Kaun tujhe yun pyar kare - MishBir OS (FINAL Part 3 updated. Pg 3) - Page 5

Originally posted by: socioboss9797

Oh My God... just finished reading all the parts. .. and I must say you have done a good job writing the ending.... the highlight for me was Mishti taking control of the situation! I really don't like it when only FLs are shy and nervous when the ML comes closer to them. I love how you gave both of them their dominating moments along with nervous ones. Abir feeling the racey heart beats was so good to read. Good to see that. Btw, baaki ka mast likha hai... no meenu or kuku... good job there! Aur haldi wlaa part was awesome... all in all good!

Akuuuu....Thanks🤗🤗...

I too loved writing that part where MISHTI takes control... But i had to Induce the right dose..else it would look out of character for Mishti....

Once she became a bit comfortable..she took control😳..I too liked writing it....

Also nanus part....

Hope in actual show too..Miahti takes control some times..

Thanks again yaara