MehRya FF: Fated to Love You *PART-5* Page 29 up! (20/12/16)

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Waida1234

@Waida1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Hey...Pree...! Once again...hats off to you girl...! What an amazing update...! 👏

Here...the weather is very bad, with continuous heavy rain and wind...but, after reading this chapter...it has brought a ray of sunshine and brighten my day...!

So...Mehek's has completely gotten under Shaurya skin...and that too very deep...! Poor chap...showering with his shirt on...Lol..! 😆

MehRya online chatting look so realistic...and the lyric of that song is so apt and perfectly compliment that particular moment...! By the way from which movie is that song...never listen to it...?

Pree...where do you get all these bright ideas...? This FF is really incredible...! For me...your brain is very much like the "Cavern of Ali Baba"...full of hidden priceless treasures...!

I so wish...to see these scenes on my screen...! Hope...Mehek's wins the competition...and along with the cash prize...she also gets to win a cooking traineeship in one of Shaurya's restaurants...and we get to see your FF kitchen scenes...!

Sheela Ji inand Mehek out 😭! Not fair Mr Shaurya...! 😡

Once again...thank you for making my day...! Precap seems interesting...! Waiting for next chapter...!

P.S: Thanks for the song translation...! Love you...! Big hugs...! 🤗

Oops...forgot...! The banner looks great...! 👍🏼

Edited by Waida1234 - 8 years ago

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#92

poor mehak

awesome update

absolutely loving this story

continue soon

superb

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oceanus85

@oceanus85

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Another amazing update.😊 I was hoping you would update your story soon. I know it can be tough to update but it is very much appreciated. I like how in your story Mahek has consumed his every thought. Wait till he finds out his online friend is the same girl he can't stand. Lol at him taking a shower with his shirt on.😆 Shaurya is close to finding out Meera is Mahek. I am excited to see in your next chapter how he finds out. I hope he feels like a jerk for firing her. I am eager to see what his reaction is to finding out the truth. Please do continue. Your story is awesome. 👍🏼

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oceanus85

@oceanus85

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Just wanted to add that I think your story is so good that I wish for something similar to happen on the show. Like seeing Shaurya smile all goofy at Mehak saying he looked fine.😊 I also like the line you wrote where you said Shaurya smiles faintly. This girl... everything she says, hits his heart. I could just imagine that scene and I was like awww. I would love for him to say something like that. Now I am going to be all disappointed if they don't show these type of scenes on the show. Well at least we have your FF to look forward to.

Edited by oceanus85 - 8 years ago

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Manali.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Lovely update...just love ur writting..

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Priya

@-Serene.Rose-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: VK_Sibling_Love
Edited...

Rose you forgot to add marvellous, amazing, excellent in the options... add it from next time 😉 , then I will think about choosing 😉
So MS is making our KK restless, thats new because it always other way round, that kaddu make others restless with his angry rant and hotness quotient 😳
I am really intrigued to know about KK's past [:), reasons behind his misery that resulted in his strict and angry persona...
How casually can KK fire MS 😡, hope MS give him tough time when he attempt to bring her back 😃
Waiting for next part when KK would know MS identity and his reaction towards his arch nemesis
Update when you get time 😃 and add me to your pm list 😃

P.s.- I will call you from both name then Pri and Rose 😉 😃. Aur kabhi gussa Ho gayi toh Priya 🤣

aww thank u so much Aditi...🤗 I was skeptical... ki kaisa lagega aap logo ko. bt I'm happy that u like.. haha itni tareef... aww... tq😳

yea KK knows he's hot but one girl kardegi usko tai tai fish... haha

yea next part... nxt weekend I guess... :D

Chalo... accha hai... call me using any name😆 i wont mind... huggy :*

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Priya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: nicky13
Kaisa laga ... Good bad average hmmm I don't think I found it good or average... Well because I found it awesome 😆 ... It's really awesome buddy and I mean it ... Trust me... Shaurya Kya hai boss yeh Banda ... Sheila ko bachaya Mehak ko Fire kiya ... Uff ... Poor Mehak... She was so much happy for Sheila g and started thinking Ke Her boss is not that bad he is a good guy ... But yeh lo fail giya raita... Shaurya g shows her true colour ... He fired her on a silly thing... I mean sing a song is crime ... But bhai he is the Shaurya Khanna ho sakta hai ho ... But precap is cool ... Thanks Pree for this update... It is wonderful 😊

thank u nicky! thanks so much.. 🤗 ya guys r too sweet. I guess isliye accha lagraha h.. haha warna it will be an avg fic😆 bt I;m trying my best for ya guys... yea nxt updt mei revelation... hope u guys will like it too...😳 ur welcome ji.. thnx toh meko bolna chahiye... h na... hugs🤗

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Priya

@-Serene.Rose-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Joyness
Lovely update...loved your writing

thanks dear😊😳

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Priya

@-Serene.Rose-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Lovely update
Shaurya is such a jerk and so downright rude
Poor Mehak lost her job
Continue soon

aww thank u gurveen :)

yea.. he is... bt from nxt chapter that vl change... stay tuned😃😉

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Priya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Vinayarao
sooper
it was amazing...
shaurya and his mission find who is MS
oh no shaurya fired mehek
what happens when shaurya will come to know meera & mehek r same girl, with whom he likes to chat all the time.
his chat friend MS, this shaurya entirely different from the show. loved him
update soon

thank u so much dear!

glad u like :D

yea nxt part he'll know the truth :)

hope u will like the coming parts as well... tq😳