Sid Current Track (Perception FF) (Part 4 Updated in Comments 3-10-21)

Hi all,

Just starting from the current track where Sid and Balla are in Jail, Karan finds them both inside while the door of the jail is open....Monami enters from behind

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Karan grabs Sid from the collar and gives him a jerk,

Sid raises both of his hands and says " I don`t do violence bro...easy easy...."

Bala tries to lie that he wanted to get Sid out Monami intervenes...Karan leaves them inside exclaiming with anger that they won`t be allowed to have any kind of food or water .....

Its been 30 hours inside the jail, Sids dust mite allergy is moving from the stage of sneezing and runny nose to a itchy coughy throat and wheezing , his voice has become coarse , he is barely keeping himself intact to hold on for his lady love.....

Balla draws something from the piece of broken clay pot, and asks Sid for the admiration of his art " Bro apne ko na artist hona tha....ye 8 jan wale kamre ne kabhi khali jagah dia he na ke apun kuch banata ...ab dekho kiya dream girl banayi ecchh"

Sid coughs,looks at the floor, rolls his eyes and responds in a sarcastic tone" Bala bro ye Picasso Vicasso kia hai....ye ha real art...." then angrily adds "aik bar mujhe meri Sanju ko apni baat btane deta phir jo chahe kar leta..."

Balla asks him with his naughty smile" Bro kia lagta hai tum Madam ji ko bolte aur woh tumhe aese he chod deti...abhi tu sirf khana paani band hua hai....body ki bones salamat hain....keh dete na tu woh bhi jati...."

Sid tries to take a deep breath, makes an effort & sits on the floor to explain Bala" Bala bro ye jo connection mein ne Sanju k liye feel kia hai na ....mujhe pata hai deep down inside usse bhi ye feeling hai....aur destiny bhi yehi chahti hai nahi tu mn uss call ke baad iss academy mn thora hota....ab destiny ne connect kia hai tu destiny he milwaye gi....ab bus kar na yar energy conserve krte hain...lets try and sleep a bit".....Sid`s energy is getting low he barely can talk for long as he can`t breath through his nostrils, the throat has already started swelling, the wheezing sound indicates that allergens have started blocking his air way,if he will stay unattended in a matter of few hours he will develop asthmatic symptoms and shortness of breadth will lead to more complications.......

Bala thinks that its a common cold, he is unaware of Sid`s actual condition but still asks him " Bro aap ko tu medical ki leave mil sakti hai....kia mast time pe sardi khansi hui hai....Monu ki baat maniye academy mn he rehna hai tu dispensary mn reh le...mein hota na tu i shapat aesa cash krata sardi khansi ko k kia btaoon"....

Sid " no bro ....mein theek hoon," takes a pause for catching his breadth ...." pehle bhi woh Kal ho na ho wali beemari k chakkar mn jhooot bol chuka hoon ..."again gives pauses and completes the sentence...".iss bar kuch kaha na tu connection jodne k bjaye hadian tod k jayegi Madam ji....

Sid sits beside the bench with his head placed against the wall....he hears the foot steps of someone and thinks its Sanjana......

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Karan comes and opens the lock ,doesnot even glance at Sid directly goes towards Balla, Balla is standing pinned to the wall....

Karan " Agar academy ke asool samajh agaye hoon aur agli baar aesi kisi bhi harkat se door rehne ki kasm kha li ho tu bahar ja sakte ho..."

Balla guilty and ready to leave the lock up immediately says" Sir Ji bus bhai ji ki madad krne ka maan tha....agey se kuch bhi aesa karte hue mein aur bhai ji dono sochen ge Sir ji...."

Karan "iss kidunya mn aur tumhari duniya mn bohat farqa hai ...ye tu yahan se nikal ke apni rayasat mein jayega aur tumhare jaisa insaan isse yad bhi nahi rahega...behter hoga tum academy mn apni training pe focus karo aur dosroon ki tarafdari band karo....iss waqt sirf tumhari saza khatam hui hai....iss Rayiszada ke sir se jab tak pyar ka bhoot nahi utarta aur jab tak Sanjana se ye apni harkat ki maafi nahi mang leta ye yaheen rahega...."

Sid looks at Karan catches his breadth smiles and says" Chill bro, mein woh cheap type ka flirt nahi hoon ... Casanova type, i know we have a connection...aur jab tak mein ye usse bta nahi deta mn kahin nahi jane wala...."

Karan still does not look at him ,turns towards the jail door and says" Balla jahan panna ko yaheen rehne do...tumhara agar dil bhar gaya ho tu bahar nikal sakte ho..."

Balla looks at Sid with a concern....Sid nods with his eyes saying leave bro....Balla hurriedly move behind Karan....."Nahi Sir Ji mein agaya.....Balla goes near Karan and whispers "Sir Ji bhai ji ko sardi khansi ho rahi hai...kuch asaani mil sake tu"

Karan still doesn`t turn back and says" in Jahaan Panna ko pehle KAL HO NA HO ki heart disease thi abhi devdas ki tarhan lungs ka kuch hoga....in ke liye jhoot bolna kia mushkil hai...tumne aik aur raat sath rehna hai ya apne room mn jane ka maan bana lia hai?"

Balla hurriedly moves towards his room, Karan leaves from there......

Its been a while Sid has started showing aggravated symptoms....Monami comes and sees his condition asks him to accept Shergil`s condition and leave the academy...Sid is still adamant to talk to Sanjana.....Monami goes to Sanjana and pleads her once more to come and talkto Sid......"

to be continued let me know if you wana read my perception of this track for a little while

Thanks in advance

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Excitedly waiting for part 2.

Nice start

Continue soon

....................PART 3....................................................

The weather started getting worse, it added to Monami`s fears, The rain will cause more humidity and it won`t be good for Sid....Sanjana finally paid heed to Monami`s pleading and agrees to go and talk to Sid....It has started raining, Monami decides to go and talk to Karan for one last time as she knows the criticality of the situation....

Karan is coming our from his gym, Monami goes to him and says " Mein yahan aik dost ban ke nahi ayi...mein as a doctor keh rahi hoon please let him leave that jail....usse na aese mahool mein rehne ki adaat hai na uski body iss sab ke liye prepared hai...usse dust se allergy hai..."

Karan" ohh acha tu ab aap ke dost ko konse actor jaisi beemari hogi...let me guess , usse asthma hai , ya lung disease....tum Raeeson ko emotional dramas karne mein maza ata hai....tumhe kia lagta hai ye sab mazak chal raha hai....hum sab dumb hai.....330 km convertible car mein woh drive ker ke asakta hai...aur jahan tak mujhe yaad hai jab woh iss academy mein aya tha tu raste mein usse konsa incubator mila tha ....Tum sab apni ease ke liye kuch bhi story bana lete ho... "

Monami tries to make him understand" Mera yaqeen karo I am not lying, Sid is moderately allergic, but aese cases mein agar symptoms overlook kar diye jayen tu condition worse hosakti hai....i have just seen him, his body is dehydrated, he is having a wheezing sound ...." Monami is about to complete her sentence, Karan interrupts her " ohh please Monami i thought you were better than this, stop all this right away....apne profession ko tu use mat karo apne dost ki galti chupane ke liye....Sid will only come out of that jail when he will apologies to Sanjana infront of all aur usse ye bhi accept karna hoga ke ye sab uss ka stupid attention seeking tactic tha ....you may leave now"

Monami stands there hell shocked about the allegations she just heard about herself and her profession...she wipes her tears , goes towards the dispensary to get a saline bottle as she knows this is what she has to do in order to do her duty as a doctor and a friend........

Finally Sanjana comes to the jail, Sid is sitting down with his hand on his knees and head hid between his legs, Sanju stands outside the jail and starts talking to him " haan bey Chirkut, agai hoon mn , aur je mat samjhio tere se milne k liye ayi hoon, teri jo dost hai Monami uss ne binti ki thi tu mn yahan hoon, meri baat kan laga ke sun, je sab kuch teri duniya mein chalta hoga, je jid, je bhooke rehne ke chonchle tare ghar mn chalte hoon ge...aur faraq dalta hoga....mari duniya mein bohat anter hai....hume in cheejon se koi faraq na pare hai....na hamra koi jod hai na he mail hoga...tu chup chap apna boriya bister utha aur Prakram se bahr ka rasta le...tere jaisoon ki binti mein na karson, order mane tu order samajh le...sun lia chirkut....

Sanjana finds a water bottle on table which was sent their incase Sid apologizes for his mistake, she grabs the bottle turns towards the jail bar and says" marne se bachna hai tu je pani para hai isse pee le aur yahan se chalta ban, tujhe kuch ho hawa gaya tu aese he academy ka naam kharaab hoyega....."

Sanjana turns back , Sid has not changed changed his position neither has he moved a bit, she gets tensed, opens the jail door and goes inside, he calls his name " Chirkut....Chirkut".....then she calls him "Sidhant," he still doesn`t show any movement, she touches him and shakes his hand , while Sida body comes to the ground and he lies their unconscious.. Sanjana calls his name....Monami enters with a saline drip in her hand....she sees Sid lying on the ground shouts his name...immediately checks his pulse, which seems quite low, its just not the weakness and dehydration, his allergy has made his body go towards the worst......Monami and Sanjana shift him to the dispensary,.....

Monami is going mad inside her head,she is trained to stay calm in such situations, she is moving way too fast, she knows, what she has to do in this situation, before coming here she went to one person she knew would believe her, she asked Balla to help her, Sid`s car was parked in Prakram`s parking, she knows that before coming to the academy she placed all the right stuff for his carefree friend, she made a first aid kit in which she placed an Epipen,there is no one who knows him better than her, his wild adventurous nature just to prove his point was not hidden, she knew it in her absence he can do some stupidity can get himself into trouble and might require it ...it all happened right infront of her eyes....Balla would have got the news by now , he must be here any moment, she was frustrated , heart broken, hurt and devastated as after fighting all the odds , she still has to prove herself above his so called priviliged life and today Sid was going through it partly because of it ....Sid has gone through the same life, where in return of the privileges he was bombarded with a life not a dream of any kid,he lived a life without an emotional connect, he didn`t know how to deal with true feelings, he was unaware of making people realize about his loyalty, he didn`t learn to channelize his feeling, and above all with all the emotional baggage he devised a plan of showing a carefree human to the outer world to avoid showing his real side....Monami was the only one who knew how much Sid values relations, he had very few real ones in his life who didn`t chose him because of his father`s wealth, who were there with him for his ownself, right now she knew what she has to do for this "Rebellious kid " who just wants to prove himself in terms of his relationships.....

Monami just inserts the needle in Sid`s pale hand, his heart rate is very rapid, his breaths are short and forced showing inability of proper oxygen supply.... Monami`s fear are getting true, she knows what will be happen next , she just does not want her biggest nightmare to be true...Its just a dispensary inside Prakram with limited resources, Monami is not familiar with anything around, Sanjana tries to help but Monami asks her not to, and stay away from Sid....Sanjana sends someone to call the nurse here to help Monami get the right stuff....Monami inject dopamine, she knows its just not because of mere dehydration , nurse comes she asks her to find the antihistamine injections, Balla runs inside with the kit in his hand, he hands it over to Monami takes the epipen out and inserts it in to lessen the allergic reaction,.....Sid body has started seizing, Monami shouts and asks for a blanket to keep Sid warm and avoid going to hypothermia,....

Karan gets to know about Sid`s condition he calls the ambulance, but this weather has made things worse, Prakram is in a remote area,away from city life at a place which is not under scrutiny of any evil activity, but due to heavy rain , landslide has blocked the way of ambulance and its taking more time than usual to reach here.....Karan enters into the dispensary, Monami is on her toes, she is performing her duty at its best, its been 15 minutes and Monami has given the second dose of epinephrine and dopamine to Sid.. Oxygen concentrator is already provided to Sid`s to ease his quick shallow breathing....Sids vitals are still pretty bad.......

Karan enters the dispensary and says" Ambulance has been called , it will reach ....he takes a pause and adds " weather condition ki wajah se kuch time lag raha hai"

Monami has just seen and heard enough she just breaks her silence and starts in a sarcastic tone" Mr Karan Shergill, for your information, mein tumhe uss waqt bhi as a doctor yehi btane ayi thi...tum iss sab ko bhi staged na samjho...isliye bta rahi hoon Sid has level 2 Dust allergy tumhari bhasha mn kahoon tu iss ka matlab hai k usko aik dam kuch nahi hoga magar agar treatment na ho time pe tu usse severe effect hosakta hai, secondly mein aap ko as a doctor btati chaloon, food aur water deprivation ki wajah se us ki immunity aur low hogai aur Excessive sneezing, runny knows, wheezing aur shallow breathing ke sath symptoms worse ho gaye.."

Monami points at the pulse Monitor"...iss waqt ye monitor screen jo vitals show kar rahi hai uss mein low BP, rapid heart rate, low oxygen saturation hain....aur shallow forced breathing tu shayad aap dekh he sakte hain....Now medical terms mein kahoon tu severe dehydration accompanied by onset of high sensitization as a result of allergic reaction has moved his body to this state ,he is having shivering showing progression towards hypothermia, jis ke liye isse iswaqt ye blanket udhaya hai....the next stage can be hypovolemic shock which can result in cardiac arrest or an organ failure....aur ye sab as a freind staged nahi hai....as a doctor mein ne pehle bhi tumhe plead kia tha, warn kia tha....magar tumhe lagta hai ke tumhare siwa sab galat hain....Mr Shergill, as a friend mein ne Sid k liye chup reh ke galat kia magar as a doctor apne profession ki mere liye bhi utni importance hai jitni iss uniform ki...but jo tum ne kia woh bohat galat tha.....Iss waqt mein tum jaise cheat ki shakal nahi dekhna chahti better hoga ke tum yahan se chale jao...."

Karan silently listens to Monami`s outburst and leaves the dispensary, he knows he crossed the line, it was unintentional but he did went overboard, he was unaware of Sid`s condition but the way he suspected and accused Monami was also wrong, his anger , his frustration after that incident is his biggest enemy, and today it was the weak moment which made him repeat his mistake , Karan is in guilt but the damage has already been done........

Hi its my imagination of current track , do let me know if you guys wana read more..........

Bye

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Nice start

Continue soon

Thanks for the encouragement, I have somewhat forgot how the things at site work but hope you like the part3 as well.

...............PART4..............................................................................

Its been 12 hours, the weather has finally got better, Monami had to tackle the situation all by herself due to the landslide and unavailability of ambulance , Karan and Sanjana have not even blinked an eye, Karan made all what he could have to help Monami whether it was about arranging doctors on video call or getting the required medicines in this weather ,Sanjana had not left Sid`s room and been there throughout the night,

Sid clenches his fist, and gasp for air ...Sanju and Monami rush towards him,Sid finally shows signs of improvement and is coming back to senses,

Monami hurreidly moves towards him as he is in still in a state of delirium where it is difficult to him to differentiate between reality and hallucinations,

" Sid Sid tu mujhe sun sakta hai....tu theek hai na...tu theek hai na...."

Sid finally opens his eyes and moves his eyes aorund ..." hnn,..hnn...Monami , Monami bro ....mein theek hn...Sanju thi yahan....."

Monami " haan Sid Woh yaheen thi pori raat....."

Sid" Monami i value relatonships na.... you know me....i ..I am not a cheap flirt type...."

Monami" haan Sid tu karta hai...mein janti hoon, sab jante hain....you just calm down...sab theek hai, abhi tu theek ho ja phir baat karte hain...."

Its been three days, things have taken a drastic turn at Prakram, Monami tried to make Sid realize that even if Sanju was their it was becuase of guilt and human factor, she doesnot love her which she has already told him....Sid has to prove that he will not bother her out of her choice, he has broken trust of Mummy Ji, Sanju and all the recruits....Sid is allowed to stay in academy tillhis recovery, but now Sid wants to go as soon as possible

Monami is Packing Sid`s bag.." Sid meri baat sun, tu thora theek hoja phir chale jana...."

Sid.." Mein theek hon Monu , mujhe yahan reh ker Mummy Ji aur Sanju ko aur hurt nahi karna....mujhe yahan se jana hoga...."

Monami" but tu abhi recover nahi hoa Sid, itni lambi drive hai...abhi branula utare 6 hours bhi nahi hue...grip dekh apne hathoon ki...."

Sid..." Monu tu na mujhe le ke bohat conscious hai iss liye ye sab feel kar rahi hai....mujhe jana hai bus , mein yahan aur nahi ruk sakta, mein relations ki calue janta hoon, aur relations se hurt hone ka dard bhi....mein kisi apne ko hurt nahi karna chahta Mono, mein ne usse pyar kia tha, but ye shart tu nahi thi ki woh bhi mujhe pyar kare....Kismat ne hume milwaya tha....ab ye jo destiny hai na yeh chahti tu hume mila deti...iss destiny se tujhe tu pata hai meri nahi banti....Mumma ki time ki tarhan iss bar bhi mujhe loser bna rahi hai....but mujhe loser hona accepted hai, selfish hona nahi...."

Sanju overhears his convo but leaves from there....

Monu looks at Sid with teary eyes , she knows now he will not listen to her , he has to prove this to himself that he is loyal in his relations, he has to fight out his life long battle of proving himself worthy of a real connection, she just keeps on packing his stuff " Tu selfish nahi hai,u relations ki value karta hai, bus apne emotions ko express krne mein thoda budho hai....but tu sab se loyal hai Sid, mein janti hoon mujhe trsut hai.....acha ye packing kr di hai, ye food pack kar dia hai, every 2 hours you have to rest for 20 minutes, khana sara packed hai, medicines packed hain,har cheeze labelled hai, ye sab peete rehna, tumhare medicines ka course abhi aik week chalega, keep me informed every single day....ye first aid kit hai iss mein sab cheezen refill kar di hain, .Sid you better listen to me otherwise mein sab uncle to bta doon gi..."

Sid " Monu br ye bar bar threat kion krti hoon, sab karoon ga Dr Monami , ab bus jane do mujhe...."

Sid goes to the corridor, Balla is standing there so as Dilbagh Ji to bid him bye.....Sid gives a tight hug to Monami with teary eyes, he meets Balla and Dil bagh ji, Balla placs his bags in his car, Sid sits and leaves from there.