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Team Abhimanyu (Gen 3)

Posted: 3 years ago
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Abhi has successfully completed akshu's surgery.. he only how difficult was it to operate the person whom he loved so much.. he looks at akshu.. akshu is currently on ventillator to ensure that she has enough oxygen. Her entire body has scratch marks.. abhi feels really bad for the way he behaved with her.

Abhi: tum janthi ho na ye kithna mushkil tha mere liye.. phir bhi.. ye sab kyun karthi ho akshu.. bhagwan shukr hai ki tum theek ho.. agar tumhe kuch ho jatha toh main kaise jeetha.

Suddenly he hears some one making noise outside..

He goes outside and sees some man dressed in formals entering into hospital

Goenkas seems shocked by looking at him.. suddenly harsh sees him from his cabin... its not hard for him to recognize who he is..

Harsh: naksh singhania.. birla hospital ke sabse bade trustee..yahan... kuch issue toh nahi hua..dekhna padega he goes out and sees naksh asking something with receptionist.

And it looks like he got know the infromation as well..

Harsh tries to greet.. naksh ignores him totally.

He starts moving towards icu ward. And sees no one waiting for her..

He tries to barge in but abhi stops him..

Abhi: rukiya.. ye icu hai.. garden nahi hai jo aap aise..

Naksh stares abhi..

Harsh interrupts..

Harsh: aap yahan kuch kaam tha.. mujhe bol dethe.

Naksh: mujhe akshara goenka se milna hai..

Abhi: lekin aap hai kaun.

Naksh: mujhe ye batana main zaroori nahi samjtha kya main usse..

Harsh: ji bilkul..

Abhi: lekin woh..

Harsh:dr abhimanyu please jayiye.

Abhi:nahin.. mujhe nahi patha aap kaun hai.. lekin akshu( he corrects it but naksh notices it anyways) ... i mean akshara goenka bahuth hi critical hai.. if you don't mind kya main aapke sath..

Naksh : nods.

Abhi takes him inside..

As soon as abhi opens the door he sees naksh's face. The man who looks so strong that moment made him so week that a tear falls from his eyes..

He silently goes and sits beside her..

Abhi: abhi thak hosh nahi aya hai...

Naksh nods still hiding his tears..

Naksh: kab thak hosh ayega?

Abhi: aaj shaam ko aasaktha..

Naksh: kya main isse ghar leke ?

Abhi cant let akshu go as she needs his care .

Abhi: shayad nahi.. isse hospital ki aur senior doctor ki zaroorath hai..

Naksh: kya tum iske sath chal sakthe ho?

Before abhi could say anything..

Harsh: kyun nahi zaroor chal saktha hai..

Abhi: lekin aap hai kaun maine toh aapko kabhi nahi dekha.

Naksh: main akshu ka mama hun...

Harsh: kya.. iska mathlab akshu akshara singhania jo maheshwari khandan ki beti hai unki nathin hai?

Naksh nods..

Harsh is happy as arohi would be his bahu..

Suddenly arohi comes inside the cabin to see if abhi has not gone to close too akshu..

She opens the door.. abhi fumes..

Abhi: dr arohi.. please jayiye yaha se.

Arohi still stands there as she saw naksh singhania..

Arohi goes and stands infront of him.

Harsh: arohi beta tumhara maama aya hai..

Naksh stares at harsh.

Abhi notices this. But he is not sure whats going on.

Arohi: aap yahan

Naksh: goenkas se bol dena ki main apni bacchi ko apne ghar leke ja raha hun.. anath nahi hai meri bacchi.. hum abhi bhi zinda hai.

Arohi: lekin mamu..

Naksh: maamu kehne ka haq tune uss din kho diya jiss din tune sirat ki maut ka ilzaam mere akshu pe daal diya tha. Ab main sirf tumara taaoo hun

Before she could defend..

Naksh : ye hospital hai mujhe aur tamasha nahi karna yaha. Please jao yaha se. Aur bol dena unn goenka se ki akshu ab mere sath rahegi. Keerthi bhi kush hogi karthik ki akshu ko dekh ke..

Arohi leaves angrily.. abhi is so confused as he no where realized that they were step sisters. Why did naksh said that arohi blamed akshu for sirat's death.. there are so many things which has no clarity in life and now there are some more.

Akshu wakes up from her sleep and sees naksh sleeping next to her and abhi is on the couch waiting for her to open..

Akshu looks at abhi and abhi looks at akshu.. abhi is so satisfied to see her.. his face lits up with happiness..before she could speak naksh wakes up..

Naksh: akshu...

Akshu: maamu.. aap yaha kaise.. still facing difficulty to speak..

Naksh: kaisi hai meri bacchi.. maine kaha tha na tujhe chal hamare sath. Kyun nahi chali..

Akshu: aisa kuch nahi hua mamu jaisa aap soch rahe..

Naksh: kya kuch nahi hua akshu.. dekh bahar jisse tu apna bol rahi hai koi waha yaha thak kairav bhi.. woh toh tera apna bhai hai na..

Akshu: aapko galath fehmi hui hogi mamu.. honge woh..

Abhi: sorry to interrupt lekin dr mahima ne unhe ghar jane ke liye kaha tha. Kyunki hum the yahan..

Akshu: dekha mamu..

Naksh: theek hai mantha hun.. doctor mahima ne unhe jane ke liye bol diya kya tu chali jathi. Jab tu dekthi ki koi tera apna aise hospital ke bed pe leta hua dekh ke..

Akshu has no answer to this question. Abhi too..

Naksh: nahi na.. chal mere sath main kuch nahi sununga..

Akshu agrees as she can convince him at singhania house..

The nurse makes her wear a beautiful dress which is comfortable enough to cover her wounds.

Naksh thanks abhi taking really good care of akshu.. abhi smiles.. as he has saved his life in reality.

Akshu looks at abhi as if its her final good bye..and she conveys her thank you in her eyes..

Abhi understood and smiles at her.

Naksh makes her sit inside his car on the backseat... abhi follows them.. abhi takes out his helmet..

Naksh: dr abhimanyu..

Abhi looks at him..

Naksh: aap hamare sath hi chaliye..

Abhi: nahi nahi.. its okay main manage karlunga..

Naksh wants her to stay as close as possible with the doctor. As he cant take any more risk of loosing her. What if she feels suffocated in the car.

Naksh: i insist.. mujhe akshu ki fikr hai please . Akshu ki tabiyath theek hone ke bad driver aapko ghar chod dega..

Abhi: lekin main waha kaise ruk saktha hun.. mere kapde bhi toh nahi hai waha..

Naksh: driver inke ghar jakar inka sara samaan le ayiyega . Aur mr birla se main bath karlunga..

Abhi nods. As he would love to be with akshu.

Akshu is not so sure what's happening outside.. she could barely listen..

Naksh gets him near backseat and ask him to sit beside akshu..

Akshu: lekin mamu..

Naksh: shhh...

Abhi sits inside.. abhi grinns...

Akshu: maamu dr abhimanyu kyun.. ?

Naksh: ye hamare sath rahenge teri tabiyath theek hone thak.

Akshu: par.

Naksh: par war kuch nahi.. chal.keerti aur krish tera intezar kar rahe hai.. maine unhe hospital ane se mana kiya tha kyunki woh teri aisi halath dekh ke toot kar bikar jayenge..

Akshu: theek hai.. still trying to think how to control her heart..

Abhi knows no matter how much they try they will come together one or the other way..

Akshu reaches house and sees keerthi and krish who are sitting on sofa waiting for akshu.. they looked as if they did not slept last night...

Abhi looks at the wall and sees the gallery of photos of kaira, naitik and akshara..

Akshu can feel the sense of belonging in that place and smile creeps up on her lips.. keerti runs and hugs her..

Keerti: akshu theek toh hai meri bacchi ..

Akshu: maami sambhaliye khudko.. main theek hun aapki akshu theek hai..

Aur krish tune aise kya halath banakar rakha hai tu koi tv serial ki heroine lag raha hai..

Krish wipes his tears and smiles and hugs her.. abhi is scares what if his hug damages akshu would he was about to stop

Akshu: arre aram se.. main mareez hun abhi bhi..

Krish : breaks the hug.. oh sorry... chalo.. he escorts her to the sofa..

Naksh asks abhi to feel comfortable..

Keerthi starts talking about how her life is going and all.. abhi sees a smile on her face he has never seen her so happy in his life. Even though she smiled in the past there was something missing.

They all have breakfast... they go to the sofa and keerthi makes akshu to sit... suddenly she hears some footsteps..

She looks at the door and sees entire goenka family...

Keerti: kairav, papa aur aap sab ..

Manish : akshu.. meri bacchi kaisi hai..

Naksh: ab thak toh zinda hai..

Manish: ye kaisi bath kar rahe ho naksh beta..

Naksh: aur kaise bath karun main.. mujhe kehna toh nahi chahiye par aapko akshu ki fikr hai nahi..

Akshu: maaamu...

Naksh: aaj math roko akshu beta.. aaj bolne do.. salon se ye manme rakh ke beta hun.. jiske wajah se mujhe uss ghar main pair bhi nahi rakhna..

Kairav: aisi kya bath hai mamu.. aisa kya hua jo aap humse naraz hai..

Naksh: kya hua.. dekh akshu ko.. tu jantha hai.. teri maa kaisi thi hai na..?

Kairav nods

Naksh: kya akshu main tujhe ek bhi gun naira ke dikh rahi hai..

Kairav : main kuch samjha nahi..

Naksh: samjhega kaise.. tum logone iss bacchi par julm hothe hue dekh kar bhi anjaan ban kar reh gaye.. iske wajah se jo naira ki parchayi banna chahiye tha.. jiske andar himmath aur sacch ka sath dena chahiyetha woh dekh kaisi hai ab.. ithni sehmi hui... kyun...

Kairav: woh mamu...

Naksh: jawab nahi hai ya jankar bhi anjan ban rahe ho tum log...

Nobody noticed that abhi is standing there and listening everything...

Naksh looks at arohi..

Naksh: toh arohi tumhe jawab chahiye tha na ki main tumhara mamu kyun nahi hun.. kyunki tum naira ki beti ho hi nahi sakthi... haan mantha hun tu sirath ki beti hai aur sirath mujhe apna bhai manthi thi.. lekin maine tujhe hamesha naira ki beti samajh kar pyar diya tha.. lekin kya kiya tune.. akshu ki ye halath kar di..

Akshu: maamu bas... tears starts flowing from her eyes..

Naksh: dekh usse.. puch usse ki uski ye halath kaise huyi.. nahi puchogi na.. patha hai kyun nahi puchegi...akshu tu bata teri ye halath kiske wajah se hai..

Akshu:woh main road pe chal rahi thi toh mera accident hogaya..

Naksh: dekh kairav.. ye hi bola tha maine..

Kairav: aap kehna kya chahthe hai mamu.. manish is growling at him as he hardly understand what is he trying to say.

Naksh: main ye dusri bar puch raha hun bol kaise hua ye accident..

Akshu: maine kaha na mamu.. main road par chal rahi..thi.. bas baath khatham...

Naksh: theek hai phir.. toh tu sach nahi bolegi.. main bolunga.. bolunga kyun dikhaunga.. sach kya hai..

He plays a video where akshu seen following a car and the car had arohi.. akshu screams in the middle of the road and she was hit a by a truck...

Everyone are disgusted with that as no one wanted her to suffer so much..

Naksh: dekh liya.. ye dukaanwale mere kaafi kareebi hai.. inhone hi akshu ko hospital pahunchaya.. aur inhone ye bhi kaha akshu ek gaadi ki peecha kar rahi thi bhag kar.. akshu ab toh sach bol de..

Arohi is scared.. she starts sweating.. abhimanyu fumes in anger as arohi tried harming akshu..

Akshu: naksh mamu. Arohi ne kuch nahi kiya..

Naksh: jhoot.. phir jhoot... kithna jhoot bolegi akshu.. goenka ne sirf tujhe ye sikhaya hai ki khud ko daav par laga kar mahan ban jao.. kyun? Tumhari maa aur nani aisi nahi thi beta woh sach ka sath dethe the.. jo unhe sahi lagtha woh karthe the..

Akshu wipes her tears.. and trembles and falls down on floor.. abhi felt like consoling her but he felt for now she needs her mamu than him

Naksh goes and sits beside her..

Naksh: maine hospital main neil ko bhagwan se pray karthe hue suna tha.. usse laga kahi arohi ka 30 lakh ki bath ki wajah se tera accident to nahi hua..

Arohi sweats more now...

Abhi regrets for not listening to neil.. he hits his fist on the wall in anger..

Manish: kaunsi 30 lakh.. akshu.. bol.. kya hua..

Arohi: kuch nahi bade...

Manish: chup akshu ko bolne de.. bahuth hua tera.. tune ye tak nahi bathaya ki akshu tere sath thi akhri bar.

Arohi keeps quiet and hopes that akshu wont confess.

Naksh plays a video.. the video contains his mother and sister teaching to kids.

"Zindagi kithna bhi mushkil ho.. sach ka sath kabhi math chodna.. jhoot jithna bhi accha lage lekin ek na ek din bikhar hi jaatha hai.. sach kadva lagega lekin usse mile phal meeta hoga"

Akshu breaks down.. she never made to listen these from her childhood..

Abhi cries along with her

Akshu: mamu.. arohi ne md ke exam ka fees ke liye 30 lakh bade papa se liye the.. mujhe ye neil ne kaha tha mehandi ke din isiliye maine uska peecha kiya tha.. mujhe jan na tha usne jhoot kyun bola..

Manish: md ka exam?

Kairav: par uska date toh nikal chuki hai na .. aru kahi tune paisa khilake toh..

Aru: nahi bhaiyya..

Naksh: haan... isne md exam paise se khareeda hai . Isko number 1 jo banna hai..

Arohi fumes in anger.. abhi never liked some one buying degree and this was a heights

Manish goes and slaps arohi on her face.

Arohi fumes and starts blaming akshu for this..

Arohi: teri wajah se hi ye sab hua hai.. tune meri mamma cheen li aur aaj ye sab.. uss din mumma ki bajaye tu kyun nahi mar gayi...

Thadddddd.........

Arohi holds her cheek in pain..

Kairav: bas aur ek shabd nahi.. bahuth hua.. isse marne ki bath kar rahi hai tu jo tujhe apne pyar ko teri thali main paros kar de rahi

Akshu looks at abhi

Akshu: bhaiyya nahi...

Kairav: aaj nahi akshu.. jo khud kurban hoke tujhe woh har kushi de rahi hai jiski tu haqdar bhi nahi hai..

Akshu looks at abhi's eyes which is turning red ...

Kairav: janthi hai akshu kithna pyar karthi hai abhimanyu se.. usse molestation case main se nikal ne ke liye usne apni izzath thak ka lihaz nahi kiya.. pure parivar ke khilf chali gayi.. aur tune kya kiya.. uske pyar ko nazarandaz karke abhi ki proposal ko haan kardiya.. ye toh tere liye abhi ko mana kar rahi thi thaki tujhe bura na lage aur tu..

Suddenly kairav sees abhimanyu..

Kairav: abhimanyu...

Naksh understood why abhi called her akshu . So again akshu was sacrificing all this time..

He is heartbroken as well as hurt.. he goes infront of manish

Abhi: i am sorry main arohi se shadi nahi kar saktha..main koi khilona nahi hun jo ye dono behne apas main baat rahe hai.. aur ye sach patha chalne ke bad agar main shadi karunga toh bhi arohi ko kabhi nahi apni patni manunga.. use sirf mera naam milega..

Bas..

Arohi: wohi kaafi hai abhimanyu... mujhe sirf tumhara naam chahiye..

Manish: arohi.. he screams ...shadi pyar ke liye karthe hai naam ke liye nahi...

Suddenly arohi sees harsh... she thinks he will handle the matter. But harsh has his own plan..

Harsh: i am sorry manish ji.. maine hamesha pyar ki kadar nahi ki.. jab maine abhi ko akshara ka operation karthe dekha mujhe samjh aya ki pyar kya hai.. jab akshu ne abhi ko aag se bachaya uska footage dekha tab samajh aya pyar kya hai...

This was another revelation for everyone...

Abhi looks at akshu... she sacrificed herself for him twice but never been vocal about it realizes that its not that simple..

Arohi was the culprit.. he regrets for not investigating much about sisters relation..

Harsh: main akshu aur abhi ki shadi karna chahtha hun...

Arohi: harsh uncle..

Manish: hame manzoor hai..

Arohi leaves in anger..

Naksh: hame tabhi manzoor hai agar akshu aur abhi ko manzoor hai toh..

Abhi: mujhe mazoor nahi hai..

Akshu looks at him..

Abhi: agar ye mere liye aise hi apni jaan khatre main dalegi toh mujhe manzoor nahi hai and he smiles..

Akshu smiles as well

They all celebrate together... and akshu and kairav thanks naksh for making them realize that they are not right..

Abhi thanks naksh

Naksh: thanks mujhe nahi unhe bolo he shows akshara and naira unhone tumhe akshu diya hai and smiles.. abhi smiles.

Abhi goes near akshu

Abhi: kya tum mujhse pyar..

Akshu: karthi hun.. khud se bhi zyada..

They both hug each other...

Akshu: ouch.. chot lagi hai...

Abhi leaves her and says sorry.. 😃

( its too long but i wanted it to complete else i will forget the plot. Maine last part skip kiya revealtion emotions and all as i already many os on revelation bore hogayi main 😴 batao kaisa tha kaafi mehnath laga ispe😁 )

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was a lovely read. Akshu finally feeling at home with her Mama and Mami. Being cared for and loved like she should have been. 🥲

You know, seeing Naksh in so many stories here, I’m actually wishing they get him back on the show. He must have been a wonderful son to Akshara-Naitik and sounds like an amazing older brother to Naira. 😍


Mission- Manifesting Naksh Singhania back as the only family Akshara deserves. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarahehsan


This was a lovely read. Akshu finally feeling at home with her Mama and Mami. Being cared for and loved like she should have been. 🥲

You know, seeing Naksh in so many stories here, I’m actually wishing they get him back on the show. He must have been a wonderful son to Akshara-Naitik and sounds like an amazing older brother to Naira. 😍


Mission- Manifesting Naksh Singhania back as the only family Akshara deserves. ❤️

to be honest i have not watched s2 its my imagination😆 i really dont know how he was 😆
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Really so good to read ..i heard a lot about naksh....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Danm it was so good, i wish same would have happened in the show..but this was so good. Atleast thw families realised the suffering and pain of Akshra and how arohi has been gaslighting her..love it🥰🥰🥰🥰

I hope really akshu becomes like her mother, i don't like such becharis yr...its such a crap in the show and bore the shit out of my mind

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Show ki writer banjao na .... its so good 😊


Loved Naksh made Akshu realize how strong and courageous was Naira her mother....


I really hope show ke actual writer Naksh ko liya hai 🤞🏻


To all current yeh rishta writers If you need ideas... story kese continue karni plz contact firewings_diya 🙏🏻

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow, lovely.

Serial me to aisa hoga nahi but I really wish someone from these families come for Akshu.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was such a nice story to read. I wish the creatives could bring Naksh back to pamper Akshu the way she deserves

Posted: 3 years ago
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That was very beautiful dear ❤️❤️. I am waiting for Naksh to be part of this marriage.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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i was searching your name to tag you 😆 i misspelled your name and i was thinking why i cant find this name .. thank you so much for reading it😊

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