why do these makers who write beautiful lines and breakdowns for Abhira fail at writing Armaan well?! its literally opposite ends of the spectrum- one is trash writing , one is stellar.
I was expecting Abhira breakdown and they delivered it beautifully. she said literally everything I expected her to. She recalled the harsh words, the humiliation and the realization that the man she started to dream of forever with and fell in love with doesnt even have basic trust in her. he doesnt even give her the acknowledgment of an actual person- she is just a bojh . the pain of realizing that after 9 months he doesnt even care to listen to her or trust her is so much. she is so hurt. she had such fondness for their tuta phuta, convoluted dynamic vaala rishta which brought her to a place where she had blind trust in him and saw him as her only friend and confidant, her only apna in the whole world but she often tried to deny because it scared her to realize her dependance on him and feared that he may not reciprocate. and her worst fears were realized. her worst fear was not that he wouldnt love her back but that he didnt see her as having any importance in his life- she was just a punishment imposed on him that he needed to tolerate. and thats exactly what he said. he told whole family she is nothing but a thopi hui zimmedari that he feels stifled and suffocated by.
When she picked up the phone finally, Sam emotes it beautifully as Abhira there- she picked up with hope that Armaan was actually concerned for her and thats why he was nonstop calling but that hope died as soon as she hears him berate her- so the phone call wasnt to check on her but to yell at her.
Abhira's feelings are so beautifully potrayed
But Armaan has no fondness, no recollection of Abhira's good deeds, her support, her vibrant joyful presence, her jugaad, he doesnt even question himself in a monologue whether Abhira was genuinely not lying and had nothing to do with Charu issue and if he should have atleast heard her out before yelling. nothing genuine about him. its all a sham. he looks fully egotistical not protective. All I hear when I see him talk is "I am calling you to bother you because how dare you disobey me, hang up on me, block me. how dare you have feelings of your own. how dare you have something called self respect . how can you not bow down to the diktats of my house, how dare you have an opinion and how dare you voice it, how can you not be falling at my feet in gratitude for the ehsaan of giving an orphan like you roti, kapda and makaan, how can you not be happy with enjoying the 1-2 tukde of affection that come your way from family once in a blue moon in between all the taunts and insults, how can you not be hailing how mahaan I am to support you"
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