MehRya OS: Dance With Me - Page 2

Originally posted by: _Namita_

Unres:

Holy smokes woman!! That was brilliant! I am actually dying to watch Mahek dress in something other than those plain suits. Loved it! ❤️

Hey Kelly (is it ok if I call you that?)

This is going to look like a long ass essay+ me fangirling.

Please bear with me.

I am infamous for giving huge reviews when I like what I read and since I can't quote your story, I'm going to review this way!

First, I'm always eager to read anything well written on a pair I ship, so when you posted your Res, I had an grin on my face. Don't worry, you are forgiven. You also need to have some real life inspiration to keep writing na? I hope you enjoyed your dinner.

Second, I adore alternate interpretations. So much that I write multiple AUs at the same time (a blessing and a curse) and nothing makes me happier than reading other people's interpretations.

Third: Totally worth the wait. Totally.

Brace yourself, fan girling is coming.

I will not lie, I actually grinned at your depiction of S from the get go. Counting down the seconds and weighting the odds. Cold and calculated.

I like how he has no patience for the play acting most society people indulge in, the flattery and the artifice. You've showed it most effectively with the manager's interaction with our S.

And then, the easy way S almost seems to use people like chess pieces, but he keeps his promises. That shows that he has honor, or more or less a twisted semblance of it.

Him counting down showed his impatience and I like the use of technique here.

His thoughts on M wearing the unfamiliar dress were a sadistic delight for me, I will not lie to you. For in that compact paragraph you've shown me that S is someone who studies people for their weakness and knows how to exploit them.This is brutal intelligence, not someone throwing a tantrum and acting like a spoilt child with a toy.Also, his attention to detail and to his own mistakes (dress being loose. A deliberate thing on his part or a miscalculation?)

His reactions at the way she still continues to offer resistance only makes this write up more realistic, more visual. Perhaps even more so than the show itself.

Him reaching for her collarbone had me going places I would rather not go in this forum. You might perhaps smack me for my thoughts. Don't worry, I'm not a kid though, so you don't need to lecture me about them!😆😉

M's feelings though. I think they are a masterpiece.For I always have a bone to pick with the way damsels in distress are written. This one was short and to the point. Nothing unnecessary, no pity party. Just the reality, and her understanding of its harshness. His harshness.

But I love the fact that she is no fool. As innocent and simple as she is, she is not nave. Her ensuring his honesty was the best part for me. Shows that she is not a mere victim, but someone willing to make the best of a worse situation, ensure something good comes out of it.

Her looking at him, non verbally asking permission to take that call. Her understanding of her situation and playing by the rules.

I only wish you'd shown me what was going through his head then.

His consideration to let her return to her usual clothing and his plans ahead only show me how much of a careful strategist he is. Ensuring something stronger for his future, his ratings and his own public image. It is this cunning I find incredible. Tells me a lot about him.

And to read of his own reaction to having his victim in his arms was a treat. He is not an unfeeling, unaffected island after all, his stronghold can be breached.

In the end it is about him being in control, all about him being the one in power. \

And that is a goal he has achieved. The way he dismissed his reaction to M as a mere side effect or a casualty was brilliant.

But even the best laid plans fall apart sometimes don't they?

Show me how.

-I hope I didn't offend you with my review.

I'd of course love to read more, a long piece.

Now my own imagination is on fire, thinking of ways the dance could backfire, with those pictures S has.

I implore you. Continue.