MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12) - Page 110

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks Kelly,
U'r a sweetheart, u really fulfilled my wish. 🤗Shaurya gt the well deserved punch from Mallik. 🤣

Why did Mehek go ahead and kiss him? That's not good. She sd have made the man work hard foe her, then only he'd value her in future. 😉

I like Mallik's mom. She'z too good a "Mehrya" shipper. Will give us all a run for our money.

Will be looking forward to u'r next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Got a mid-week teaser since I am going to be crazy busy until the weekend.😭

I know that Malik has been a pain in the *## to a lot of you, so how about we throw a little distraction his way. In the meantime I will leave you to ponder how MehRya have got to the point that they are. Let me know your thoughts...

Chapter 27 Teaser:

"Uncle, tum?

"I'm looking for Mehek, and figured this to be as good as a place to find her, Malik gruffly stated without preamble.

Mel turned away, at once irritated at the man's surly attitude, before deciding that if he wanted to forever act like a stodgy old man then he better be prepared for the consequences. "I'm so sorry, I completely forgot my manners in my haste. Namaste Uncle...

"I don't have time for this, Mel. Is Mehek coming to your viewing...

"She didn't say either way earlier. Why don't you just call her and ask? I'm sure you have her on speed dial.

The man fell silent for a minute. "She isn't answering my calls: not for the last three days, he finally admitted, running a hand through his hair

"I can't imagine why not, Mel responded sarcastically. She sighed, aware of the fact that Mehek was due to meet Shaurya to give him a tour of the Food & Wine Festival tomorrow. "Hold on let me get her on the phone. But first...

Malik looked on in confusion as this baffling woman, who he couldn't begin to understand, turned from him to get something; seconds later returning to him, spoon in hand. With one hand below preventing any spillage, she raised the other to his mouth. "Jalapeno Lime pickle. Can you tell me how it tastes; an honest assessment please she asked earnestly.

Trying not to notice how appealing she was when she wasn't being so antagonistic, Malik concentrated on the sample he had been fed. It was good really good to be exact. He reached up and lowered the spoon she still held up. "You made this, he asked a bit skeptically. He waited for the inevitable blow up his comment would bring, but instead was startled by her exclamation, and more so by the fact she was now grasping his hand and expressing real distress over his still bruised knuckles. "Oh Malik, what have you done to yourself? Have you had this checked? Oh God...

"Calm down, he urged; touched by her concern. "This is actually an improvement.

"And that's supposed to make me feel better?

He was prevented from answering when the kitchen door swung open and the missing chef entered the room with another person, both carrying trays.

"I hope you don't mind me deciding to come at the last minute, Mel, Mehek called out. "I've got Masala Chai cupcakes, and someone you may wish...

Everyone came to a stand-still each taking in the scene from their own perspective. Following Mehek's direction, Shaurya placed his tray down and approached the pair they had found there. He threw back the hoodie and removed his sunglasses Mehek had insisted on, so that he could get through the building without the most rabid of ISC fans being aware of his identity.

"Sh-Shaurya...Shaurya Khanna. You're here...with Mehek...in our kitchen...at our ISC viewing party?

He smiled charmingly at the woman glued to Malik's side. "I am: to all of the above. Mel is it? I hope you don't mind the intrusion. He then specifically directed his scrutiny to the chef who had yet to respond to his arrival, nor extract himself from Mel's grip. "But didn't you mention that, this was the accommodations for the College Program participants, Ms. Sharma?


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Posted: 8 years ago
UNres.
Lol looks like MS is giving really tough time to Uncle Malik😆
He should have think before hitting SK 😛
Mel is enjoying every bit of teasing 😆😆
Can't wait to read the whole chapter..
Update soon Kelly ..😳
Thank you for PM 😃
Edited by Shamrouz - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Such a cute teaser. Maher thought malik was better than a brawler. Shwu4shwchad ni expectations.
Mel teasing malik is cute, her concerns gives away her admiration and affection for uncle.
Looking forward to what mehryaa are up too.

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva200

Thank you for the pm,
Brilliant update, so they had confrontation, Mehak is still reluctant as she had seen the altered pics shown to her and news announcement, so she still thinks he has been a bad boy. But when he kissed her, she was willing party 😉 as she is in love with him.
Malik is protective of him and Sk told him mehak will come to Sk herself.. Sk also found out from Malik that something happened to mehak connecting him which shattered her so he will be on to it next as he still does not know.. Pls update soon



Hey Diva, you basically have it, but remember Shaurya's biggest obstacle is the scene Mehek came upon in SK dressing room (supposedly Esha and him in a very compromising position) that resulted in Mehek leaving. Yes she does care for him, but how can he trust given what she believes is the truth.

SK has his work cut out for him, but he is dedicated to the mission for certain😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -mina-

Yikes!!! Full out fisticuffs, huh? But it's good for things to really come to a head. And I'm like swooning at Shaurya's cool-headed mental monologue through the last bit of the scene - enduring Malik's rage because he has a more in-depth read on what's going on that Malik does 😆

I also swoon a bit every time he calls Mehak "Dost" - the power of context to turn an innocent word into the most romantic syllable in the universe of this story. Love it!! ❤️

Thanks for the update :)


Who knew sweet Malik was such a hothead right😆. But it needed to happen IMO. Leave it to SK to take advantage of being manhandled and use the circumstance to his benefit: such a schemer😉.

"Dost"... I imagine Mehek swoons a bit as well at this endearment, I sure would if I was her😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting teaser continue soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -mina-

Oh also that exchange with Mel where she admonishes Shaurya not to say "Mehrya Shipper!" Love it and am very inclined to copy the idea in an AbhiGya fic if I could...but they don't have the readymade context of ISC which is what makes it work so perfectly here 😆 👏


Um Mina, you do realize you could have edited your first post right😕😆😉...just joking, I love that you took the time to make a second post.

Talk about a 180...How SK has changed from the man who detested even the thought of any association with MS in any form, to now adopting the public mash-up nickname for their pairing. Good for him but I'm certain it still must have been super creepy for Mel to hear it😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Superb. ..loved it.

So they did battle it out.
Indira verma is astute. Hope she knocks sense in both man, since shaurya mom is not around.
Mehek darling don't give in easy, make the man work for you


Thx bworm, it was a much needed confrontation that we had to get through. I'm happy you enjoyed.

Thank goodness for mum, if not these boys would be at each others throats for the rest of the ff😆. She will be good to have around, and thankfully she is totally into MehRya so is not considering matching her son and Mehek.

As it pertains to MS, it would be in SK best interest not to think he will be able to win her so easily.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nandu0123

Nice update continue soon 😃


Thanks Nandu

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