Kunal OS Ft. Kuhu – Tum Hi Ana

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Kunal OS Ft. Kuhu - Tum Hi Aana


Kuhu had walked away from him without batting any eyelid, without turning back to have another look at him. In her words, “Agar tumhe mud kar dekhungi toh jaa nahi paungi” She had simply left. Kunal could not stop her,because this was her condition if she was to go through with this, she would never stay back. He had agreed, he owed it to the Rajvanshis, to Meenakshi Rajvansh, to Abir. Kunal had forced Kuhu to agree for surrogacy – he wanted to do anything possible to make Meenakshi and Abir stay calmly under one roof. If Surrogacy was the way, he would go through the process. Kunal Rajvansh always put his family up there and everything was below his family in his list of priorities.

Tere Jaane Ka Gam

Aur Na Aane Ka Gam

Phir Zamaane Ka Gam

Kya Karein?

(Kuhu sat in the cab sobbing uncontrollably as the cab drove off. She could see Kunal standing there waiting for her to come back to him.She loved this man with everything but going back to that house would mean allowing herself to be emotionally manipulated and be a pawn to Meenu’s schemes. She was simply tired of it.)

Raah Dekhe Nazar

Raat Bhar Jaag Kar

Par Teri To Khabar Na Mile

Bahot Aayi Gayi Yaadein

Magar Iss Baar Tum Hi Aana

Iraade Fir Se Jaane Ke Nahi Laana

Tum Hi Aana

(Kunal walked into the house watching Ketu play with the little boy. Mishti and Abir had gone to the NGO. Nidhi Mami and Koslu Mama were in the kitchen getting the food ready for the baby. Parul Maa was with Meenakshi Rajvansh as she was supposed to be. He sat looking at the door waiting for Kuhu to comeback. He just could hear Kuhu yelling out to him from the kitchen asking him for his preferences for lunch. He could not bring himself to see anything apart from Kuhu – the flower decoration in the living room reminded him of her, the food menu put up in the kitchen, the fancy drapes in their room. The colors in his life were gone with her just like that.)

Meri Dehleez se Hokar

Bahaarein Jab Guzarti Hai

Yahaan Kya Dhoop Kya Saawan

Hawaayein Bhi Barasti Hai

Hume Poochho Kya Hota Hai

Bina Dil Ke Jiye Jaana

Bohut Aayi Gayi Yaadein

Magar Iss Baar Tum Hi Aana

(A few days later, Kunal found the papers where Meenakshi Rajvansh had signed stating Kunal and Abir were both the legal heirs to the property after Meenakshi Rajvansh’s lifetime. He was confused finding these papers, just then he found another pen drive in the file – it was a video footage of his moth..., Meenakshi Rajvansh blackmailing Kuhu that she would disown Kunal publicly and kick him out of the company. Kuhu stood petrified as Meenakshi Rajvansh thrust the legal paperwork in her hand. Kunal remembered the time how petrified Kuhu was to see him return from the office with legal papers in hand. He hated the guts of the woman who called herself a mother. She had put Kuhu through hell to get her so called Waaris. He had not seen through Meenakshi Rajvanshs’ true colors and Kunal would never forgive himself for that.)

Koyi Toh Raah Who Hogi

Jo Mere Ghar Ko Aati Hai

Karo Peechcha Sada Unka

Suno Kya Kehna Chaahti Hei

Tum Aaoge Mujhe Milne

(Kunal grew quieter at the dinner table. Abir was beginning to see something was wrong. Kuhu was gone for 3 months now. She was supposed to be gone for a month for her event management work. Mishti was beginning to worry as Kunal was not his former self and Kuhu was not very active on social media. Kunal was curled into an unbreakable shell. Mami and Mama had given up trying to find out what was wrong with Kunal? Meenakshi was worried as Kunal never responded to her. He spoke to Parul, Abir and Mishti. Kunal would just speak to the imaginary Kuhu in his head as he went about his day. Whenever possible, he would play quietly with Mihir if the little child was awake. His curls reminded him of Kuhu.)

Khabar Ye Bhi Tum Hi Laana

Bohut Aayi Gayi Yaadein

Magar Iss Baar Tum Hi Ana

(His work at the company was done. He had signed over everything to Abir and packed his bags to leave handing over a letter explaining everything to Abir and Mishti. He was going out in search of his Kuhu, far away from this house – he was only Kunal. He had repaid everything to the WOMAN. He was now just Kunal free from every debt he had earned through this life. He picked up his bags and left without looking back. Because this time, he was going to build a life for himself and Kuhu. He was going to win her back. )


PS. Constructive criticism is welcome. I wanted to write something on KuhuNal/Kunal & Kuhu. So here is a small take. Not Proofread.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Amazing Concept !!!!!! Please update

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Forgive me for imagining Kunal 1.0 and considering this story canon in my head. Another alternative ending to Kuhu-Kunal's story!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: riya1605

Amazing Concept !!!!!! Please update

Hi Riya,


Thank you, This is just a stand - alone scenario I had in mind for Kunal to work towards KuhuNal. I will not be updating this any further. However, I do plan to write more on KuhuNal to fulfil my wishes I had for the couple as I don't trust the makers to do them justice.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: aquaHP

Forgive me for imagining Kunal 1.0 and considering this story canon in my head. Another alternative ending to Kuhu-Kunal's story!


Hi Aqua,


Thank you ! I am glad you are able to enjoy my work keeping Kunal 1.0 in mind. As far as I am concerned, I want Kuhu-Kunal fans to grow and introduce the new members to this jodi. So I want to continue writing more on them. For me, the KuKu and KuhuNal fans mean a lot to me and they are the fruits of the same tree. So I am glad you are able to enjoy!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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@piyali: thanks for writing this OS, I loved it❤️ keep writing dear🤗

I wish we could get something similar in the show too

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: peacenfun

@piyali: thanks for writing this OS, I loved it❤️ keep writing dear🤗

I wish we could get something similar in the show too


Thank you, I will try to come up with something else for KuhuNal. I want to fulfill all my wishes for the couple which we might not get to see on the show.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow very beautifully written! Kunal finally repaid everything to that woman and now he's only Kunal in search for Kuhu.. so satisfying..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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@Nami: Thank you! I am glad to see some support Kuhu and Kunal.

@Mahira: Thank you.

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