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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: -Preetz-

heya.

mom is back home. recovering up 🤗

Good to know.🙂

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Posted: 3 years ago

In between writing the Written Updates, some thoughts popped up on my mind. Please tell me how it is.


Monami's Thoughts About Karan

~Monami has already confessed her feelings, but Karan needs some time. Karan hasn't said yes or no to her, but confessed that he likes her company. They comes on a beach, and standing beside each other. Karan gets lost in his own thoughts, looking at the water and Monami notices him like that. So, here I just write down Monami's thoughts, looking at Karan like that


Yeh Kaisi Tanhaai?

Kinaare khade samandar ke, aise tum kya nihaaro,

Bechain mann ko shaant kar, tum zingadi kyu na sawaaro?

Kyu saath khade hokar bhi, tum saath na ho mere,

Kyu itne paas hokar bhi, hum-dono hain adhure.

Maana ab bhi dil mein hain, tumhere andhera,

Par jaan ne ka haq to, ab thoda bhi hain mera.

Kab tak khamoosh reh, yunn dard apna chupaaoge,

Har pal uss hadse ke saza, khud ko yunn dete jaaoge,

Kabhi na kabhi toh, tumko padega yeh kisi ko batana,

Kyunki chaukhat par, dastak nahi deti khushiyaan rozana.


Edited by kavya1994 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: -Preetz-

Aap bulaoge toh pakka aayenge 🤗

Bas bhoot na ho. Tv pe dekha hain, haveli hain toh bhoot bhi hain 😆

Mummy is doing fine. Friday ko review.

How's everything at your side?

Party karenge iss weekend!!🥳Meri exam bhi khatam ho jayegi tab tak 😆



Zinda hai, aur kya .. exam hone k baad haal batayenge 😳

Wifey bhi nahi dekhne ko milti 😭

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautifully penned Kavya!!! Yun kahu . Kya kavy racha hai kavyaa!! 👏


True.. Monu could've been more articulate, she usually is at wrong times and in front of wrong people, jab jo jise bolna hota hai wo nahi karti

Probably writing a letter would do!😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

In between writing the Written Updates, some thoughts popped up on my mind. Please tell me how it is.


Monami's Thoughts About Karan

~Monami has already confessed her feelings, but Karan needs some time. Karan hasn't said yes or no to her, but confessed that he likes her company. They comes on a beach, and standing beside each other. Karan gets lost in his own thoughts, looking at the water and Monami notices him like that. So, here I just write down Monami's thoughts, looking at Karan like that


Yeh Kaisi Tanhaai?

Kinaare khade samandar ke, aise tum kya nihaaro,

Bechain mann ko shaant kar, tum zingadi kyu na sawaaro?

Kyu saath khade hokar bhi, tum saath na ho mere,

Kyu itne paas hokar bhi, hum-dono hain adhure.

Maana ab bhi dil mein hain, tumhere andhera,

Par jaan ne ka haq to, ab thoda bhi hain mera.

Kab tak khamoosh reh, yunn dard apna chupaaoge,

Har pal uss hadse ke saza, khud ko yunn dete jaaoge,

Kabhi na kabhi toh, tumko padega yeh kisi ko batana,

Kyunki chaukhat par, dastak nahi deti khushiyaan rozana.


Beautiful will respond to it tomorrow.❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Beautifully penned Kavya!!! Yun kahu . Kya kavy racha hai kavyaa!! 👏


True.. Monu could've been more articulate, she usually is at wrong times and in front of wrong people, jab jo jise bolna hota hai wo nahi karti

Probably writing a letter would do!😳

Thank you so much❤️

Exactly, Monu's timings are really wrong, woh kuch bhi karne ya bolne se pehle zyada nahi sochti.

Maybe you are right, writing a letter seems better option, par pata nahi usme bhi kya likh de...Monu ka koi bharosa nahi. Btw her notes on diwali were really good.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

In between writing the Written Updates, some thoughts popped up on my mind. Please tell me how it is.


Monami's Thoughts About Karan

~Monami has already confessed her feelings, but Karan needs some time. Karan hasn't said yes or no to her, but confessed that he likes her company. They comes on a beach, and standing beside each other. Karan gets lost in his own thoughts, looking at the water and Monami notices him like that. So, here I just write down Monami's thoughts, looking at Karan like that


Yeh Kaisi Tanhaai?

Kinaare khade samandar ke, aise tum kya nihaaro,

Bechain mann ko shaant kar, tum zingadi kyu na sawaaro?

Kyu saath khade hokar bhi, tum saath na ho mere,

Kyu itne paas hokar bhi, hum-dono hain adhure.

Maana ab bhi dil mein hain, tumhere andhera,

Par jaan ne ka haq to, ab thoda bhi hain mera.

Kab tak khamoosh reh, yunn dard apna chupaaoge,

Har pal uss hadse ke saza, khud ko yunn dete jaaoge,

Kabhi na kabhi toh, tumko padega yeh kisi ko batana,

Kyunki chaukhat par, dastak nahi deti khushiyaan rozana.


Brilliantly written.❤️

This feels apt even in today's case.

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Posted: 3 years ago

I want Monami to be totally professional and cold with Karan and I want ki usko isse problem ho..

Want him to realise how it feels when the other person does what he has been doing.

Monami has always been bubbly and forgiving type so her this version should bother him.

Not saying this because I thought he/she was wrong but because he needs to stop being one man army and involve other people too.

This time I want to see woman power. The main ladies should rescue.

Else,Karan phir kuch karke accha ban jayega aur Monu phir apne loveria main doob jayegi..

This can be a perfect reality check for her.

She loves the idea of being in love..doesnt know yet all aspects,good/bad, of Karan. This should wake her up and make her realise that she doesnt yet know even 10% of who Karan is.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mineforever

I want Monami to be totally professional and cold with Karan and I want ki usko isse problem ho..

Want him to realise how it feels when the other person does what he has been doing.

Monami has always been bubbly and forgiving type so her this version should bother him.

Not saying this because I thought he/she was wrong but because he needs to stop being one man army and involve other people too.

This time I want to see woman power. The main ladies should rescue.

Else,Karan phir kuch karke accha ban jayega aur Monu phir apne loveria main doob jayegi..

This can be a perfect reality check for her.

She loves the idea of being in love..doesnt know yet all aspects,good/bad, of Karan. This should wake her up and make her realise that she doesnt yet know even 10% of who Karan is.


Ye hamara dream hi reh jayega bro😭


Loveria to bohot hi khatarnak saabit ho raha😡

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved today's episode 😍


I wish ki koel stand le apne liye but I know how difficult it can be for the victim

Edited by Moonks - 3 years ago

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