Apaka beta...(out of MyThought's imagination)

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Posted: 2 years ago
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It is time for Abhir to move to Birla house. AbhiN was proved incapable of raising a kid as a father in the court. AbhiN convinced AK to move to Birla house for Abhir's sake. Even though, they don't talk explicitly, AbhiN knows he will not be meeting AK again as she has found the real father of Abhir.

Abhir, with one hand held by AbhiN, one by his mamma is standing at the doorstep of Birla house. Birla house is decorated as never before for Abhir's welcome.Abhir is just captivated by it all. The Birla family is staring at AbhiN and just conveying that he is not welcome inside. AbhiM is too engrossed in Abhir to even notice any of it. He comes to Abhir, his eyes fixed on Abhir's hand, not even aware of the presence of AbhiN. AbhiN lets go of Abhir's hand. AbhiM holds it tight. Abhir does not notice the change of hands.AbhiN lightly says to AbhiM, ' Apaka beta' AbhiM does not hear that.

Now, everyone's eyes are on Abhir, nobody notices AbhiN. He has become 'Mr. India' he referred himself to once. He waits for a moment with a neutral face and then turns, clenching his heart with his hand. He walks a distance, finds dark, deserted spot and gives out a loud cry but the pain is so much that voice refuses to come out. Tears gorging down his eyes. He gets a flashback. Carrying AK to the hospital, holding Abhir for the first time, then giving him kangaroo care for straight 72 hours. AK wakes up. He gives the baby to her and says, ' Apaka beta.. Sirf Apaka beta..' He realizes, Abhir was never his. AbhiN wipes his tears out and starts walking on the street.

It is dinner time. People are eating at the roadside stalls. One poor kind is standing there, staring at the food displayed on the stall. AbhiN looks at him and asks him with gesture if wants the food. The kid nods yes. AbhiN buys food for him. Kid is still staring at AbhiN. AbhiN knows, the kid wants more. He buys another and asks without words, if that would be enough, the kid shows a superwide smile on his face. AbhiN hands over the food to the kid and caresses his head.

A lady, in her middle age, with calm demeanor watches it all. Gets out of her simple car and approaches AbhiN. She asks, 'Kya aap mere liye kam karoge?' AbhiN says, ' Mei toh ek simple driver hun ji.. Mei kya kar sakata hun?'. The lady says, 'You are capable of doing what nobody is'

Abhir is seating in the backseat of his RWPs lavish car busy playing the videogame that his docman has gifeted him. The car stops at the signal. From the window one can see a garden of an orphanage, 'The heaven's home'. An angel has got added to the heaven. AbhiN is playing with kids. All kids adore him. He has so much love in his heart that every kid feels he is their own.

A grafetti on the orphanage wall says, 'If you loose something, remember something great is waiting for you.'

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: MyThoughts

It is time for Abhir to move to Birla house. AbhiN was proved incapable of raising a kid as a father in the court. AbhiN convinced AK to move to Birla house for Abhir's sake. Even though, they don't talk explicitly, AbhiN knows he will not be meeting AK again as she has found the real father of Abhir.

Abhir, with one hand held by AbhiN, one by his mamma is standing at the doorstep of Birla house. Birla house is decorated as never before for Abhir's welcome.Abhir is just captivated by it all. The Birla family is staring at AbhiN and just conveying that he is not welcome inside. AbhiM is too engrossed in Abhir to even notice any of it. He comes to Abhir, his eyes fixed on Abhir's hand, not even aware of the presence of AbhiN. AbhiN lets go of Abhir's hand. AbhiM holds it tight. Abhir does not notice the change of hands.AbhiN lightly says to AbhiM, ' Apaka beta' AbhiM does not hear that.

Now, everyone's eyes are on Abhir, nobody notices AbhiN. He has become 'Mr. India' he referred himself to once. He waits for a moment with a neutral face and then turns, clenching his heart with his hand. He walks a distance, finds dark, deserted spot and gives out a loud cry but the pain is so much that voice refuses to come out. Tears gorging down his eyes. He gets a flashback. Carrying AK to the hospital, holding Abhir for the first time, then giving him kangaroo care for straight 72 hours. AK wakes up. He gives the baby to her and says, ' Apaka beta.. Sirf Apaka beta..' He realizes, Abhir was never his. AbhiN wipes his tears out and starts walking on the street.

It is dinner time. People are eating at the roadside stalls. One poor kind is standing there, staring at the food displayed on the stall. AbhiN looks at him and asks him with gesture if wants the food. The kid nods yes. AbhiN buys food for him. Kid is still staring at AbhiN. AbhiN knows, the kid wants more. He buys another and asks without words, if that would be enough, the kid shows a superwide smile on his face. AbhiN hands over the food to the kid and caresses his head.

A lady, in her middle age, with calm demeanor watches it all. Gets out of her simple car and approaches AbhiN. She asks, 'Kya aap mere liye kam karoge?' AbhiN says, ' Mei toh ek simple driver hun ji.. Mei kya kar sakata hun?'. The lady says, 'You are capable of doing what nobody is'

Abhir is seating in the backseat of his RWPs lavish car busy playing the videogame that his docman has gifeted him. The car stops at the signal. From the window one can see a garden of an orphanage, 'The heaven's home'. An angel has got added to the heaven. AbhiN is playing with kids. All kids adore him. He has so much love in his heart that every kid feels he is their own.

A grafetti on the orphanage wall says, 'If you loose something, remember something great is waiting for you.'


I love this.. This is so beautiful.


Actually I feel.. This is what we'll see in the serial.. AbhiN just leaves maybe. But we can hope that he will be happy afterwards.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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I donno whether Abhinav will be papa for Abhir or not but all these theories making me feel emotional and bad for Nav

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sushma_Reddy

I donno whether Abhinav will be papa for Abhir or not but all these theories making me feel emotional and bad for Nav

I will not feel bad for him if he outgrows Abhir and AK. He is a pure soul. He is just not worth dying for selfish, materialist people and felt sorry for. He should become someone to be proud of. If denied the custody and abadoned by AK which can be a possibility, he should set himself free. He can make the world much more beautiful place... ❤️❤️❤️

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