MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12) - Page 55

Wow..that was exciting.

Kelly I missed reading this story...Do not know how ..
Just one of those things .. I apparently read the first 2-3 chapters and somehow never caught up ..
Tonite I read all 14 in one go
There is a part of me tha wishes there were more updates for me to read
Now where do i begin applauding
the relationship that I have seen building just through the chats
The irrational or maybe intuitive jealousy the men (Shaurya and Malik) feel for each other
Shaurya slow introspection that is just but just revealing to him that he did wrong with Mehak
I am really curious how will Shaurya deal with the conflict in his heart
He might be getting attracted to this Mehak 2.0 while he loves MS
That might be interesting
Is MS going to reveal her true identity any time soon specially while she is India or is she is going to force Shaurya on a plane to seek her out ?!
Will there be an actual confrontation between Malik and Shaurya??
has Mehak started her journey towards loving Shaurya even with all his flaws .. will she realise that in these 7 days??
The immense possibilities that this story has!! Wow !!
This is an amazing story and you are an awesome writer.
I guess you already know that .

A meeting of equals!! Kelly, what a treat this chapter is! How I love to see Mehak in a position of strength, and Shaurya's growing sense of awe and wonder in what he sees. Enjoyed this thorougly; the chapter unfolded in a spellbinding way. Thank you!!!

That was an exciting update spark are flying between Mehrya continue soon, please Kelly a little longer update next time 😳 😊

This gets better and better, Kelly!

Kelly very nice chapter, please continue soon... btw i'm Anam, but I like to be called Ammu.

that was a very cool chap di!!!!!

Hey Kelly😊

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

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Wowww that was a complete make over of Mahek...She is more confident now...Loved the way she took over the lime light ⭐️

The Ladoo scene was funny 😆

What is this esha upto... 😲

Loved Rajeev and SK conversation...😆😆

Waiting for the next chapter Kelly...Thnx for the PM 😳

Originally posted by: Mayajac

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Hey Kelly 😊...Nice update..😃

Gud to see new confident Mahek..The way she was handling the audience and their questions about her was wonderful dear..

I liked the laddo scene..I can imagine how funny Shaurya wud have looked..😆

Happy dat uday was not in this chapter..

Sonal teasing Mahek.. haha..

Everything was wonderful Kelly..

Thanq fa the PM nd the wonderful update dear..