KarVi ff : Addicted To You | new update on pg 10 | 27th jan '16 - Page 7

Originally posted by: QuboolHaiLover1

Really nice update! Loved it! Hope to see you continue the story soon!

Thanks a lot dear.. very happy that you liked it..😃 🤗 will surely continue soon 😉

Amazing update yaar!

Originally posted by: Yush001

Amazing update yaar!

I guess I should learn dialogue writing frm u cuz I haven't included much dialogues in my story.

Srsly I must say ur fanfiction is much better then mine😃

Do update soon😳

thanks yaara!🤗 arre its bcoz, tumhare story mein sirf action ki zaroort hai na☺️☺️ well thank you so much😳 and tumbara bhi accha hai re story se yaad aaya.. tumhari story ki update nahi padhi mein. padke review dungi😃 will update soonish😉

Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Very nice apeksha

Thanks a lot amy😳

Originally posted by: ApekshaM

thanks yaara!🤗 arre its bcoz, tumhare story mein sirf action ki zaroort hai na☺️☺️ well thank you so much😳 and tumbara bhi accha hai re story se yaad aaya.. tumhari story ki update nahi padhi mein. padke review dungi😃 will update soonish😉

thanks alot yaar!

hello karvi'ans🤗 i'm sorry for the delayed update.. as i was lil busy with my assignments.. hope you don't mind😊 but.. but... i bought something for all of you.. and that is... extra long update with only karvi moments!! that too without any interuption😉 so do have a look and share your views regarding😃

PART 6

#parve mansion,karVi's room#
Survi came out wiping her wet hairs with a towel.. she then stood infront of a mirror appyling the sindoor after keeping the towel aside.
"Time changes so soon, and so does our lives" she thought. Where few days ago , she thought her life was over when her and aniket's marriage was fixed, yesterday she was 'almost' marrying aniket.. and today, she was a married woman.. not to aniket but to Mr. karthik barve Her 1st and true love, the one who can do whatever for her happiness and the one for whom she can dacrifice her overall happiness... Miss. Survi Shreekant Mohite was now "Mrs. Survi Karthik Parve." She smiled as she uttered those words.. She looked up in the mirror as the door opened with a cracking sound and here he entered the man of the house and the breath of her life..

karthik was fed up with this situation now,, what all happened these days shook him to the core firstly aniket's confessed his love for survi.. lata was stated as mentally inbalanced, then aniket gone missing from his own marriage reasoning that he did that to take revenge from survi for his father's death, which lead him to marry survi as to prevent her from insults.., and now tayi informed him that aniket was kidnapped.! And on top of that this unknown caller somewhat seemed mysterious to him.. signing to his unpredictable life he opened the door when eyes met through mirror.. she looked so divine in a simple saree with no jwelleries except the mangalsutra and sindoor, hair swept to her right side.. her dori's undone,, and this caught his attention. Her back was lil wet due to shower due to which it looked apealing.. survi followed his gaze as her hands went to her back andher eyes widened on realising that her dori's are not yet tied and she was standing there infront if him without bothering, lost in her own world..
"how shameless of you survi.." survi murmured in a low voice. And suddenly turned around facing him which bought him from his la la land.
Karthik: ah woh.. woh kya haina ki...

Survi stared in confusion as he continued..

Karthik: Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum yaha yeh..i mean. i'm sorry.. i think i have to leave now. You carryon.

Saying so he turned to leave when she called "karthik.!" Which made him stop

Survi: it's.. it's OK.! Yeh aap ka bhi toh kamra haina..

"Aur mein bhi" she said in her mind.

Karthik turned around to face survi and a long eye long continued. Which was broken by survi first.. when she asked "aap..ko kuch chahiye tha?"
Karthik: nahi nahi.. woh mein shower leke aata hu.

And he vanished into the shower room and by the time he came back from the shower,, survi was nowhere in the room as his eyes seached her in every nook and corner of their room before announcing to himself "she might be somewhere downstairs"

He stood infront of his wardrobe wiping his wet hair and after that threw that towel away which by default landed on survi's face as she barged into the room without knocking.. karthik started searching for his shirt as he was shivering naked with only a towel wrapped around his waist.. but froze as he heard "Karthik aap yeh kya..." survi shouted irritation while removing the towel but her sentence didn't came into full as she gaped at karthik's musculine features.. before closing her eyes tight and turning around.. karthik gapped wide eyed at survi then at himself ,and then at survi.
as karthik shouted "tum!" and turned around facing his back to survi. While covering his body by crossing his hands across his torso..

Karthik: survi tum! Tu..tum room mein knoc
k karke nahi aasakti..!
Survi: ha toh aapko bhi door lock karke change karna tha na.. aap aise bina kapdo ke mere aakhon ke saamne aayenge toh isme meri kya galti hai..

Karthik's eyes widened while survi bite her tongue realising what she just said..

Karthik: kya!!!
Survi: ma.. mein.. mere matlab, meine kuch dekha nahi ab tak.!
"Oh god.. Not again!" Survi said to herself as she corrected her sentence before karthik starts to react wierd..

Survi: mera matlab woh nahi tha.. matlab meine kuch nahi dekha..
Karthik: theek hai theek hai.. ab tum mujhe mera towel do..
"Yeh lijiye aapka tow..." survi starts to turn around but stops as karthik screams. Karthik: ghoomna mat!
Survi: arre par agar mein ghoomungi nahi toh aapko towel kaise dungi?!
Karthik: towel paas karne keliye ghoomna zaroori nahi hota..
Survi: accha phir batayiye kaise?
Karthik: tum peeche ke tarah badho aur towel mere haath mein do.. bina mude.!

Survi stepped back and so did karthik and their breath hitched as hands met.
But karthik soon got out his senses back as he pulled the towel but with such a force that survi who was reminishing the touch of karthik and was in her own world bumped into karthik with a jerk which made karthik to loose his balance and they both landed on the bed with karthik taking along survi on top of him.

Eyes met and their world's came to a still. both knew what they felt for each other but they didn't thought it necessory to speak out their feelings as their eyes did the talkings.. as if time stopped just to witness thes two love birds rejoice their togetherness..

Karthik tucked a loose strand of survi's hair behind her ears which was blocking his view and cupped her face. her breathing got shallower as he tightened his hold on her waist.. karthik leaned closer and so did survi. She closed her eyes in anticipation as karthik kissed suvi's forehead earning a gasp from her. Survi's grip became stronger leaving nail marks on his shoulder.
but karthik continued his sweet torture on survi as he kissed her eyes, and then cheeks.. survi opened her eyes and his eyes met with hers once again.. which spoke only the unconditional love she has for him.. her breath hitched when his gaze dropped down to her luscious lips..

To be continued...

No proof reading has been done.. plz bear me if any spelling/grammar mistakes..😛

Awesome. Keep the good work going...

👏👏Fab update. Just luvd his sweet torture. 😳

👏

Originally posted by: ApekshaM

hello karvi'ans🤗 i'm sorry for the delayed update.. as i was lil busy with my assignments.. hope you don't mind😊 but.. but... i bought something for all of you.. and that is... extra long update with only karvi moments!! that too without any interuption😉 so do have a look and share your views regarding😃

PART 6

#parve mansion,karVi's room#
Survi came out wiping her wet hairs with a towel.. she then stood infront of a mirror appyling the sindoor after keeping the towel aside.
"Time changes so soon, and so does our lives" she thought. Where few days ago , she thought her life was over when her and aniket's marriage was fixed, yesterday she was 'almost' marrying aniket.. and today, she was a married woman.. not to aniket but to Mr. karthik barve Her 1st and true love, the one who can do whatever for her happiness and the one for whom she can dacrifice her overall happiness... Miss. Survi Shreekant Mohite was now "Mrs. Survi Karthik Parve." She smiled as she uttered those words.. She looked up in the mirror as the door opened with a cracking sound and here he entered the man of the house and the breath of her life..

karthik was fed up with this situation now,, what all happened these days shook him to the core firstly aniket's confessed his love for survi.. lata was stated as mentally inbalanced, then aniket gone missing from his own marriage reasoning that he did that to take revenge from survi for his father's death, which lead him to marry survi as to prevent her from insults.., and now tayi informed him that aniket was kidnapped.! And on top of that this unknown caller somewhat seemed mysterious to him.. signing to his unpredictable life he opened the door when eyes met through mirror.. she looked so divine in a simple saree with no jwelleries except the mangalsutra and sindoor, hair swept to her right side.. her dori's undone,, and this caught his attention. Her back was lil wet due to shower due to which it looked apealing.. survi followed his gaze as her hands went to her back andher eyes widened on realising that her dori's are not yet tied and she was standing there infront if him without bothering, lost in her own world..
"how shameless of you survi.." survi murmured in a low voice. And suddenly turned around facing him which bought him from his la la land.
Karthik: ah woh.. woh kya haina ki...

Survi stared in confusion as he continued..

Karthik: Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum yaha yeh..i mean. i'm sorry.. i think i have to leave now. You carryon.

Saying so he turned to leave when she called "karthik.!" Which made him stop

Survi: it's.. it's OK.! Yeh aap ka bhi toh kamra haina..

"Aur mein bhi" she said in her mind.

Karthik turned around to face survi and a long eye long continued. Which was broken by survi first.. when she asked "aap..ko kuch chahiye tha?"
Karthik: nahi nahi.. woh mein shower leke aata hu.

And he vanished into the shower room and by the time he came back from the shower,, survi was nowhere in the room as his eyes seached her in every nook and corner of their room before announcing to himself "she might be somewhere downstairs"

He stood infront of his wardrobe wiping his wet hair and after that threw that towel away which by default landed on survi's face as she barged into the room without knocking.. karthik started searching for his shirt as he was shivering naked with only a towel wrapped around his waist.. but froze as he heard "Karthik aap yeh kya..." survi shouted irritation while removing the towel but her sentence didn't came into full as she gaped at karthik's musculine features.. before closing her eyes tight and turning around.. karthik gapped wide eyed at survi then at himself ,and then at survi.
as karthik shouted "tum!" and turned around facing his back to survi. While covering his body by crossing his hands across his torso..

Karthik: survi tum! Tu..tum room mein knoc
k karke nahi aasakti..!
Survi: ha toh aapko bhi door lock karke change karna tha na.. aap aise bina kapdo ke mere aakhon ke saamne aayenge toh isme meri kya galti hai..

Karthik's eyes widened while survi bite her tongue realising what she just said..

Karthik: kya!!!
Survi: ma.. mein.. mere matlab, meine kuch dekha nahi ab tak.!
"Oh god.. Not again!" Survi said to herself as she corrected her sentence before karthik starts to react wierd..

Survi: mera matlab woh nahi tha.. matlab meine kuch nahi dekha..
Karthik: theek hai theek hai.. ab tum mujhe mera towel do..
"Yeh lijiye aapka tow..." survi starts to turn around but stops as karthik screams. Karthik: ghoomna mat!
Survi: arre par agar mein ghoomungi nahi toh aapko towel kaise dungi?!
Karthik: towel paas karne keliye ghoomna zaroori nahi hota..
Survi: accha phir batayiye kaise?
Karthik: tum peeche ke tarah badho aur towel mere haath mein do.. bina mude.!

Survi stepped back and so did karthik and their breath hitched as hands met.
But karthik soon got out his senses back as he pulled the towel but with such a force that survi who was reminishing the touch of karthik and was in her own world bumped into karthik with a jerk which made karthik to loose his balance and they both landed on the bed with karthik taking along survi on top of him.

Eyes met and their world's came to a still. both knew what they felt for each other but they didn't thought it necessory to speak out their feelings as their eyes did the talkings.. as if time stopped just to witness thes two love birds rejoice their togetherness..

Karthik tucked a loose strand of survi's hair behind her ears which was blocking his view and cupped her face. her breathing got shallower as he tightened his hold on her waist.. karthik leaned closer and so did survi. She closed her eyes in anticipation as karthik kissed suvi's forehead earning a gasp from her. Survi's grip became stronger leaving nail marks on his shoulder.
but karthik continued his sweet torture on survi as he kissed her eyes, and then cheeks.. survi opened her eyes and his eyes met with hers once again.. which spoke only the unconditional love she has for him.. her breath hitched when his gaze dropped down to her luscious lips..

To be continued...

No proof reading has been done.. plz bear me if any spelling/grammar mistakes..😛

Originally posted by: SWA1992

Awesome. Keep the good work going...

thanks dear...😃 yup will continue soon.😊