Read this article recently and could totally relate to whatever the writer mentioned about subtle way of story telling with how Umera Ahmed penned ZGH.I recently watched Malaal(another engrossing work by Umera!) and I can see a pattern in the way she chooses to tell her stories.
From the article:
Subtle romance is not something you see often in recent storytelling. And, when you do, like in Snow White and the Huntsman (2012) or Alice in Wonderland(2010), people tend to view it as "underplayed" and "passionless." We expect fiery love triangles, drama, stolen kisses, and heated moments of sexual tension that may or may not lead to something more. Subtle romance is a thing of the past, right? Like Pride and Prejudice or Girl with a Pearl Earring.
Girl with a Pearl Earring is probably one of the finest examples of romance that, while obvious, screams with tension despite subtle scenes and little to no romantic gestures actually taking place between the lead characters. Subtlety in romance is an art, and if done right, it can ensnare the reader/observer more than any passion-filled, sex-crazed love story.
Avoid phrases that outright say what the character feels, like "I love you/him/her." As in writing in general, show their emotions through their glances, their behavior, and the hints in their speech or thoughts. Eventually, these phrases may be inevitable, but draw it out until they're necessary.
Cue: Kashaf's change in mood once Z calls her up in office and also when he tells her that she was being relocated to Islamabad.
- Sensitivity to space and proximity. When a character is aware of just how close or far they are to their romantic interest, or simply start to behave differently once they enter the room, it gives more dynamic to the relationship.
Cue -Proposal scene: Z enters the room and Kashaf starts picking her nails.
- Focus on small details. We don't tend to notice some unique things about people unless we pay them more attention than we should. If characters notice certain things others don't, it's a good sign there's something developing.
Cue- Kashaf sensed Zaroon's mood from his voice itself which he himself acknowledged later.
- Laugh when no one else does. Even the lamest joke or silliest blunder should bring a smile or adoration to the person infatuated, because they are all the more sensitive to their behavior.
- Cue- During the entire run of the show,I think Z has always kindof brushed of her rudeness while some other person would have been offended.I remember this scene where he's like "Bahut khushi hui apse milke" and she's like "Mujhe nahi hui" and the guy says I can understand and laughs it off.I rememberalot of instances like this b/w the two😆
Relate. Key word in relationship, right? The two people involved should share some interests or points of view, but more than that, they should get lost in them when they're around each other. This portrays their bond and melts away the surroundings, including others.
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=alACeI42Ob0[/YOUTUBE]
Cue: I think there was a topic in this forum itself earlier where the TM said how she noticed both ofhem totally engrossed in each other in this particular scene.The dupatta falls off K's head yet she is oblivious to this and so is Zaroon
Give a f**k. Yes, I said it. Characters that are in love actually have to care about each other, and will often show concern fervently, more so than expected, sometimes in outbursts that shock those around them and seem incomprehensible. This often creates dramatic irony when we as the reader may be aware of their developing feelings but those around them are not.
Cue: The library outburst. I feel somewhere Kashaf was letting her guard down with Zaroon and was warming up to him somewhat before she listened to what Zaroon had to say and his plot.The outburst was more intense in nature coz of K's hidden feelings I think.
Edited by -Symphony- - 11 years ago