Abhi mujhme kahin ~ Part 7 Updated (11.06.2024) - Page 3

Originally posted by: whimsical

I love, love, love this!

Reading both parts in one sitting was such a roller coaster ride. The vivid portrayal of Abhira's pain, her loneliness, her uncertainty, her misplaced guilt and sense of indebtedness, and her overall interaction with her parents was truly heartbreaking, and the revelation of her silent battle with self-harm, horrifying! I found myself wholeheartedly rooting and cheering for the dynamic, delicious duo of Manisha and Madhav (simply adore them to bits, in the show and even more in your story), and the resolution provided a much-needed respite. Your meticulously crafted dialogues left me thoroughly satisfied, each one carefully chosen to perfection, to put Vidya, Armaan and Ruhi in their rightful place.

If I had to summarize the whole plethora of feelings this evoked, it would be the ultimate "kaleje mein thandak." Bravo!

How I hope that this story somehow reaches the makers of the show... If they team up Manisha and Madhav somehow, one might just forgive them for some of the nonsense that has been dished out lately.

And the best thing about this story is that there are more parts to come Absolutely can't wait. And yes, even though you can't tag me yet, you can let me know by any means possible - comment on another thread, PM, pigeon, whatever Looking forward to your next!

Thank you so much for reading. Your comments are so encouraging to read. I have updated part 3, looking forward to your feedback 🌻

This was indeed heartwrenching to read.. (Thanks for the warning)...

And yet so many brilliant insights into Abhira's psyche and the human psyche in general. For example, the fact that someone could be going through depression right before your eyes, but you wouldn't know unless you truly look. Or the shame that Abhira feels, that a person as strong as her succumbed to self-harm, associating it with weakness, when in fact, it's just that there was too much pain being meted at her, and not an ounce of support whatsoever, and in that moment of darkness, your mind desperately tries to find some semblance of comfort through whatever means possible, no matter how transient.

I also really liked reading about how Armaan is processing all this, his fears, his retrospection and introspection. I love that he has the depth to recognize his savior complex and his unhealthy obsession with Dadisa.

But the best, best, best part is Manisha! She's my hero! I love her so much in your story. I love how protective and supportive she is of Abhira, in the most non-judgmental, motherly way possible. And I love how her solution for Abhira is to get out of that madhouse, because she knows the other members far too well. Her feelings for Armaan mirror mine - I feel for him, but at the same time, his remorse does not absolve him.

Please, please, pretty please make this a loooong fanfic! This might be my favorite work of yours, alongside your Rihaan pieces. My greedy self would love a crossover so that Rihaan appears here too.. hehe.. but it's your story, you tell it the way you intended to. Keep writing!

Originally posted by: whimsical

This was indeed heartwrenching to read.. (Thanks for the warning)...

And yet so many brilliant insights into Abhira's psyche and the human psyche in general. For example, the fact that someone could be going through depression right before your eyes, but you wouldn't know unless you truly look. Or the shame that Abhira feels, that a person as strong as her succumbed to self-harm, associating it with weakness, when in fact, it's just that there was too much pain being meted at her, and not an ounce of support whatsoever, and in that moment of darkness, your mind desperately tries to find some semblance of comfort through whatever means possible, no matter how transient.

I also really liked reading about how Armaan is processing all this, his fears, his retrospection and introspection. I love that he has the depth to recognize his savior complex and his unhealthy obsession with Dadisa.

But the best, best, best part is Manisha! She's my hero! I love her so much in your story. I love how protective and supportive she is of Abhira, in the most non-judgmental, motherly way possible. And I love how her solution for Abhira is to get out of that madhouse, because she knows the other members far too well. Her feelings for Armaan mirror mine - I feel for him, but at the same time, his remorse does not absolve him.

Please, please, pretty please make this a loooong fanfic! This might be my favorite work of yours, alongside your Rihaan pieces. My greedy self would love a crossover so that Rihaan appears here too.. hehe.. but it's your story, you tell it the way you intended to. Keep writing!

Did I mention it before, I absolutely loveee reading your comments? Motivates me a lot as a writer, especially because I have so much admiration for your work. This was initially supposed to be the OS because I just really wanted Abhira to understand she owes them absolutely nothing, then eventually it turned into a TS because I realised I could probably delve into something deeper with this. The reason I wrote Manisha the way I did is because Abhira's reality in the show is so disturbing to watch, I had only wished she would get someone, and if there's anybody in the family who holds that geniune potential to look at Abhira as a person and maybe value her as an individual irrespective of her relationship with others, it's Manisha and maybe Krish (I would find a role for him soon in this). I do plan to continue this, it might become a short story maybe, 10 chapters perhaps, because now I think I have a direction to work on and I already do have plans to introduce Rihaan here, however at a later stage. Abhira deserves to have someone who would keep her above all. So yeah, there's definitely more coming but I have some academic commitments to attend to, so it might take some time here on.

Thank you so much for reading 🌻

P.s I got promoted today on India forums, I can tag people now, yeayyyy!!

I'm in tears.

I am really glad she has Manisha with her who has some semblance of decency.

read the remaining chapters, so wonderful written.

I am shocked the raw emotions. Loving Manisha

please tag me

Beautiful update

I had tears in my eyes

So much is going in Abhira mind and heart good chachi is there to support her

Please update soon next part

Totally loved it

Manisha is so supportive of Abhira

I wonder when will karma hit Armaan, Ruhi , Dadi sa and other Poddar’s who hate Abhira

Please update soon

Nice update

Please update