Mistakes the creative team and writers did and are doing.....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I want to sight out the mistakes the creative team and writers did till date in YRKKH S3. According to me here are a few mistakes they did


1. the first tilak fiasco, when things and confusion could have been sought out and understood by talking calmly, everyone screamed their heads out

2. the mask festival too rushed, writers should have given some meaningful scenes to develop the love story rather than rushing it

3. the family that doesnt talk... both birlas and goenkas dont talk with their kids and communicate properly

4. the rushed wedding track

5. the exposure track and confessions should not have been clubbed ( it left a very bad taste)

6. the cheesy dreams the couples have.....almost too cheezy for real life

7. proper character development


please point out if there are more to the list, with a hit couple like abhira and with a team of great actors the TRPs are just low because the story development hasnt been up to the mark

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hmm, interesting take. Then you wouldn't be watching the show that you are now!😊

What you call mistakes, was all done deliberately, after much thinking, planning and redrafting. Because this is how the writers wanted to develop this story, the characters and individusl plots.

I for one am glad as I'm enjoying the overall concept. But yes, there are silly things happening but I suppose it's understandable because tv stories need to go on, on and on 😆 so cannot resolve silly things quickly. It's frustrating but I look at it this way that I have to take the bad with the good.

There has been issue with writers and that definitely shows in places. I hope it is only onwards now. Cheesy dreams, yep agree there with you. It's not needed but it's staying true to what DKP is about!😆

Is there nothing you liked about any of the tracks? If you had to pick, what did you like/enjoy the most?😊

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Originally posted by: Dreamygal301

Hmm, interesting take. Then you wouldn't be watching the show that you are now!😊

What you call mistakes, was all done deliberately, after much thinking, planning and redrafting. Because this is how the writers wanted to develop this story, the characters and individusl plots.

I for one am glad as I'm enjoying the overall concept. But yes, there are silly things happening but I suppose it's understandable because tv stories need to go on, on and on 😆 so cannot resolve silly things quickly. It's frustrating but I look at it this way that I have to take the bad with the good.

There has been issue with writers and that definitely shows in places. I hope it is only onwards now. Cheesy dreams, yep agree there with you. It's not needed but it's staying true to what DKP is about!😆

Is there nothing you liked about any of the tracks? If you had to pick, what did you like/enjoy the most?😊

Those are my points of displeasure towards the serial, I dont want them to drag anything but they did drag the aarohi exposure track, I expect Abhira should have a good mature love story track which they deserve also the pace should be slightly slow if now like a bullet train

I want them to develop akshara properly abhi should make her more confident and strong

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I want to ask when the creatives are not in a mood to listen to anyone why did Rajan Shahi agree to adapt IN.

Ichche Nodee cannot fit into any generation of Yrkkh. Why ? because the first generation laid the foundation of family values, principles etc. The entire show is a 12 year dance and song festival.

Considering the above on what basis the casting was done ? Is everything right in the first place. I have my doubts.

This particular cast was exclusively hired for the the Leena Gangopadhyay remake. The central theme is about 2 sisters falling in love same man with or two sisters on the opposite side of the fence.

The OG showcases toxic doormat relationships, unhealthy obsession, physcotic mindsets.

3 characters in the arena ie Anurag, Meghla and Adrija.

Similarly S3 should be about Akshara Abhimanyu and Aarohi

When DKP was planning and plotting since 2021 why are the creatives trying to push in dreams instead of conversations, reversing ckt traits, importing dance numbers from the south, giving too much relevance to Shiv Parvati.

The creatives are either lazy or are downright nutcases to try certain tracks which won't work on the trp aunts.

Post rejection, the writer's biggest folly is safe guarding Aarohi's character.

2nd mistake is changing Abhimanyu's core traits. Afte totally submitting himself to Akshara, he shifted his entire attention to Aneesha.

Harshad being Harshad transited from a whipped lover to a concerned brother within few episodes.

The show lost its sheen when their audiences felt the characters are doing time pass.

After the entire fiasco, the Goenkas did not have a family meeting in front of the girls.

What we got is guddu gudda pep talk between a matured doc and a intelligent, sensible music therapist.

A forced Valentine's days celebration from doctor Saheb's side which looked so cliche.

The heart attack track also kind of looked superficial. Abhimanyu knew about BP's health and went right into the Lion's Den to creak ruckus.

The entire Feb became a dragfest..

I hope the next 200 episodes have substance to retain their current viewership.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dreamygal301

Hmm, interesting take. Then you wouldn't be watching the show that you are now!😊

What you call mistakes, was all done deliberately, after much thinking, planning and redrafting. Because this is how the writers wanted to develop this story, the characters and individusl plots.

I for one am glad as I'm enjoying the overall concept. But yes, there are silly things happening but I suppose it's understandable because tv stories need to go on, on and on 😆 so cannot resolve silly things quickly. It's frustrating but I look at it this way that I have to take the bad with the good.

There has been issue with writers and that definitely shows in places. I hope it is only onwards now. Cheesy dreams, yep agree there with you. It's not needed but it's staying true to what DKP is about!😆

Is there nothing you liked about any of the tracks? If you had to pick, what did you like/enjoy the most?😊

your analysis is good. They purposely kept confusion from start and woven the plot that way. Manjaris confusion led the story till Ar marriage and is broken with proof in Abhis hand. Manjari moved the story ahead that way. It's all well planned but difficult to execute to reach us..
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Originally posted by: Salutethearmy

I want to ask when the creatives are not in a mood to listen to anyone why did Rajan Shahi agree to adapt IN.

Ichche Nodee cannot fit into any generation of Yrkkh. Why ? because the first generation laid the foundation of family values, principles etc. The entire show is a 12 year dance and song festival.

Considering the above on what basis the casting was done ? Is everything right in the first place. I have my doubts.

This particular cast was exclusively hired for the the Leena Gangopadhyay remake. The central theme is about 2 sisters falling in love same man with or two sisters on the opposite side of the fence.

The OG showcases toxic doormat relationships, unhealthy obsession, physcotic mindsets.

3 characters in the arena ie Anurag, Meghla and Adrija.

Similarly S3 should be about Akshara Abhimanyu and Aarohi

When DKP was planning and plotting since 2021 why are the creatives trying to push in dreams instead of conversations, reversing ckt traits, importing dance numbers from the south, giving too much relevance to Shiv Parvati.

The creatives are either lazy or are downright nutcases to try certain tracks which won't work on the trp aunts.

Post rejection, the writer's biggest folly is safe guarding Aarohi's character.

2nd mistake is changing Abhimanyu's core traits. Afte totally submitting himself to Akshara, he shifted his entire attention to Aneesha.

Harshad being Harshad transited from a whipped lover to a concerned brother within few episodes.

The show lost its sheen when their audiences felt the characters are doing time pass.

After the entire fiasco, the Goenkas did not have a family meeting in front of the girls.

What we got is guddu gudda pep talk between a matured doc and a intelligent, sensible music therapist.

A forced Valentine's days celebration from doctor Saheb's side which looked so cliche.

The heart attack track also kind of looked superficial. Abhimanyu knew about BP's health and went right into the Lion's Den to creak ruckus.

The entire Feb became a dragfest..

I hope the next 200 episodes have substance to retain their current viewership.

Absolutely true. After the angst track between akshara and abhimanyu in aarohi's wedding where they served amazing angst and had amazing dream sequences, i expected when they reunite it will be magical but it became so superficial that i feel their dream sequences were so much better.. his too much involvement in aneesha's matter looked as if he is ignoring akshara whereas he should have been happy to finally get akshara and spend time with her. Kairav aneesha's forced love story and zero chemistry. If they wanted to build a side love story, they could have very well done that as naksh and keerti in season 2 had good chemistry but they opted to show a psychotic girl and an expressionless kairav's online dating thing...they could have instead focused on neirohi, it would be the perfect plot now as aarohi needed emotional support after her wedding broke off- so neirohi could have come closer., they could have actually showed them going to sahranpur camp and aarohi there with neil's help moving on from this fiasco. Abhimanyu's overprotective boyfriend behaviour made him look like he is pep talking a baby, instead they could maintain the dream sequence chemistry, nok jhok and the initial trip episode's chemistry where akshara was a bit shy and abhimanyu flirting. Or the chemistry could have been like the ladder scene i really liked it... Abhimanyu creating ruckus outside goenkas and bp landing into a hearattack didn't potray a nice image of him.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Rajan Shahi is producer of show and DKP is director kut productions.his production house name. He produced many serial in this banner of DKP
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Director Kut production

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you Meher and Apra for the abbreviation of DKP


There are few points where I felt disconnected -

1) When Goenkas and Birlas took Akshu's accident casually...was indigestible for me

2) Confession scene was all planned good script wise but I felt Pranali failed to execute properly. Her intensity was lacking in those scenes compare to Harshad. Pranali gave facial expression which seemed superficial to me and she had no tears. Of course our famous Red dress ruin it more.

3) Temple scenes were perfect but again they white washed Aarohi suddenly and later gave one sentence here and there to make viewers suspicious for her

4) They showed both sisters going to Birla Hospital after marriage fiasco...that was BLUNDER

5) Then they served us - teenage love scenes between the leads..may be pranali looked fine because of her age and innocent look but they were not proper for actor like Harshad

After this, I am still looking for a day where story will jump properly where it started from. Honestly, I enjoy initial 60-70 episodes, especially udaipur episodes everyday and any day than last 25 episodes or so...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Why RS producing even the show when budget is tight???

They know such shows run longer..then why going round and round for the budget??

Mera ek hi expectation hai -

Even you give 200 episodes...give it properly...don't stretch it if you have budget issues...later after 6 months you come back with another season..

RS wants to failao Raita everywhere...

After almost 10 years i am engaged in TV serial..there also story problems and budget issues have started..My last TV serial was IPKKND.

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