KarVi ff : Addicted To You | new update on pg 10 | 27th jan '16

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello forumwasi's🤗🤗 how are you all.. i'm back but this time with a fanfiction on karvi😳 in love with survi's new dynamic avatar.. but as there are no much karvi scenes i'm missing my them like hell😭 so thought to pen up something that is on my mind😉😛 this story is based on the current track where aniket is kidnapped by tayi and karthik marries survi to save her and shreekant's honour and so on.. so without wasting any time i'm gonna post the prologue first.. and if you guys want me to continue this story then will be updating regularly😃 ok so here you go with the prologue..

PROLOGUE

"Kyu..!!! kyu kiya aapne aisa karthik??!" Cried survi.
"Kyu shaadi ki mujhse jab aapko nah toh mujhepe aitbaar hai,,nah humari dosti par, aur naahi humari pya.. "

she stopped realising what she was going to say She then cooled herself gulping the lump formed in her throat as karthik stood there like a stone.. it pained her that he had become such a cold hearted that even her painful cries can't reach out to him.. she never felt this guilty before. Guilty..!! it should be him who has to be guilty for not excepting her as a wife even after marrying her..but no, he was standing there calm she doubted even did he paid any attention to what she was trying to say.. she signed and walked past him.
"Survi" Karthik's call made her turn back & look at him..

Karthik: dekho survi.. baat ko samajh ne ki koshish karo.. aniket mera BHAI hai,, meri jaan se bhi pyaara hai woh mujhe.. uske milne tak toh..
"Aur mein aap keliye kya hu karthik?"
Asked survi cutting off his sentence..
Survi: boliye na karthik.. kya lagti hu mein aapki?! Dost?!
Karthik: survi..! meri baat suno..
Survi: BIWI hu mein aapki Mr. Karthik parve!!! Aaj tak meine aapki kahi har baat,,aankh band kar maanti aayi hu.. aur aage bhi maanti rahungi, par.. aankh band karke jhoot ka saath de kar nahi, balki sach ka saath de ke aapka saath nibhane ka jo vaada kiya tha,,usse nibhaungi..

Karthik was beyond shocked to see survi in her new ferocious attire.. she seemed to be a hungry lioness waiting for her prey. He stood there rooted to the ground..
When she added "bidaai toh mera aaj hi hoga!! Aur aaj hi mera grah pravesh,, mere pati ke saath"
And this brought karthik out of his shock

Karthik: nahi survi!! Yeh nahi hosakta.. tab tak toh nahi jab tak aniket nahi miljaata.
Survi: ab toh wahi hoga karthik jo mein chahti hu.. bohot karliya balidaan aur bohot sehliya dukh-dard. Ab jeet hogi toh sirf acchayi ki burayi par! yeh vaada raha..!!

And the evening witnessed the will power of a woman who stood there determined to resolve every problem of her life by defeating the evil..

No proof reading has been done..Plz bear me if any spelling or grammar mistakes.. 😛 and do share your views regarding😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow welcome back and great going continue soon👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was amazing.
I hope our survi said so...
Plz continue yar...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: antika11412

wow welcome back and great going continue soon👏

thanks ankita😳 will update soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Update next part soon plz

thanks dear😊 update is on its way.. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SWA1992

That was amazing.
I hope our survi said so...
Plz continue yar...

thanks re..😳😳 me too hoped same but that won't happen unless cvs change their mind😛 will update soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello again!! 😃 OK without any of my further bak bak here you go with the 1st part..

PART 1

And soon the ritual of bidaai got over and it was now time for survi to take her leave from her father..

Shreekant: Survi.. mein jaanta hu ki mera yeh sab kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai kyuki mein jaanta hu, ki meri survi bohot samajdaar hai par phir bhi waha sab ke saath miljhulkar rehna.. mein jaanta hu iske liye tumhe thoda wakt lagega par beta kehte haina,,wakt ke saath saath zakam bhi bhar jaate hai.. waise hi uljhe huye rishtey bhi sulaj jaate hai. Bas uss wakt keliye intezaar karo.

Survi: baba.!! Ab aap meri chinta karna chod dijiye. aap bas apna khayal rakhiye.. dawai time le lena.. aur waise bhi karthik haina mere saath.. toh chita ki koi baat nahi.
Shreekant: haan haan...ab toh tum dono dost se pati patni jo ban gaye ho. Karthik,, beta mujhe yeh kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai par survi ka khayal rakhna.. yeh sabke baar mein sochti hai par apne baare mein zara sa bhi khayal nahi hai isko..
Survi: baba!!

She looked to her right side at him only to caught his void eyes that spoke helplessness.. but karthik managed a smile at shreekant before excusing himself from there.
Shreekant felt something was wrong as ge asked survi was everything alright between her and karthik. To which survi nodded reassuringly..

karthik and survi rode off shreekant's house after the father and daughter parted with a affectionate hug and tears of leaving each other and also anticipating the upcoming new life..

#Parve mansion#
"Arre jaldi jaldi haath chalao woh log bas aate hi honge.." "aur yaha ke phool kaha hai?! Jaldi kaam karo.. " lata chirped happily from one place to another indicating the servants to decor the whole parve mansion neatly and beautifully to welcome the newly weds..
She stopped seeing tayi enter the hall with a confused expression as she was unaware of the fact that karthik and survi are married now..lata smiled inwardly and walked to her.

Lata: arre tayi!! Aap ab tak taiyyar nahi huyi.. ?! Jaayiye jaayiye,, jaldi taiyyar hoyiye.. iss ghar ki bahu aarahi hai aur swagat keliye aap hi nahi hongi toh...maza kaise aayega?!

Tayi laughed loudly at lata "how dumb is this woman,, still dreaming about survi being her daughter-in-law" she thought before heaving a sign and continued..

Tayi: kaay re lata.. tera upar ka mala khisak gaya hai kya?! Survi aur ani ki shaadi huyi hi nahi.. toh woh iss ghar ki bahu kaise ban gayi? Tu bhool gayi kya!! aniket shaadi ke mandap se bhag gaya tha.!! Ab woh wapis aane se raha..Aur tereko toh pata hoga,,mandap mein chodi huyi dulhan ko koi aankh uthakar bhi nahi dekhta.. shaadi karna toh door ki baat hai.

Lata smirked before she continued

Lata: aapko kya lagta hai tayi.. itna sab kuch hojane ke baad karthik apni survi ko waha mandap mein akele chod kar aajayega?!!

And this stirred tai's confusion more
Tayi: manjhe??
Lata: matlab yeh hai tayi..jab tak mera karthik survi ke saath hai uske saath kabhi galat kaise hosakta hai?!
Tayi: tu kehna kya chah rahi hai?
Lata: aap ab bhi nahi samjhi tayi?! Karthik ne survi shaadi karli hai.. usne phone karke bhi kaha ki bidaayi ki rasam bhi poori hochuki hai aur ab woh log kisi bhi wakt yaha aasakte hai grah pravesh keliye. Toh hogayi na survi iss ghar ki bahu.

To say tayi was shocked was an understatement.

Tayi: yeehh lata!! tereko kya lagta hai..kartya mere khilaf jaayega??! Tayi ke khilaf?!! woh bhi uss survi keliye?!! Aisa ho icch nahi sakta.. huh!!
Lata: aapko pata hai taayi,, aapki humesha se ek bohot buri galat femi rahi hai..aapko lagta hai ki har baar aap jo sochti hai wahi hoga.. Aur kayi baar galti se hua bhi hoga.. par iss baar nahi. Aapki paapon ka ghada bhar chuka hai tayi!! Ab aapko koi nahi bacha sakta.! Chaliye jaldi kijiye,, kya haina.. mein nahi chahti ke mera beta aur meri bahu aap keliye apna wakt barbaad kare... haan?!

Lata after giving tayi a last glare resumed her work to instruct the servents leaving behind a fuming tayi..

"SURVI!!!" Tayi greeted her teeth in pure frustration..
Tayi(to herself): grah pravesh toh hoga tera survi par tu kartya ke zindagi mein kabhi apne liye jagah nahi bana payegi.. aayi shappat!! teri zindagi ko agar mein narak nahi banadi na, toh mera naam bhi kamala tayi nahi!!

To be continued...

No proof reading has been done.. plz bear me if any spelling/grammar mistakes 😛 and do share your views regarding 😃
Edited by ApekshaM - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsum yaar! Plz do continue.
Nd make sure to add some hot KarVi scenes. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yush001

Awsum yaar! Plz do continue.

Nd make sure to add some hot KarVi scenes.😳

thanks yush😳😳 i'm not so good in writing intense scenes... but will try for sure😉😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh u updated soo fast. Thats so thrilling update. Wait for tai-survi war...

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