MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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tibs09

@tibs09

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#781

Wow Kelly ... you know with poor Mehak's heart you have managed to break ours too ..
Don't do that ..
Clear this suspense .. we need to know what all those devils Uday and Esha are up to ...
Please ... a pretty please
Cannot bear poor Mehak in this state and Shaurya that poor guys does not even know his world has crashed and how
KK and MS need to rediscover each other and themselves too ... very soon ...

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Anam

@AamnaSharif_Fan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#782

Kelly what happened with Mahek... good chapter please continue soon...

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#783

Originally posted by: tibs09
Wow Kelly ... you know with poor Mehak's heart you have managed to break ours too ..
Don't do that ..
Clear this suspense .. we need to know what all those devils Uday and Esha are up to ...
Please ... a pretty please
Cannot bear poor Mehak in this state and Shaurya that poor guys does not even know his world has crashed and how
KK and MS need to rediscover each other and themselves too ... very soon ...

Come on a little angst never hurt...much...Hang in there, and know I am a huge proponent of "And they lived happily ever after"😉

Thanks for the comment!

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#784

Originally posted by: MomoShivi_Fan
Kelly what happened with Mahek... good chapter please continue soon...

Heartbreak; plain and simple, but unfortunately by not disclosing everything, she has a left up to speculation with both her Aunty and now Malik...nothing more untoward than that...although considering how her feelings had developed, that is bad enough.😭

Thank you for the read and the comment. Will look to start the next update before the end of the weekend.

Edited by crtkelly - 8 years ago

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#785

Kelly you have broken my heart 😭

I need my Mehrya

Kelly i know you will write an awesome story explaining all this but I am the impatient kind only want Mehrya 😆 and punish all the people coming in between their romance 😆

Edited by Sharlene1410 - 8 years ago

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candy02

@candy02

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#786

If I have correctly understood then Esha comes from a family worthy of the Khannas!! Surprising!! Shaurya is clueless that his world has gone upside down. What will he do when MS will refuse to continue with the relationship or will become invisible from the virtual world!! Rajiv has gone in detective mode!!! Is that so!! Kanta, as a mother and that too already burnt in Shaurya's wrath, is trying to protect her daughter. Mahek is totally broken and Malik, I am not sure whether he is positive or negative. Right now he seems to be very much concerned regarding his rights on her. My POV. How Shaurya is going to get pass all these seemingly impossible hurdles and reach out to her!!! Waiting for your next chapter...

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Smiley327

@Smiley327

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#787

Nice update Kelly, ur writings has so many twists just like ZKM, hard to wait for next chapter update.. now we need next chapter soon pl...😊

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Faith28

@Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#788

Superb update👏... Im glad malik was there for mehak... It was fast paced...waiting eagerly to know how shaury comes out of this mess😲

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aparajita

@Geekyglasses22

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#789

Kelly Di its trouble everywhere..

Shaurya will soon be traumatised with pain and guilt..and whatsoever it be...

I had thought u would be a little merciful with us..the readers..

But the heart break has taken a toll on our spirits too..

ITS COMPLETELY DISHEARTENING😭😭

U r becoming so unpredictable like the cvs

Plzzz dont do this..

Will be expecting a complete turnover plzz😭

Thanks for the update and thanks for the pm..

😊

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#790

Kelly, that was super emotional Topsy turvy rollerr coaster updateYou are creating a bhoolbhulaya of sorts

Angst is fine, but this is too much. Hope it's not a love quadrangle. . .malik is a sweet guy..don't make him fall for mehek ..meyhrya are end game.. bit fair. Esha and uday k7 shadi Kara do...rajiv will discover something.

Please please chats should be back. Let them fight it out.

All week will be thinking. What new twist you are gonna spin.

Thanks for the pm