And I know we've been giving you grief, so wanted to say that your writing is fantastic, I don't mind your twists and turns as much as those on the show, and you take as much time to write as you want. It should be as much fun for you as it is for us 😃

Edited by Vedika211 - 8 years ago

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#816

Hi Kelly sorry for late reply

I read last 3 parts one go.

Because of Uday & Esha Shaurya's image spoiled in front of Mehek. Purposely they showed her there is something going between them. Poor Mehek couldn't see & flew away back to US. Mallika is a good friend so far pls he shouldn't come in between MehRya now. Shaurya is leaving for Florida it will be interesting to read how Shaurya would react when he come to know MS & Mehek both are same. Where he kissed her once & felt he is cheating his online buddy. His reaction would be worth watching.

Thanks for PM

Vinu

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Patsy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#817

Hey Kelly...read the last 3 chapters all in one go...they are simply awesome...⭐️

You are an amazing writer and have captivated all our hearts thru' your writing...🤗

I had thought that Shaurya was going to guess that Mehak was his MS in the previous Chapter itself but good that you have kept his mind really busy ...

I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter where Shaurya will meet MS in person and will get the shock of his life! I have just one ask - please do not let Shaurya misunderstand Mehak that she was playing with his emotions since she knew that KK was Shauyra right from the start...

I loved this line from KK - ...love...jaan...I have been absolutely truthful...❤️

Also, keep Malik as a good friend and not as a suitor for Mehak...bhaad mein jaaye Kanata chachi!

And lastly, hope Mehak give him a fair chance to explain everything rather than blame Shaurya for all their misunderstanding...

Looking forward to your next update!

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#818

Brilliant piece of writing there Kelly!!! That press coference part was well written...This is how our Shaurya khanna would have handled the situation if he was in...perfect!! Calm n poised!!

Glad ur Rajeev isnt negative...I liked thta he has figured out the mystery here...

N Malik...i had commented in ur previous chapter that i just want him to be her friend n not the third wheel in the already complicated Mehrya love story...Please Kaanta chachi back off...no matchmaking here!!!

So Shuarya is flying to Florida!!Sounds interesting...i just want Mehak to give him a fair chance to explain his side of the story...no misunderstandings n accusations please!!!

U said thta u will update another prt this weekend...Not putting any pressure but please...