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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello Guys,

This is my first try on YTG characters feel free to tell me how it was even if its not good it will help me improve please do forgive the mistakes.

Asmita woke up in her room looking around her and wondering where she was, she couldn't recognize the room she was in, slowly she turned her head to the mirror on her left and she saw the sindoor on her forehead and remind all the things that happened earlier in the day, she was married to Riddoy.

Remembering her so called wedding tears start to rolling down her cheeks, her bondhu her budho her best friend her humsafar her love betrayed her, he was the one because of who from today she would be called Mrs Asmita Riddoy Mozumdar all because of this stupid challenge, all this because of him, she felt disgust thinking of the rights Ridoy Mozumdar had on her from today all this because of her bondhu.

Asmita felt her heart break into pieces she felt love for the first time, she understood what love was for the first time and she lost it before she could understand how good this feeling was all this because Shantanu, her Shantanu wasn't able to handle his so called brother, she was totally broken and shocked she was unconscious how could everyone let that wedding happen when she was in that state, how could everyone let this thing happen and more than how could Shaantanu let that wedding take place ?? She was having a headache thinking about all this when suddenly interrupting her though someone knock at her door..

? : Asmitha ji are you awake ??

Asmitha remind of that voice it was non other than Riddoy. She wanted to ignore him at first but then it sound wrong to get so she answered : ji.

Riddoy entered the room with a bright smile :

R : smiling Asmitha ji aap theek ho na ?
He tried to hold her hand, Asmita was trying to remove it but he hold it forcefully making her feel uncomfortable she nodded.

R : relieved Asmitha ji aap nahin janti me kitna khush houn yeh dekh kar ke aap theek ho. Aap janti hai sab apka intezaar kar rahe hai nashte of table peh fir sham ko Dada ki shaadi hai Paromita bhabi ke saath.

Asmita was shocked hearing this..Shantanu was still ready to marry Paromita after all this.

R : soft voice Asmita ji (holding her by her arms)
A : uncomfortable Riddoy please aap jaye me teyar hoke ati houn.
R : Asmita ji aap please awkward feel mat kijiye ab hum pati patni hai humein koi alag nahin karsakta.
A : uncomfortable Riddoy aap..
R : Me janta houn hamari shaadi jaise huyi apko thora ajeeb lagta hai lekin Asmitha ji me kia karta kal shaadi nahin hoti to 3 saal intezaar karna parta aur frankly mein itna intezaar nahin karsakta tha..

Asmitha felt tears coming in her eyes, every word about her so called wedding was hurting her more and reminding her that she was no more Shantanu's Pucchki.

R : happy Sach kahoun to agar Dada nahin hote to hamari shaadi nahin hoti, ek Dada hi hai jo mujhe samajte hai..

Asmita felt the anger slowly growing inside her and reaching her head..How could he how could he do this to her.

A : trying to stay calm Ridoy aap jaye me ati houn.
R : smiling Nahin aaj ke baad me apko chorkar kahi nahin jayounga.
A : loosing patience Riddoy please aap jaye
R : Asmita ji me aap se
A : interrupting him and angrily Apko ek baat samaj mein nahin ati ?!! I said leave !!!

Riddoy was surprised by Asmita's sudden anger, he wanted to say something and tried but Asmita simply pushed him out of the room closing the door, her back on the door closing her eyes and praying all this to turn out being a nightmare she will awake from in a second, but Riddoy's words behind the door make her understand how wrong she was :

R : with his psycho voice Theek hai Asmitha ji aap tension mat lijiye me niche apka intezaar karta houn..I love you Asmita ji..

Asmita start to cry she couldn't bear it anymore how her life turn so wrong, how things went that far. She tried to gather herself and she started getting ready after all how long will she stay hidden when suddenly the door open and close very fast, someone just came in she thought that Riddoy was back again but her heartbeat get faster giving her the sign that Shantanu was near her.

S : slowly Pucchki...

Asmita turned back look at him shocked...after all he did he was standing there in front of her, the one who changed her life in one night without her permission without asking her without any care for her.. He.. her bondhu..the only one responsible of this mess...her Shantanu..She turned back, all the anger grow up in her head and she walked fast toward him and holding his collar she said :

A : angrily Khud ko samajte Kia ho tum ?
Meri zindagi ka itna bara faisla leliya aur mujhse poochna bhi zaroori nahin samjha tumne ?
S : replied sadly Riddoy se shaadi tumhara faisla tha Pucchki !
A : even more angry How dare you ??!

Before she could hold control anymore she slapped Shantanu leaving him mouth open in shock of what just happened.

Edited by Semeira - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago
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i really hate that bloody palki for such a disgusting cheep wedding track😡
i hate shamita's characters even more for being brainless😡
anyway i don't care whatever happen this this bloody show as i stop watching👎🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you so much for this...After watching today's episode..I wanted so badly to slap shantanu... He needs it big time.. 😡
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: riti4u

Thank you so much for this...After watching today's episode..I wanted so badly to slap shantanu... He needs it big time.. 😡


To be honest I so badly wanted him to get slap that I though OS ke zariye thapad khila deti houn 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Your OS is awesome...You write very well 👍🏼 I appreciate your work 👏 And ya shaan deserve slap...he need it 😡
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Good one 👏, this is the reality for Asmita now. Ridoy has Haq over her & it was her decision to go for it in the 1st place so it can't even be termed as a forced shaadi.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: A_bhi_23

Your OS is awesome...You write very well 👍🏼 I appreciate your work 👏 And ya shaan deserve slap...he need it 😡


Thank you soon much appreciated 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: tranquilmelody

Good one 👏, this is the reality for Asmita now. Ridoy has Haq over her & it was her decision to go for it in the 1st place so it can't even be termed as a forced shaadi.


Yeah in anger against Shantanu decision of holding Asmita in his arms to make the shaadi with Riddoy happened we forgot that Riddoy se shaadi was Pucchki's decision first
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Posted: 6 years ago
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great one!!!
someone please write romantic os on them... we are anyways not getting romantic scenes in the show!!! os se hi kam chala lenge...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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IKR, we had so many dreams too but now there is no dream, no romance, only rivers of tears from the ML. Pls write a romantic os.

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