Pyar ki yeh ek kahani ( part3 pg3 updtd 28 dec)

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Hi guys this continues from the point, when karthik with abhi's help is able to finds Suru and confronts her at the railway station. " Survi..." called out Karthik as an unbearable fear of losing her again , like 8 years before gripped his chest. She turned and looked at her hand that had been gripped by him. An unknown feeling of happiness passed through her but all the injuries inflicted on her friendship and trust came hitting on her like a lightning bolt and she threw his hand away with a jerk. A fresh stream of tears fell down both of their eyes as Karthik looked at her in pained expression. " Survi...mat jao...please...hamari dost ki kha..." stuttered Karthik as survi shouted " dosti... karthik aap kis dosti ki baat kr rhe hain, Jo kbhi thi hi nhi, his PR aapne kbhi aitbaar kiya hi nhi ". Karthik looked down with moist eyes. Survi looked at him and then giving a forceful laugh added " kya hua Karthik, kya ye sach bura lga ...ki dhokha Maine nhi aapne diya...mere vishwaas ko, mere dil ko.She started leaving but this time Karthik has decided that he is not going to be a spectator and see life walk away. He held her hand and turning her pulled her close. He held her by waist as Survi tried to push him away by pushing at his chest. He rested his forehead on hers as he muttered " no...please no". She stopped her struggle as his both hands rested on her cheeks. He started " Maine galti nhi ki...Maine gunaah kiya hai. Main tumhaari maafi me bhi kaabil nhi hu pr main tumhe nhi jaana dunga. Pichle 8 saal se main ek zindaa laash ki tarah tha, patthar dil ...PR tumhaare aate hai iss patthar ko uska dim mil gya." Survi looked at him as he wiping her tears continued " Maine tumhe dard diya pr use kahi jyada chhott yahan lagi hai" said he taking her one hand and keeping it on his aching heart. Their heads still rested against each other as he continued " jb bhi tumhe dard diya, card hi paaya hai Maine. Ab aur nhi, main jeena chahta hoon...Jo much main 8 saal pehle kho chuka hoon main use phir she paana chahta hu ". " Kaise karoon main aap pr vishwaas, kl ko agar phir much aisa hua toh main toh mar hi..." stuttered survi as he kept his hand on her mouth restraining her from continuing " nhi kabhi Aisa mat kehna...kyunki iss baar agar Maine tumhe khoya, toh main hi kho jaaunga Survi". He then distanced away and taking her both hands kissed them and smilingly said " let's go. Barve mansion ko ek ghar bana do Survi". He held her hand and started walking but she didn't budge. " kis rishte se main vahan jaau, Karthik". He smiled innocently as he turned and pulling her close continued " ye rishta WO vaada hai Jo humein baandhta hai, ye rishta woh hai Jo humein ek doosre she nafrat krne ka junoon deta hai, yeh won rishta hai jb chhot kisi ko lage or dard kisi or ko hota hai, ye woh rishta hai Jo mujhe tumhe pareshaan krne ka sukoon deta hai, ye pyaar na rishta hai survi". "Karthik..." stuttered Survi as she was pulled into a hug as he finished " main tumse pyaar krta hoon survi, ...I Love You". She froze as he hugged her close shedding tears. " I love u Survi and I need u, to live".A fresh stream of tears appeared as she slowly extended her hands to his back hugging him close. " I love you Karthik, never leave me alone". Srikant smiled and wiped his tears. Karthik looked at her as he kissed on her forehead. He then held her hand and intertwining her fingers with him left the station.Looks like one more part is needed to complete the is. So how was it? It is my best story till date, I guess. Do comment if I did justice to today's upcoming episode
Edited by nish_vir - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pretty gud...nice nd lovely..pls continue dis story..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hope aisa hi kuch dikhaye show mein..😳 but this was nice👏👏 well done.. and do continue with reactions and actions of other family memeber's of barve mansion'😉 (btw can i know your name?😊)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sooo lovely. Kya dialogue !!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow i just love it ! Keep it up ! Continue soon
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PART-2 : Karthik entered through the gate of Barve mansion. Lata was frantically looking for Survi behind Karthik intension. Tai was smiling inwardly thinking " kartya ne uske saath itna bura kiya, kyun aayegi vo vaapas?". Simmran was already hyped thinking of how her aai had misbehaved with kaka and her sister. She could not handle this suspence as she asked " Karthik Ji, vo Survi..." and appeared Survi and Srikant. Karthik smiled at his mother who had tears in her eyes. Aniket was not sure of his feelings for her now that he knew that she is the girl he despisefd the most 8 years ago. Karthik turned to look at Survi and smilingly pulled her hand into his and intertwined their fingers. This action of his tensed Simmran, Ani and tai. Survi looked at him as he motioned her to enter and slowly he led her into the hall to his aai who loved her as much as him. Simmran shrugged the thought away thinking that Karthik and survi have recently overcome such a huge misunderstanding and it was a friendly gesture from Karthik's side. Tai thought " Kartya Teri yeh kahani toh bahut ulajh gyi hai re..kahin there ko Survi she pya...nhi nhi agar aisa hua toh meri kya aukaat reh jaayegi". Survi hugged Lata kaki and wiping her tears said " kaki aapko theek dekhkr main bahut khush hu". " main theek bhi toh apni beti ki vajah she hui hoon vrna toh main KB ki mar gyi hoti" finished Lata side glancing at Tai who looked anywhere but her. " kaki aap aisa mat boliye" chided Survi as Lata holding both of her hands looked at Karthik who was smiling seeing Survi . She smiled as she said " kaki nhi aai ". Survi hugged Lata again as tai and Pyaare seemed bored. Karthik hugged Srikant apologising for his mistakes. Simmran's mother had come till then after knowing the story from Karan. " ye survi toh some ki chidiya Nikli, mujhe issue vaapas apne saath laana hog kyunki yahi meri Simmran ko karthik k pass le jaayegi". She approached Survi and started her acting " Survi beta mujhe maaf kr de, Maine na jaana tujhse kya kya keh diya" finished she trying to fall on her legs. Survi stopped her and said " kaki aap kyu maafi maang rhi hai, aapne vahi kiya Jo USS samay shayad koi bhi insaan krta". "hai re bappa, yeh toh acting krna mein meri bhi amma hai" thought tai as simmran's mom continued " tune mujhe maaf kr diya". Survi nodded. Karthik was totally pissed off and seeing her son like this, Lata knew that this is a love problem. " beta, phir na tu hamare saath vaapas ghr chal".." haan survi chl na vaapas" supported Simmran. Karthik looked at his aai and said "aap kuch kaho naa aai". " Main kya kahuu, ab unn logon ka bhi toh USS PR haq hai" replied she and smiled inwardly thinking " tu hai na karthik, tu rokega apni Survi ko". Simmran held Survi's hand but karthik came and removing her hand held Survi's hand and said " Survi kahin nhi jaayegi, vo yahan rahegi apne Karthik ke pass". Survi looked at Karthik and gave him a not-yet look. He smiled cutely at her and intertwined their fingers. The old Karthik is back. He said " meri Survi yahan rahegi mere saath". Survi blushed at his words and he again smiled cutely at her. " Excuse us please, mujhe Survi she kuch baatein krni hai" and saying so Karthik dragged her away as the sound of shutting of door echoed through the corridor. Lata and Srikant looked at each other and smiled. So how's it?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing!!🥳 tai ki baji band!! ab thoda romance bhi dikha do😉☺️loved this part.. update soon!

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Edited by ApekshaM - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome!👍🏼 can't wait to know wt happened next! Pls update part3 soon!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nice os 👍🏼 waiting for next update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow love part 2 really much

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